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i made a poem and i hope you might read it but more importantly that you will make a poem or write some prose too. an inversion point beyond us both, sentience in universe at quarter-life still grows, the stars such points? that glows; that glows, almost the first; most slowed time scales explode, supernovas death to birth quick-life then rose, more strife though hardiness made nice once imposed selection deposed... cling tight as pushed towards roads as seem pointed to by forces barely thought, just known, less day more night, less fright but more loads, quicker and quicker towards tipping points goes, self destruct or corrupt birth body were shown, yet always less heeded to make crisis points groan, some become rebirthed as seeds as cosmic winds blow, those that reach past the thick of things make new worlds into new homes, those survived somewhat last grow, existence bodes well though most scarred, not goaded by creations of selves despite both code, knowledge best kept close while most said; owed, as later support and carried to much more quick roads, when point inversion approach expansion break point sh-t no...just balanced now balance and balance while earth still yet grows.
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When I'm Gone Please make sure the dog gets walked And do keep the place tidy, if you can Make sure you eat a proper meal every day Something nice but healthy Try not to miss me too much I'll be thinking of you all the time Not sure how long I'll be, But I hope to come home soon One more thing, honey Please don't look too closely at me It hurts to not be here I hate for you to see me when I'm gone |
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Jan 25, 2023 03:22
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wrote this about jareth (@ someone else’s suggestion) & am posting here 4 posteriority
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Jan 25, 2023 03:49
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I really like that last verse. I buried a little friend recently. Digging in stony ground, pouring rain, feverish. It was appropriately horrible! Here's to the missing 
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Jan 25, 2023 04:03
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Quadramind posted:I really like that last verse. 2 clarify jay is ok this is like a pre emptive ode or something cuz i obsess over it. didn’t mean 2 confuse and apologies
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Jan 25, 2023 04:17
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but inspired by burying my dog which made me start thinking about it hard & that was a whole other thing e: sorry everything I’m working on rn is part of some project or other & that was all I had
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Jan 25, 2023 04:18
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other people post stuff thoooo
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Jan 25, 2023 16:46
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Who has the balls to poem? |
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Jan 25, 2023 17:34
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I wrote this a while ago. I think I posted it once here. I don't really write so this is about the only thing I have. I think the comment on it before was it felt unfinished. How do I begin? Or better yet, how did I begin? How do we all begin? If I began with a word it would not be correct. I am not a derivative of a word. I am not an assembly of letters spoken out of another’s mouth. A fricative heaved over the interdental dam of creation. Carried away to a world unknown, each of these utterances, made with each breath. Maybe I began as breath. Breath breathed into a void that would not be lacking if it were not for the absence of what it had been waiting all this time for. A partnership instantaneously adjoined as they birth each other. One, the black, emptiness humming with endless unknowns and the other a flow of life, nubile and eager to touch hands with that void; always curious, slightly afraid, forever dancing an endless dervish of expansion toward an unknown and unknowable future. A future that must return from where it began when the flow ceases to emerge. A rewinding of experience near the final moments as if to bundle up and stow away the journey as a journal while making room for the next expedition to commence, bounded forward on the tales of prior travels. I am breath. This breath was breathed into existence for its duration to fuel those that need the nourishing of life as it comes in the moments between breaths. Alright, I’ve begun with a breath. Which is, by all accounts, a good thing to have happen in your life. The breathing part; very crucial. In fact so crucial I do it every time I speak. Those words cannot happen without breath first. It’s quite the chore. So much so, that I feel it should be regulated by someone. Maybe I’ll take it up... https://i.imgur.com/9jTkSUL.mp4 |
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Jan 25, 2023 17:42
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There once was an orb from byob Who couldn't write very good poetry Their lines wouldn't scan Their rhymes soft, like flan And their metaphors were all weak and wobbly, also like flan. |
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Jan 25, 2023 18:11
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Hahahaa |
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Jan 25, 2023 18:18
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Vs, that whips. I'm into breathing. It is, as you say, a great start. |
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Jan 25, 2023 18:19
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Quadramind posted:Vs, that whips. I'm into breathing. It is, as you say, a great start. ya it’s really good. Better than anything i could say about breathing
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Jan 25, 2023 19:04
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Finger Prince posted:There once was an orb from byob |
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Jan 25, 2023 19:31
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Finger Prince posted:There once was an orb from byob
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Jan 26, 2023 03:43
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Quadramind posted:When I'm Gone |
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Jan 26, 2023 03:50
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i think that i shall never see. a poem as lovely as B Y O B. |
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Jan 26, 2023 03:56
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Stoner Sloth posted:i think that i shall never see. a poem as lovely as B Y O B. 
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Jan 26, 2023 04:03
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Through glittering gleams the trovel jingled, Rumbleclatter, sparkle and trinket clash, Lay steeped and splendor in a heap mingled, And empiled amongst her cache
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Jan 26, 2023 04:21
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treasure bear posted:Through glittering gleams the trovel jingled, That's chewy! |
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Jan 26, 2023 04:43
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Ya, I like it. The treasure bear vibes to word count ratio is off the charts. Makes me eager to know more about the treasure bear, what kind of jams they get in to, what motivates them, how much treasure have they got, if anyone ever tries to glean that treasure. |
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Jan 27, 2023 20:16
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Quadramind posted:Ya, I like it. The treasure bear vibes to word count ratio is off the charts. I think they have a website that documents their treasure.
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Jan 28, 2023 00:33
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Quadramind posted:Ya, I like it. The treasure bear vibes to word count ratio is off the charts. rear end-penny posted:I think they have a website that documents their treasure. pls give generously to the Bears Who Need More Treasure Foundation |
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Jan 28, 2023 03:01
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I found it |
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