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Thanks guys. Will try again.
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Your last name isn't 'Philips' by any chance?
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Jan 5, 2016 18:39
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I feel the red panda is the best kind of panda, wont you agree?
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Jan 5, 2016 18:44
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People with deaf studies degrees are interested in professional hand jobs
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Jan 5, 2016 18:46
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OP upon a closer read I think it is in fact you who have committed these terrible crimes and are now framing your brother as you are the only one that can interpret his words apparently. Your 'confession' is a bunch of circumstantial mumbo jumbo as far as I'm concerned, and now I think you might be going around planting evidence. Why else would you take it upon yourself to go interview people like your brother's barber and whatever to discuss how much of a shitass he is? Why are you storing bags of his blood/skin/hair? Weird man. I expect a Netflix documentary to shed some light on this because I suspect Courtney Love's involvement also.
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Jan 5, 2016 18:51
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Moridin920 posted:Your last name isn't 'Philips' by any chance? No. I can change the name if you find it distracting. blainestereo posted:I feel the red panda is the best kind of panda, wont you agree? If you go to the Austrian Zoo in Vienna, they call the red panda the "lesser panda." The greater panda is the black and white kind. Now why do you think that is?
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Jan 5, 2016 18:51
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Moridin920 posted:OP upon a closer read I think it is in fact you who have committed these terrible crimes and are now framing your brother as you are the only one that can interpret his words apparently. If this is your honest takeaway and not that my brother is a dick then you're a real piece of work.
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Jan 5, 2016 18:53
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A better place for these shorts would be in the Fiction Farm. Officially it's UNDER 1000 WORDS ONLY but there's enough leeway given that slightly-longer pieces like this are fine to post there. Saves you having to make a new thread every time. 
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Quoted story w/ critique edited out as requested I don't know what to make of this. Like, where the gently caress did the treehouse come from. Also, I bet you think you were writing something really clever but it was incredibly obvious by the 2nd paragraph that the protag was framing his brother that it was lol. also also, there's no story and there's nothing in this story that can even come close to interesting. i have a feeling you're trolling but w/e, i'm gonna give you a crit anyways. flerp fucked around with this message at 02:04 on Jan 7, 2016 |
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Jan 5, 2016 22:28
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you're starting your life of regret with a bang, I see
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Jan 6, 2016 01:00
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Broenheim posted:is this like kids acting like investigators or something? I am the DA of Warren County and I am addressing my constituents about a menace they already know: My brother Trevor.
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Jan 6, 2016 03:28
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I can't believe I read that.
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