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Everyone
Sep 6, 2019

by sebmojo

disposablewords posted:

I largely despise second-person perspective narration, have just walked clean away from books over it, and yet Harrow was definitely worth it.

It was worth it though it was a bit of a struggle. I mostly associate second person narration with goofy fetish porn stories. "You are tied naked to teh bed and..."

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sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk









If bones and self loathing are your kink, harrow fits that description nicely

Foxfire_
Nov 8, 2010

The real pain is books written in present tense. Those are unreadable to me

DurianGray
Dec 23, 2010

King of Fruits
I think what makes the second-person narration in Harrow work is that it's pretty obviously a character talking "to" Harrow (I'm tempted to call it "second person limited" because I can't really find any other way of describing it). It's the same as the second-person narration in The Fifth Season (Broken Earth Trilogy) by Jemisin -- it's a character speaking to/about another character. It's not an (omniscient second person?) narrator talking to you, the reader, like in the aforementioned cheesy porn stories.

I wonder if the reason people bounce off of second person so hard (or think they will) is because they're expecting/reading it as "omniscient second person" even when it's actually "second person limited" (or whatever you'd call those if there's a better terminology for it). Idk, I'm just really fascinated by how hard people react to it as a narrative device!



The pre-order listings all say September 13, 2022 (at least for the US)!

Mercury Hat
May 28, 2006

SharkTales!
Woo-oo!



Yeah, it depends on your experience with the tense, I think. It's interesting you bring up the series, because before reading The Fifth Season I had no real experience with second person that wasn't "choose your own adventure" style stories and didn't engage with the text the way I should have. By the time I read Harrow, I'd read enough to know "hey, who's speaking here?" is an important question to keep in mind.

ConfusedUs
Feb 24, 2004

Bees?
You want fucking bees?
Here you go!
ROLL INITIATIVE!!





It was the continued references to The Fifth Season that convinced me to give Harrow another chance. I loved The Fifth Season, a lot. A whole hell of a lot. And I figured if I could deal with its limited second-person-present-tense PoV, I could suck it up and deal with it in Harrow.

It took me a good 150+ pages to get used to it though. The sheer weirdness of these Locked Tomb books just compounded the issues I have with second-person-present-tense.

I'll re-read both Gideon and Harrow when Nona comes out. I'll be ready for it this time.

Everyone
Sep 6, 2019

by sebmojo

ConfusedUs posted:

It was the continued references to The Fifth Season that convinced me to give Harrow another chance. I loved The Fifth Season, a lot. A whole hell of a lot. And I figured if I could deal with its limited second-person-present-tense PoV, I could suck it up and deal with it in Harrow.

It took me a good 150+ pages to get used to it though. The sheer weirdness of these Locked Tomb books just compounded the issues I have with second-person-present-tense.

I'll re-read both Gideon and Harrow when Nona comes out. I'll be ready for it this time.

I admit that if I hadn't read Gideon, I'd probably have bounced off Harrow pretty hard and not come back. However, Gideon proved beyond doubt that sticking with the book was going to be worth whatever annoyance I had with the second-person stuff.

That said, yeah, present tense is of the Devil. The Canadian Devil.

neongrey
Feb 28, 2007

Plaguing your posts with incidental music.
yall are babies, present tense is fine it's literally just some slightly different conjugations, it's much less of a difference than a radically unusual pov mode

Collateral
Feb 17, 2010
That depends, are you talking internal narrative 2nd person present? I've had fun writing short stories like that but I imagine it would become insufferable in a longer format, or with multiple pov characters.

Sitting Here
Dec 31, 2007
People use second person all the time in casual speech. It's essentially just a displaced first person POV. In some cases it's epistolary, and obviously in Harrow it's used for a really specific reason, since it's actually one character narrating another's actions.

I finally convinced a friend to read the locked tomb books and they now hate me because nona isn't out yet, RIP. What's some top tier fan art/memes i can send them??

sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk














https://www.pinterest.nz/hadassloin/gideon-and-harrow-the-ninth/

ConfusedUs
Feb 24, 2004

Bees?
You want fucking bees?
Here you go!
ROLL INITIATIVE!!





I don't think I'll ever get tired of Gideon's sunglasses. They're pitch-perfect for her character.

MonsieurChoc
Oct 12, 2013

Every species can smell its own extinction.
I'm surprised there isn't a fanfic/fanventure of the Locked Tomb crew playing Sburb.

90s Cringe Rock
Nov 29, 2006
:gay:

MonsieurChoc posted:

I'm surprised there isn't a fanfic/fanventure of the Locked Tomb crew playing Sburb.
why do you think it's taking so long to get Nona out

MonsieurChoc
Oct 12, 2013

Every species can smell its own extinction.

90s Cringe Rock posted:

why do you think it's taking so long to get Nona out

Look, if someone uses the sentence "Mobius Double-Reacharound" to describe the game of body musical chairs...

Happy Landfill
Feb 26, 2011

I don't understand but I've also heard much worse
I kind of wonder what classpects Tamsyn would give the characters (at least the major ones)

C'mon, you know she's thought about it

MonsieurChoc
Oct 12, 2013

Every species can smell its own extinction.
Gideon could be Knight of Time, she already got the sunglasses.

mewse
May 2, 2006

https://twitter.com/eernarts/status/1482524258127564804

Happy Landfill
Feb 26, 2011

I don't understand but I've also heard much worse
This popped up on my Twitter feed

https://twitter.com/ChillyWeirdo/status/1483498155534651392?t=RY-92CaA9khx5UvT3N0JCg&s=19

Everyone
Sep 6, 2019

by sebmojo

And... pre-ordered through Amazon right now.

DurianGray
Dec 23, 2010

King of Fruits
Oh man, I hope there's a pin. I really like the tiny collection of Tor pre-order pins I've got going (it's just 3 so far).

Ccs
Feb 25, 2011


Has anyone here read Dai Dark by Q Hayashida? It's not quite necromancers in space but the aesthetic is incredibly similar. It makes me wonder if she read Gideon the Ninth and got inspired by it for her new series. Lots to do with bones and space.

Tzarnal
Dec 26, 2011

https://twitter.com/tordotcompub/status/1484541279535083524?s=21

Cover reveal next week!

Entropic
Feb 21, 2007

patriarchy sucks
https://twitter.com/catpotion/status/1485055576031707136?s=20

Entropic
Feb 21, 2007

patriarchy sucks
https://twitter.com/tordotcompub/status/1485658926431584262?s=21

platero
Sep 11, 2001

spooky, but polite, a-hole

Pillbug
https://twitter.com/TorDotComPub/status/1486021043902816256?s=20

Please let the sword be the lie

M_Gargantua
Oct 16, 2006

STOMP'N ON INTO THE POWERLINES

Exciting Lemon

M_Gargantua fucked around with this message at 20:41 on Jan 25, 2022

Entropic
Feb 21, 2007

patriarchy sucks
https://twitter.com/thylluan/status/1486072136271810564?s=20

Happy Landfill
Feb 26, 2011

I don't understand but I've also heard much worse
Please let there be a burger on the cover

platero
Sep 11, 2001

spooky, but polite, a-hole

Pillbug

Happy Landfill posted:

Please let there be a burger on the cover

yes please, we dont need a sword on there.

Happy Landfill
Feb 26, 2011

I don't understand but I've also heard much worse
Also, I genuinely can't wait for Tamsyn to post her joke-y plot synopsis that sounds like absolute nonsense but in hindsight, yeah, everything she described did actually happen.

Probably closer to the release though.

Senerio
Oct 19, 2009

Roëmænce is ælive!
I'm just gonna leave this here



I fully expect Nona to be wearing a gas mask with a burger in her hand.

mdemone
Mar 14, 2001

There's no way there can be a burger on there. Burgers do not exist in the era shown.

Wait. I totally forgot everything that happened. I better reread it again

Happy Landfill
Feb 26, 2011

I don't understand but I've also heard much worse
Memes exist. Why draw the line at burgers?

Oh god, please hurry 27th

90s Cringe Rock
Nov 29, 2006
:gay:
🗡 🍔 💀

Oenis
Mar 15, 2012
The whole book is going to be written from the POV of a burger, isn't it. Things get really heated when Nona pours some hot sauce on it in act 2.

90s Cringe Rock
Nov 29, 2006
:gay:
Gideon casually crushing a burger between her bicep and forearm, for some reason.

disposablewords
Sep 12, 2021

Someone in full skull facepaint trying to make eating a burger look dignified and failing. Possibly intentionally.

Entropic
Feb 21, 2007

patriarchy sucks
I'm gonna guess burger, because burger, and gasmask to keep Nona's identity ambiguous on the cover.

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Chernobyl Princess
Jul 31, 2009

It has long been an axiom of mine that the little things are infinitely the most important.

:siren:thunderdome winner:siren:

Burger with a sword thru it like a fancy toothpick.

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