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Oct 31, 2016 03:00
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The description of the MASAI suit goes on in loving detail for another page and a half. I can post it if you want but I think I'll move on to the character intros:  *populace
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  Kaneda unsheathed his katana, the aptly named Kat's Claw. "It is time to destroy you, just like the villains in my animes," he said.
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By studying the techniques depicted in anime I have molded myself into an efficient killing machine.
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Let's meet the rest of the team:
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Captain Jones brings us up to speed
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On to Chapter 7! (Captain's Call) discreetly elbowed her in the gut.
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A stirring speech by captain Desaro! 
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this is very challenging prose
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Mozi posted:this is very challenging prose Yes I find myself struggling to read it.
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Why would they pick the ship with the busted lightspeed furnace to spearhead the attack? Why not one of their fully functional ships?
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More updates this afternoon! Don't be intimidated by the deep, intricately wound narrative just jump in at any point because it's all gold! A literary gem on every page.
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Chapter Eight: Didn't see that one coming  a traitor on board??
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Ive only made it this far and...and this is amazing.
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 I still am no closer to understanding what the Medusa Stone Cannon is or does, but I do know it can't be fired in tactical destruct mode without disabling the ship's engines.
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Trunko posted:Ive only made it this far and...and this is amazing. OSS1 (LG/SSW) Von Coleman is a smooth operator.
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Trunko posted:are the aliens really called "azians"???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? The "Azian Miao," not to be confused with Earth's Asians. From what I can gather, the Azian Miao are basically the Kilrathi if the Kilrathi were Chinese and if the Chinese were the Orcs from World of Warcraft.
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I was getting kind of a kzin vibe.
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...and the pitch! posted:I was getting kind of a kzin vibe. I'm not sure Von has read Ringworld, but I'm 98% certain he's seen the Wing Commander movie several times.
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Applewhite posted:I'm not sure Von has read Ringworld, but I'm 98% certain he's seen the Wing Commander movie several times. Fair point
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Chapter 9: Sex and Gumbo It's about time the story got back around to Von's sex life. 
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Nov 2, 2016 02:22
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 Civi Street is a shopping center on board the space aircraft carrier USS Colin Powell.
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 All those authentic cobblestones are gonna be authentic shrapnel if the ship ever gets hit with an Azian missile.
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 This dialogue is so authentic I can taste it!!
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Another Strongbow callout
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...and the pitch! posted:Another Strongbow callout It is the gumbo of beers.   I probably shouldn't poke fun at the authenticity of the dialogue here, as I have a growing certainty this is a close transcript of an actual conversation the author has had. Or at least how he wished it went.
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 Kids these past 190 years and their video games! I tell you! When is it gonna stop with those bleep bloops?
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Nov 2, 2016 02:36
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rear end donuts
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That's it for chapter 9. Chapter 10 tomorrow!
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 We must not allow radical Azian terrorism to take hold on mars.
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