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DrFrankenStrudel
May 14, 2012

Where am I? I don't even know anymore...
IIRC Butcher said in an interview that Codex Alera was the product of an internet forum argument over whether or not a skilled writer to write a good book on a lame premise. The other guy bet Jim he couldn't write a book that way and Jim took the bet. The guy chose "a cross between the lost Roman legion and Pokemon".

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Elector_Nerdlingen
Sep 27, 2004



DrFrankenStrudel posted:

IIRC Butcher said in an interview that Codex Alera was the product of an internet forum argument over whether or not a skilled writer to write a good book on a lame premise. The other guy bet Jim he couldn't write a book that way and Jim took the bet. The guy chose "a cross between the lost Roman legion and Pokemon".

I believe the whole thing was Jim saying "actually, I need two lame premises".

Silento
Feb 16, 2012

Of course, the contest was rigged from the start. What's lame about Pokemon??? :wooper:

Vateke
Jun 29, 2010

Silento posted:

Of course, the contest was rigged from the start. What's lame about Pokemon??? :wooper:

It wasn't really about lame ideas. It was meant to be cliche ideas. Ones that have been done to death. Pokemon got a ton of clones, and the lost roman legion was apparently done a lot as well

ConfusedUs
Feb 24, 2004

Bees?
You want fucking bees?
Here you go!
ROLL INITIATIVE!!





There's a YouTube link of Butcher telling that story in the second post of the tread.

Wolpertinger
Feb 16, 2011
I just finished reading Eliott James' Charming which was a pretty strong urban fantasy debut - The main character is from a long line of essentially monster-hunters that are part of an order of knights that was geased/cursed for them and their descendants to keep the existence of the supernatural a secret, and to kill anything that might compromise that secrecy. Unfortunately, his mother was bitten by a werewolf when she was pregnant, and she gave birth and died from her first transformation on the full moon, which is extremely traumatic and often fatal.

Since normally werewolves can't have kids, as the whole transforms-into-a-wolf-on-the-full-moon bit for the child and/or the parent tends to result in fatal complications for both mother and child, nobody knew what would happen with him as they raised him. However, despite his mother he was apparently normal, and raised in the same order of knights under close supervision - until he got sick from food poisoning in his twenties which apparently kicked the whole 'werewolf' thing into gear, and had his order try to execute him for being an abomination and a threat to the whole secret, leading him to run off and hide his identity, moving from place to place as they constantly hunt him down. However, he still inherited the whole curse bit, which is incompatible with the werewolf bit, so he isn't entirely a werewolf and doesn't transform on the full moon, though he still has their traits.

It was actually pretty good for an urban fantasy debut, and despite some forgivable flaws considering it's a debut, I'm interested in seeing where it will go next.

RosaParksOfDip
May 11, 2009
edit: this doesn't even need to be here.

torgeaux
Dec 31, 2004
I serve...

Wolpertinger posted:

I just finished reading Eliott James' Charming which was a pretty strong urban fantasy debut - The main character is from a long line of essentially monster-hunters that are part of an order of knights that was geased/cursed for them and their descendants to keep the existence of the supernatural a secret, and to kill anything that might compromise that secrecy. Unfortunately, his mother was bitten by a werewolf when she was pregnant, and she gave birth and died from her first transformation on the full moon, which is extremely traumatic and often fatal.

Since normally werewolves can't have kids, as the whole transforms-into-a-wolf-on-the-full-moon bit for the child and/or the parent tends to result in fatal complications for both mother and child, nobody knew what would happen with him as they raised him. However, despite his mother he was apparently normal, and raised in the same order of knights under close supervision - until he got sick from food poisoning in his twenties which apparently kicked the whole 'werewolf' thing into gear, and had his order try to execute him for being an abomination and a threat to the whole secret, leading him to run off and hide his identity, moving from place to place as they constantly hunt him down. However, he still inherited the whole curse bit, which is incompatible with the werewolf bit, so he isn't entirely a werewolf and doesn't transform on the full moon, though he still has their traits.

It was actually pretty good for an urban fantasy debut, and despite some forgivable flaws considering it's a debut, I'm interested in seeing where it will go next.

Unless the book improves massively as you go, I have to disagree. The thing reads like a book written in/ for a creative writing class. The protagonist is so clichéd. The story hits every Urban fantasy cliche in the first 50 pages and not in a good way.

Wolpertinger
Feb 16, 2011

torgeaux posted:

Unless the book improves massively as you go, I have to disagree. The thing reads like a book written in/ for a creative writing class. The protagonist is so clichéd. The story hits every Urban fantasy cliche in the first 50 pages and not in a good way.

You say in the Dresden Files thread, having read Storm Front and Fool Moon. I was rolling my eyes a bit in the beginning but I liked it more than many debuts despite the cliche bits since it is just a first book. Then again, i'm not really looking for high class literature with my urban fantasy. :v:. And maybe I've ran into a lot worse urban fantasy than you, but the protagonist doesn't really seem that cliche considering he's not a private investigator or detective or finder or anything of the sort - he's just a drifter that knows no one in there area and as such doesn't have any old connections or friends to call upon, does not have a wisecracking magical sidekick/familiar of some sort.. I dunno, maybe I'm just not seeing it. :shobon:

Wolpertinger fucked around with this message at 12:39 on Oct 13, 2013

The Puppy Bowl
Jan 31, 2013

A dog, in the house.

*woof*
Finished Cursor's Fury and all around pretty decent. The romantic plots are going to kill me though. I was pretty sure from the first third of book 1 on that Tavi is the Princeps son. Now I'm positive.

Grundulum
Feb 28, 2006
When in the series are you explicitly told who Tavi's father is? I remember who it is but forget when it's revealed.

ConfusedUs
Feb 24, 2004

Bees?
You want fucking bees?
Here you go!
ROLL INITIATIVE!!





Grundulum posted:

When in the series are you explicitly told who Tavi's father is? I remember who it is but forget when it's revealed.

Book 4 at the end.

torgeaux
Dec 31, 2004
I serve...

Wolpertinger posted:

You say in the Dresden Files thread, having read Storm Front and Fool Moon. I was rolling my eyes a bit in the beginning but I liked it more than many debuts despite the cliche bits since it is just a first book. Then again, i'm not really looking for high class literature with my urban fantasy. :v:. And maybe I've ran into a lot worse urban fantasy than you, but the protagonist doesn't really seem that cliche considering he's not a private investigator or detective or finder or anything of the sort - he's just a drifter that knows no one in there area and as such doesn't have any old connections or friends to call upon, does not have a wisecracking magical sidekick/familiar of some sort.. I dunno, maybe I'm just not seeing it. :shobon:

Yeah, maybe the second book will be readable, but this one isn't.

Part of secret society that polices the magic world? Check. On the outs with said society, who hunt him now? Check. Faster, stronger, better, super trained with weapons, great looking, practically invulnerable? Check. BUT...the first person he meets can somehow, somehow, penetrate his protection! It's shocking!! Oh, and love interest with extremely hot woman, literally the first person introduced in the book after the protagonist? Check. But, she's seeing someone else? Who hates our protagonist? Check, check, check.

torgeaux fucked around with this message at 01:05 on Oct 16, 2013

Wolpertinger
Feb 16, 2011

torgeaux posted:

Yeah, maybe the second book will be readable, but this one isn't.

Part of secret society that polices the magic world? Check. On the outs with said society, who hunt him now? Check. Faster, stronger, better, super trained with weapons, great looking, practically invulnerable? Check. BUT...the first person he meets can somehow, somehow, penetrate his protection! It's shocking!!
Eh? He's not invulnerable, or close to it, and nobody 'penetrates his protection' so I'm not quite sure what you're talking about there. He's part of the whole knightly order that's just as/more badass as he minus the half-werewolf poo poo. Hell, the female lead is considerably more of a badass than he is.

quote:

Oh, and love interest with extremely hot woman, literally the first person introduced in the book after the protagonist? Check. But, she's seeing someone else? Who hates our protagonist? Check, check, check.
This is the part that had me rolling my eyes at first, I was afraid it was going to be sleazy or sexist but it all ends up being more reasonable than I expected. Hell, the 'romance' in early dresden files was /considerably/ creepier.

It's not a perfect book by any means, it was just an enjoyable enough ride and I wanted to just throw it out there - I've read a lot of worse debuts that ended up being the start of a fun series (like Dresden Files :P). Not everything can be a Rivers of London.

Wolpertinger fucked around with this message at 04:04 on Oct 16, 2013

Decius
Oct 14, 2005

Ramrod XTreme

torgeaux posted:

Faster, stronger, better, super trained with weapons, great looking, practically invulnerable? Check.

Dresden is pretty much exactly the opposite of what you just described. Literally the opposite in every single thing you named. Although he does indeed run fast (or at least can run quite a long time), since that's the one thing he does train.

quote:

BUT...the first person he meets can somehow, somehow, penetrate his protection! It's shocking!! Oh, and love interest with extremely hot woman, literally the first person introduced in the book after the protagonist? Check. But, she's seeing someone else? Who hates our protagonist? Check, check, check.

Uh, it's pretty much a cliche to say so, but read on, it's far, far more complex than you think it is. Same with the situation with Morgan or the White Council.

torgeaux
Dec 31, 2004
I serve...

Decius posted:

Dresden is pretty much exactly the opposite of what you just described. Literally the opposite in every single thing you named. Although he does indeed run fast (or at least can run quite a long time), since that's the one thing he does train.


Uh, it's pretty much a cliche to say so, but read on, it's far, far more complex than you think it is. Same with the situation with Morgan or the White Council.

You know we're not talking about Dresden' right?

As for invulnerable, I was referring to the, "I can't be charmed/mind controlled/mind read" but somehow she seems to do so anyway!," which is a huge cliche.

Decius
Oct 14, 2005

Ramrod XTreme

torgeaux posted:

You know we're not talking about Dresden' right?

Oh, sorry, didn't realise that, no. :)
Explains why it seemed incredibly odd to describe him this way.

Decius fucked around with this message at 12:43 on Oct 16, 2013

Mortanis
Dec 28, 2005

It's your father's lightsaber. This is the weapon of a Jedi Knight.
College Slice
The slightly annoying thing about Alera and Tavi is that his journey is explicitly spelled out in the titles of books 2+. It's a logical progression, but I came to the series just after they'd all been finished up and bought them all in a single go. I had no idea what the titles meant before I read the series, but by the time I was starting book 2 on my Kindle, seeing the other titles there, waiting, gave me a pretty good idea of what was up.

chellesandcheese
Jul 12, 2005

Mortanis posted:

The slightly annoying thing about Alera and Tavi is that his journey is explicitly spelled out in the titles of books 2+. It's a logical progression, but I came to the series just after they'd all been finished up and bought them all in a single go. I had no idea what the titles meant before I read the series, but by the time I was starting book 2 on my Kindle, seeing the other titles there, waiting, gave me a pretty good idea of what was up.

In retrospect, I can see how that would be annoying. Reading them as they were released though it wasn't really that obvious until you got past the first 3-4 books and you found out who his father was anyway. Then it really didn't matter that much.

torgeaux
Dec 31, 2004
I serve...

Decius posted:

Oh, sorry, didn't realise that, no. :)
Explains why it seemed incredibly odd to describe him this way.

Yeah, if I read that discussion and thought it was about Dresden, I'd have to conclude the reader was drunk.

DrFrankenStrudel
May 14, 2012

Where am I? I don't even know anymore...
Anyone else watch the Fan-movie they sent out on the Dresden Files mailing list?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tFlsqnpIjQ

It takes place sometime between Proven Guilty and White Night. I've only had the chance to watch part of it but it's not half bad though the reverbs from the crummy recording equipment throws it off a bit, well that and the actress playing Molly looks older than Harry's actor does.. but the actress playing Murphy does a good job with the character.

Lyer
Feb 4, 2008

I recently got into these books and yeah, it's a poo poo ton more fun than it really should be. Do the quality of the books drop later on at all?

Mr.48
May 1, 2007

Lyer posted:

I recently got into these books and yeah, it's a poo poo ton more fun than it really should be. Do the quality of the books drop later on at all?

Sort of. The quality of writing improves but Butchers seems to be stuck one-upping the bad guys with every book and having to increase Dresden's capabilities to match them. Its the same trap the Malazan books fell into. I call it the Saturday-morning cartoon syndrome.

DrFrankenStrudel
May 14, 2012

Where am I? I don't even know anymore...

Lyer posted:

I recently got into these books and yeah, it's a poo poo ton more fun than it really should be. Do the quality of the books drop later on at all?

They actually get better as Butcher becomes a better writer and the characters continue to develop with multi-book plot lines coming together for some epic scenes. The "case-book" formula has shifted somewhat in the last couple books (which isn't a bad thing) since Harry's still dealing with the repercussions/fallout from Changes but that same quirky charm and "fun" factor is still there.

Zola
Jul 22, 2005

What do you mean "impossible"? You're so
cruel, Roger Smith...

DrFrankenStrudel posted:

Anyone else watch the Fan-movie they sent out on the Dresden Files mailing list?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tFlsqnpIjQ

It takes place sometime between Proven Guilty and White Night. I've only had the chance to watch part of it but it's not half bad though the reverbs from the crummy recording equipment throws it off a bit, well that and the actress playing Molly looks older than Harry's actor does.. but the actress playing Murphy does a good job with the character.

I thought it was well done, especially for a fan film.

BrooklynBruiser
Aug 20, 2006
Finally read all 112 pages of this thread (Took me like 4 days). My girlfriend got me to read Dresden earlier this year and cackled evilly at the tortures Changes put me through. It's a damned shame the December 3rd date for Skin Game was wrong - I need more Dresden, and December 3rd is 2 days after my birthday. Woulda been nice.

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Wittgen
Oct 13, 2012

We have decided to decline your offer of a butt kicking.

Lyer posted:

I recently got into these books and yeah, it's a poo poo ton more fun than it really should be. Do the quality of the books drop later on at all?

I'd say it depends on what quality you're looking for. In terms of overarching plotlines, characterization, and world building, they get better. In terms of the mysteries, they get considerably worse.

The first half of the series or so, there was a satisfying "A Ha" moment around the climax. I figured out the mystery in the last book a couple hundred pages faster than Harry.

BrooklynBruiser
Aug 20, 2006
I just started a re-read. I still really like Storm Front, but man is it obvious that it was Butcher's first book.

The Puppy Bowl
Jan 31, 2013

A dog, in the house.

*woof*
Just started book five and I've really enjoyed the series thus far. Hard to imagine the whole series getting wrapped up in the next two books, especially considering how narrow the scope of the last two had been.

Grundulum
Feb 28, 2006

The Puppy Bowl posted:

Just started book five and I've really enjoyed the series thus far. Hard to imagine the whole series getting wrapped up in the next two books, especially considering how narrow the scope of the last two had been.
I'm not sure if you're talking about the Dresden Files or some other series. There are 14 (15?) Dresden books already, with something like 7 more planned.

Just Another Lurker
May 1, 2009

Anyone else reading the Descent series by SM Reine?

Sword wielding exorcist annoying demons & angels alike, picked up the first three books for free and the rest are under £3 per book so my money pinching brain took over.... anything to keep my brain going on nightshift. :)

sharknado slashfic
Jun 24, 2011

I'm rereading the series (well, relistening) and man it's amazing how much of the story I've forgotten, since Cold Days is the only book really fresh in my mind.

Some Pinko Commie
Jun 9, 2009

CNC! Easy as 1️⃣2️⃣3️⃣!

Grundulum posted:

I'm not sure if you're talking about the Dresden Files or some other series. There are 14 (15?) Dresden books already, with something like 7 more planned.

I almost think he's talking about Alera, but IIRC things got pretty huge in scope (though the actual amount of fucks I gave about what I was reading rapidly decreased as the series went on and it eventually became a matter of just finishing the series).

Virigoth
Apr 28, 2009

Corona rules everything around me
C.R.E.A.M. get the virus
In the ICU y'all......



Wade Wilson posted:

I almost think he's talking about Alera, but IIRC things got pretty huge in scope (though the actual amount of fucks I gave about what I was reading rapidly decreased as the series went on and it eventually became a matter of just finishing the series).

I felt the same way.

The Puppy Bowl
Jan 31, 2013

A dog, in the house.

*woof*
I was referring to Alera. By scope I meant the focus was left on three major plot points while 5 or so just seemed to exist in the background. Now that those points are being explored I can't see how they can be adequately resolved in the space allotted the final two books without severely condensing the action.

jivjov
Sep 13, 2007

But how does it taste? Yummy!
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The Puppy Bowl posted:

I was referring to Alera. By scope I meant the focus was left on three major plot points while 5 or so just seemed to exist in the background. Now that those points are being explored I can't see how they can be adequately resolved in the space allotted the final two books without severely condensing the action.

Well, the last two books are a good deal larger than the first 4, so there's more room for stuff too.

The Puppy Bowl
Jan 31, 2013

A dog, in the house.

*woof*
Princep's Fury sure isn't. It's ten or so pages shorter than Academ's Fury.

jivjov
Sep 13, 2007

But how does it taste? Yummy!
Dinosaur Gum

The Puppy Bowl posted:

Princep's Fury sure isn't. It's ten or so pages shorter than Academ's Fury.

Huh...guess I'm misremembering then.

BrooklynBruiser
Aug 20, 2006
I just finished Fool Moon on my reread - I honestly don't get how people think it's worse than Storm Front.

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TenaciousJ
Dec 31, 2008

Clown move bro

BrooklynBruiser posted:

I just finished Fool Moon on my reread - I honestly don't get how people think it's worse than Storm Front.

My two complaints were the werewolf sex and Dresden's relationship with Murphy. Murphy's reactions to Dresden seemed a bit too extreme for most of the book.

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