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It's about people that make you feel like you're going crazy. It's called Gaslighting. I kind of love it. I hope you do too. edit: Song is also here on Soundcloud. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDXPChFEa18 AARO fucked around with this message at 05:24 on Jul 9, 2016 |
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Got a real coldplay feeling to this one. Nice work.
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Jun 26, 2016 09:20
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i bought a wife
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Jun 26, 2016 09:23
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just ray posted:i bought a wife Thats always a good idea Was she pinoy?
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Jun 26, 2016 09:24
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Hey, Aaro, just letting you know that you've entered in your lyrics a li'l bit incorrectly in the details section on that site. As per the highlighted word below, in the song you're singing it as "better" each time, rather than "brighter." I don't listen on the phone to you whine You came now there's something wrong since the first time you came there's been something wrong and the sun always shines brighter I don't listen on the phone to you whine
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Jun 26, 2016 10:30
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Wee Stubby Nublet posted:Hey, Aaro, just letting you know that you've entered in your lyrics a li'l bit incorrectly in the details section on that site. Welp....I guess I need to change that.... Good ear my good forums user Wee Stubby Nublet. AARO fucked around with this message at 07:07 on Jun 27, 2016 |
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Jun 27, 2016 07:05
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GOod job, can you make some other songs about stuff we like to talk about? Like cargo cult, milennial, hot dog houses, funny yellow nongmins, etc.
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Jun 27, 2016 07:22
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That cover art is cold as gently caress. Also kind and of gross IMO. Good song. Also, what if you put some bass under the piano like on Fiona Apple's first album? You know what I'm saying? Dig it. SOME PIG fucked around with this message at 07:25 on Jun 27, 2016 |
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Jun 27, 2016 07:23
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dethkon posted:That cover art is cold as gently caress. Also kind and of gross IMO. Good song. I messed around with a bass but it sounded like poo poo. I gave up and released the song. edit: There's a shortage of public domain images images to work with. I kinda love this picture though. I was looking for a picture of a boy in distress. I think it kinda goes perfectly with the lyrics. Almost like he's been driven to shooting up china white because of people loving with him. Or maybe he's just sick. Either way it works. AARO fucked around with this message at 08:06 on Jun 27, 2016 |
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Jun 27, 2016 07:43
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I just wanna hear some hard, loving, metal right now
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Jun 27, 2016 07:46
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AARO posted:Welp....I guess I need to change that.... No problem, Aaro.  I think I only noticed it because the line seemed too short to me, like as if it had been cut and missing its other part. As you were singing I found myself changing it to... Since the first time you came there's been something wrong The sky always seems brighter when you're gone I don't listen on the phone to you whine I'd much rather have the sun shine And then I found myself writing more verses in my head as you sang 'coz there are far too few words, too repetitive for a 4+ minute song, than just those three sentences that you have there, for my liking. But then I found myself wanting to cut out the auto-tune to let your voice come through more, as well as cut out most all of the synthesizers and repeat/echoes going on for the same reason - to hear your voice and let it shine through instead of all the too-busy synth tricks being so dominant throughout. It was about then that it occurred to me that I was changing your whole song, your whole song which you "kind of love" exactly how it is, and I guess I just don't much like that particular style (or maybe how you've done it) very much... lol and so told myself to just shut my mouth, to not say a word about me not liking your song, and risk maybe bumming you out a little when you love it. And that's not to say that the song is "bad" or anything, I don't mean it like that - it's just not my thing and I don't dig it is all. And me not liking it doesn't matter, it's no big deal, other people obviously do like it as you can see. So, keep keeping on and being creative, Aaro... it's good for the soul. 
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Jun 27, 2016 08:39
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I agree alot could be changed to make it more cohesive. But I do also kinda love it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDXPChFEa18
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Jun 27, 2016 08:50
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pretty cool radiohead cover op
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Jun 27, 2016 09:09
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Good Canadian Boy posted:pretty cool radiohead cover op People could say that about The Rolling Stones and The Beatles. I think it's ok to be influenced by another band. I still wrote the song. Damnit man don't kill my buzz.
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Jun 27, 2016 09:23
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AARO posted:It's about people that make you feel like you're going crazy. It's called Gaslighting. Not really my cup of tea. Have you considered doing a sort of black metal crossover thing instead?
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Jun 27, 2016 09:26
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I guess it is technically a song, yes. The rhythm is consistent; and while the melody may not be complex, it is interestingly never brought to completion.
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Jun 27, 2016 09:46
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meh voted 1
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Jun 27, 2016 09:47
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shoulda called it assbiting
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Jun 27, 2016 11:01
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Doctor Dogballs posted:shoulda called it assbiting Oh cute cause that rhymes with gaslighting. You've a rapist wit!
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Jun 27, 2016 11:13
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Falun Bong Refugee posted:I guess it is technically a song, yes. The rhythm is consistent; and while the melody may not be complex, it is interestingly never brought to completion. I don't understand this comment. How is it never "brought to completion". It has a verse and a chorus. Buy unbanning so you can tell me what the hell you mean.
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Jun 30, 2016 03:39
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huh it was not bad but not great. a 5/10 if I ever heard it. keep at it, op.
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Jun 30, 2016 03:53
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File under crap lol.
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Jun 30, 2016 05:16
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!skip
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Jun 30, 2016 05:17
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I indulged 2 minutes of it and I hate myself now. 
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Jun 30, 2016 05:18
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ClamdestineBoyster posted:I indulged 2 minutes of it and I hate myself now. You are a dick and a butt.
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Jun 30, 2016 05:37
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AARO posted:You are a dick and a butt. this but at you
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Jun 30, 2016 05:37
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Iron Prince posted:this but at you Oh poo poo ohhhhhhh shitttr
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Jun 30, 2016 05:39
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AARO posted:You are a dick and a butt. A perfect sircle. 
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I don't think you were seriously trying to spell correctly.
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