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Soothing Vapors
Mar 26, 2006

Associate Justice Lena "Kegels" Dunham: An uncool thought to have: 'is that guy walking in the dark behind me a rapist? Never mind, he's Asian.
Ctrl+F'd Annakie in the Leper's Colony. Zero results. MODS LIED

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Jerusalem
May 20, 2004

Would you be my new best friends?

Toxxupation posted:

i think the tardis is p neat and cool and its p neat and cool that it's alive because that means its a blue phonebox wooden time travellin spaceship that's alive an junk and thats p keen

Peachy keen AND neato :hfive:

surc
Aug 17, 2004

MikeJF posted:

Just because something is sad does not excuse it from having to be narratively satisfying.

So you're saying it's badly written because of the fact that... you didn't like it? As a response to somebody pointing out that the writer's goal (It's sad what's happening to donna, feel sad about it) seemed to have been pretty much exactly achieved?

NieR Occomata
Jan 18, 2009

Glory to Mankind.

Zaggitz posted:

One more episode until the show comes to you in the rain and tries to apologize about how it's changed for the better and doesn't drink anymore.

Oh

Bobulus
Jan 28, 2007

Toxx, here is a Sad Tennant in the Rain to commemorate our difference of opinion on this episode.




What I found so frustrating about this episode is how much of a hypocrite Ten comes off as. He acts like he's way better than, say, Nine was, claiming Rose helped him improve, and he looks down on Clone-Ten for killing the Daleks, but he look at the awful poo poo he pulled on the Family, for example. And what's wrong with killing Daleks?

Arsenic Lupin
Apr 12, 2012

This particularly rapid💨 unintelligible 😖patter💁 isn't generally heard🧏‍♂️, and if it is🤔, it doesn't matter💁.


surc posted:

So you're saying it's badly written because of the fact that... you didn't like it? As a response to somebody pointing out that the writer's goal (It's sad what's happening to donna, feel sad about it) seemed to have been pretty much exactly achieved?

Case 1: Donna has a choice between her own safety and the fate of the world, chooses the fate of the world.
Me: sad. Probable sniffles. "RTD really pulled it off."

Case 2: Donna saves the world, then the Doctor mindwipes her while she's begging him not to. Fortunately, Rose is happy.
Me: furious. Probable saying of naughty words. "Wow, that was cheap."

It's the difference between Lear going mad, surfacing from the madness, and then seeing Cordelia die, versus Lear going mad, Cordelia talking to him as he dies, and then Edgar coming on, tripping on a rock, and twisting an ankle. RTD messed up the dismount.

Tempo 119
Apr 17, 2006

surc posted:

So you're saying it's badly written because of the fact that... you didn't like it? As a response to somebody pointing out that the writer's goal (It's sad what's happening to donna, feel sad about it) seemed to have been pretty much exactly achieved?

No, that's definitely not what anybody's saying.

g0del
Jan 9, 2001



Fun Shoe

Arsenic Lupin posted:

Didn't Romana offer to fix it, and he indignantly refused?
I don't know about that, but Six 'fixed' it and it kept turning into random things that didn't blend in at all.

docbeard
Jul 19, 2011

What a time to start reading this thread!

I think what happened to Donna is absolutely tragic and miserable, a fate undeserved by a character who deserved so much better. I don't think it's bad writing at all, I don't think it undoes the wonderful development of her character any more than someone's death (fictional or real) means that their life was without meaning.

I think the Rose/Ten Again thing is okay, if a little optimistic in terms of "oh I'm sure this unstable variant of a renegade Time Lord won't go completely insane left to his own devices, it'll be fine." I'm not convinced it's very narratively satisfying, and felt more like "oh we have this extra Doctor clone to stash somewhere, let's make him Rose's problem". (Actually, I think I would have unabashedly loved it if that's what Ten had done, complete with them both reacting all NOW HOLD ON JUST A MINUTE.) I don't mind at all Rose getting a generally positive ending, though. Someone probably should.

Mostly what I love about this episode, though, the thing that sticks with me when the narrative details inevitably fade as they do when I haven't seen something in a while, is that very last scene of the Doctor starting up the TARDIS. For all the infamy of that crying in the rain image, his OH JUST ABSOLUTELY gently caress THE WHOLE ENTIRE UNIVERSE expression when he's flying off alone, having lost or left behind everyone he's ever cared about a-loving-gain, is what really gets me.

Arsenic Lupin
Apr 12, 2012

This particularly rapid💨 unintelligible 😖patter💁 isn't generally heard🧏‍♂️, and if it is🤔, it doesn't matter💁.


docbeard posted:

For all the infamy of that crying in the rain image, his OH JUST ABSOLUTELY gently caress THE WHOLE ENTIRE UNIVERSE expression when he's flying off alone, having lost or left behind everyone he's ever cared about a-loving-gain, is what really gets me.
This sums up everything I hate about the worst excesses of Ten: Donna gets rewound, but it's all about his pain. When bad things happen to other people, his emotional focus is often on how much this hurts him, not on how hard it is on the victim. The show can be about the Doctor without making every single dramatic beat about the Doctor's emotional reaction.

Filox
Oct 4, 2014

Grimey Drawer

Arsenic Lupin posted:

This sums up everything I hate about the worst excesses of Ten: Donna gets rewound, but it's all about his pain. When bad things happen to other people, his emotional focus is often on how much this hurts him, not on how hard it is on the victim. The show can be about the Doctor without making every single dramatic beat about the Doctor's emotional reaction.

But in this case, Donna has been rewound. She has no pain. In this instance, it's probably not unjustified because they can hardly show Donna being heartbroken after she's had her memory wiped.

I suppose they could have shown Wilf and Sylvia sitting around looking pained after the Doctor left, but other people would find a reason to complain about that.

surc
Aug 17, 2004

Tempo 119 posted:

No, that's definitely not what anybody's saying.

Cool, thanks MikeJF. I'm glad you could clear up your point for me. I mean, can you imagine if somebody had jumped in to put words in your mouth instead of letting you respond and actually clarify what you were saying with that statement?

:rolleyes:

"Narratively Satisfying" can range from being a complete bullshit phrase meaning "I didn't like it", to being intended as all hyper-academic-look-at-us-critique-this-art (It's still a bullshit phrase though :ssh:). MikeJF responded to a post which basically said "A lot of people seem to miss that this was intended to be sad" which was in response to a lot of people saying it was a bad ending because it was so unfair what happened to Donna. In MikeJF's response, he said that being sad doesn't mean it doesn't have to be narratively satisfying. In the context of the post he was responding to and the ones *that* post was responding to, it seemed like he might imply that the original people complaining were right instead of the person defending the story/writing was right, and that it's bad because it's unfair what happens to Donna. I totally disagree with that point, and if in fact MikeJF was saying "They're right, and it's a lovely ending by virtue of being sad", I think that is a dumb thing to say. If it is not what he meant, I would be interested in hearing what he actually meant.

Which is why I asked him, and not you.

Bicyclops
Aug 27, 2004

Sadness sort of has to have a point, though. I'm not sure what we're supposed to feel, besides just sad, about a person losing all of their agency in the form of forced amnesia as a sacrifice to save the world. I guess it sort of hammers Davros's point home, about the Doctor using people as pawns and being self-righteous about it, but that's a really sour note to end a traditionally pretty hopeful show on.

I guess if they'd spent a little more time exploring it as a choice for Donna (dying after having saved the entire Universe and seeing a host of incredible things or living a full but banal life without her memories), it could have been meaningful but, again, probably a little too dark for a couple of episodes as bombastic as these two were.

DoctorWhat
Nov 18, 2011

A little privacy, please?
I mean, the other Big Issue with Donna's fate is that it was involuntary - the Doctor ignored her desires to "burn up", then invaded and manipulated her mind in order to keep her alive. There are questions of medical ethics, bodily autonomy, and yes, even (coded and subtextual) "rape culture" here.

I know that accusations of gendered abuse are a bit... iffy, especially coming from someone whose favorite Doctor starred in The Twin Dilemma, but it's still a scene where a Dude ignores a woman's repeated verbal protests and defies her bodily autonomy "for her own good". And then we're asked to sympathize with the Dude.

Burkion
May 10, 2012

by Fluffdaddy

DoctorWhat posted:

I mean, the other Big Issue with Donna's fate is that it was involuntary - the Doctor ignored her desires to "burn up", then invaded and manipulated her mind in order to keep her alive. There are questions of medical ethics, bodily autonomy, and yes, even (coded and subtextual) "rape culture" here.

I know that accusations of gendered abuse are a bit... iffy, especially coming from someone whose favorite Doctor starred in The Twin Dilemma, but it's still a scene where a Dude ignores a woman's repeated verbal protests and defies her bodily autonomy "for her own good". And then we're asked to sympathize with the Dude.

You know, when it comes to saving her loving life, and she LITERALLY isn't in her right mind due to it being a hybrid of minds?

I think I'm going to safely side with the Doctor on this one. Just wish he could have done something else.

Bicyclops
Aug 27, 2004

I think if we consider real world analogues or those philosophy textbook what-if scenarios sci fi loves so much, I lean more toward considering it a commentary on involuntary medication for people with mental health issues than gendered stuff, but that's just the problem: if you consider it on any deep level, it's uncomfortable and clumsy at best, and if you want to take the "sometimes a cigar is just a cigar" interpretation, it's like "Well, okay, but then why is this pointlessly sad ending in the middle of my show about the magic spaceman who made a copy of himself for his ex-girlfriend to pal around with?"

MrL_JaKiri
Sep 23, 2003

A bracing glass of carrot juice!

surc posted:

"Narratively Satisfying" can range from being a complete bullshit phrase meaning "I didn't like it", to being intended as all hyper-academic-look-at-us-critique-this-art (It's still a bullshit phrase though :ssh:). MikeJF responded to a post which basically said "A lot of people seem to miss that this was intended to be sad" which was in response to a lot of people saying it was a bad ending because it was so unfair what happened to Donna. In MikeJF's response, he said that being sad doesn't mean it doesn't have to be narratively satisfying. In the context of the post he was responding to and the ones *that* post was responding to, it seemed like he might imply that the original people complaining were right instead of the person defending the story/writing was right, and that it's bad because it's unfair what happens to Donna. I totally disagree with that point, and if in fact MikeJF was saying "They're right, and it's a lovely ending by virtue of being sad", I think that is a dumb thing to say. If it is not what he meant, I would be interested in hearing what he actually meant.

If only there was a bit of commentary on this above the post you did your really needlessly condescending reply to, wouldn't that be something ya jackass

2house2fly
Nov 14, 2012

You did a super job wrapping things up! And I'm not just saying that because I have to!

Bicyclops posted:

Sadness sort of has to have a point, though. I'm not sure what we're supposed to feel, besides just sad, about a person losing all of their agency in the form of forced amnesia as a sacrifice to save the world. I guess it sort of hammers Davros's point home, about the Doctor using people as pawns and being self-righteous about it, but that's a really sour note to end a traditionally pretty hopeful show on.

I guess if they'd spent a little more time exploring it as a choice for Donna (dying after having saved the entire Universe and seeing a host of incredible things or living a full but banal life without her memories), it could have been meaningful but, again, probably a little too dark for a couple of episodes as bombastic as these two were.
The point of it is that it's not a total victory, it's bittersweet because the person who saved the universe doesn't get to remember it, or Frodo has to go across the sea, or Darth Vader dies redeeming himself. How many heroic narratives don't have a happy ending that comes with a price?

As for having her memory erased, the vibe I got was that the Doctor believes it's better to live a boring life than die in an exciting way. Do no harm, and all that.

I actually don't like Donna's ending but that's in retrospect and for spoiler related reasons.

MrL_JaKiri
Sep 23, 2003

A bracing glass of carrot juice!

2house2fly posted:

The point of it is that it's not a total victory, it's bittersweet because the person who saved the universe doesn't get to remember it, or Frodo has to go across the sea, or Darth Vader dies redeeming himself. How many heroic narratives don't have a happy ending that comes with a price?

How many of those also have one of the characters losing nothing and getting everything they wanted?

NieR Occomata
Jan 18, 2009

Glory to Mankind.

Would you guys rather have an update this weekend, then two for the next two weeks (1-2-2) or two updates next week and three the following (0-2-3)

Also since oxx pointed it out in private we're temp switching to weekend updates over mon/fri updates just because the eps are so long

NieR Occomata
Jan 18, 2009

Glory to Mankind.

MrL_JaKiri posted:

How many of those also have one of the characters losing nothing and getting everything they wanted?

Han Solo makes it out of the original trilogy pretty well

thexerox123
Aug 17, 2007

Toxxupation posted:

Would you guys rather have an update this weekend, then two for the next two weeks (1-2-2) or two updates next week and three the following (0-2-3)

My vote is definitely on 1-2-2!

Burkion
May 10, 2012

by Fluffdaddy

Toxxupation posted:

Would you guys rather have an update this weekend, then two for the next two weeks (1-2-2) or two updates next week and three the following (0-2-3)

Also since oxx pointed it out in private we're temp switching to weekend updates over mon/fri updates just because the eps are so long

The latter. For

pacing reasons.

Issaries
Sep 15, 2008

"At the end of the day
We are all human beings
My father once told me that
The world has no borders"

1-2-2 would maximize your suffering, so that.

Also devoting one weekend for 2-parter is better than cramming a 3rd episode with them.

2house2fly
Nov 14, 2012

You did a super job wrapping things up! And I'm not just saying that because I have to!

MrL_JaKiri posted:

How many of those also have one of the characters losing nothing and getting everything they wanted?
well I'm not about to defend Billie Piper getting her own pet Doctor. It does serve to get the clone Doctor out of the plot neatly though, so I'm OK with it on that basis. Also there's a final shot of Rose and the clone looking at each other seriously, and I can kind of imagine that they're hearing The Sound Of Silence in that moment.

cargohills
Apr 18, 2014

Toxxupation posted:

Would you guys rather have an update this weekend, then two for the next two weeks (1-2-2) or two updates next week and three the following (0-2-3)

Another vote for 1-2-2.

Arsenic Lupin
Apr 12, 2012

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Toxxupation posted:

Would you guys rather have an update this weekend, then two for the next two weeks (1-2-2) or two updates next week and three the following (0-2-3)

I prefer 1-2-2, so that way I get at least one piece of delicious candy goontears every weekend.

SirSamVimes
Jul 21, 2008

~* Challenge *~


1-2-2 spreads them out nicely.

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007
Confirmed for 1-2-2, if Occ had brought this up to me first I'd have told him it wasn't even an option. Trying to get out three of these things in one weekend would've given me a nosebleed anyway.

Tempo 119
Apr 17, 2006

surc posted:

Cool, thanks MikeJF. I'm glad you could clear up your point for me. I mean, can you imagine if somebody had jumped in to put words in your mouth instead of letting you respond and actually clarify what you were saying with that statement?

The answer to "So What You're Saying Is...? :smug:" is always the same. I was just trying to save time (like my hero Doctor Who).


Edit: I mean if you were really just looking for elaboration then of course I apologise. I'm not here looking to rile anyone up :)

Tempo 119 fucked around with this message at 20:07 on Nov 14, 2014

Regy Rusty
Apr 26, 2010

1-2-2 for sure. The pacing is best that way.

E: Oh Oxx made this vote irrelevant anyway.

surc
Aug 17, 2004

MrL_JaKiri posted:

If only there was a bit of commentary on this above the post you did your really needlessly condescending reply to, wouldn't that be something ya jackass
Hahah yeah totally man, I'll just read the reviews and stop trying to actually discuss opinions on the show in the thread, as that's clearly my place, sorry to have overstepped :)


Tempo 119 posted:

The answer to "So What You're Saying Is...? :smug:" is always the same. I was just trying to save time (like my hero Doctor Who).


Edit: I mean if you were really just looking for elaboration then of course I apologise. I'm not here looking to rile anyone up :)

I'm a snarky guy, and I think saying "narratively satisfying" is generally a way to say "I didn't like it" but sound more credible and avoid having to give specific reasons, which certainly is why I took the tone I did. I was actually looking for clarification as to what MikeJF meant though, and was hoping he would write some (probably with responsive levels of snark) post explaining in more detail either the reasons he didn't like it, or clarifying that he meant something other than what I thought by narratively satisfying.



Also in support of 1-2-2 although it looks like it's already set that way.

Bicyclops
Aug 27, 2004

2house2fly posted:

The point of it is that it's not a total victory, it's bittersweet because the person who saved the universe doesn't get to remember it, or Frodo has to go across the sea, or Darth Vader dies redeeming himself. How many heroic narratives don't have a happy ending that comes with a price?



Those have more of a point by my thinking, though. Frodo's story is more like an average Who companion's in that he has difficulty adjusting to his more mundane life and goes off on another adventure (he doesn't have to go to Elf Heaven, he's just granted passage on the ship and agrees). It's a common facet of escapist fantasy story and serves several purposes, and in Tolkien, although the author would probably deny it, I think it's about adjusting to post-war life.

Darth Vader redeeming himself is a villain's redemption story, which is a common one for people who have committed sins grave enough that they would have trouble adjusting to their redeemed lives if they didn't die tragically in a final act of heroism.

Donna losing her memory is more like if Sam had to have his memory erased and got sent back to the Shire to spend the rest of his life trying to build up the courage to ask Rosie on a date, only to die alone.

Arsenic Lupin
Apr 12, 2012

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surc posted:

I'm a snarky guy, and I think saying "narratively satisfying" is generally a way to say "I didn't like it" but sound more credible and avoid having to give specific reasons,
Nope. "Narratively unsatisfying" means "the overall emotional/character arc doesn't work." You can say, for instance, "This movie has a lot of great scenes, but is narratively unsatisfying", meaning that it doesn't hang together as a story, or that the story being told is not supported by the evidence in scenes, or that the story being told is ... wait for it ... unsatisfying.

"Narratively unsatisfying" is different from "bad writing" in that individual lines and scenes may be beautifully written, but the overall impression doesn't work. It can be a string-of-pearls plot, or a plot where a character's mood or characterization doesn't seem to follow a consistent and/or satisfying pattern, or just plain dumb.

So, for instance, "Donna has a hero's journey, but at the end of that journey she doesn't choose to accept her sacrifice, but instead is sacrificed by the Doctor" can be narratively unsatisfying. It makes perfect sense logically, it's a reasonable way for the characters to behave, but it leaves the viewer unsatisfied because there's no catharsis. Similarly, Rose getting her magic RealDoll clone is narratively unsatisfying because it's unrelated to both the season arc and the episode arc; it isn't foreshadowed, it doesn't follow naturally from Rose's contribution to the climax. It's just tacked on to satisfy people (presumably including the creator) who want a happy ending for that character.

NieR Occomata
Jan 18, 2009

Glory to Mankind.

I just bought a wii u so if my reviews turn into the words "Bayonetta 2" over and over well, you know why

Dias
Feb 20, 2011

by sebmojo

Toxxupation posted:

I just bought a wii u so if my reviews turn into the words "Bayonetta 2" over and over well, you know why

Doctor Who would be much improved if Bayonetta became one of the companions.

Kurtofan
Feb 16, 2011

hon hon hon
Cheshire

DoctorWhat
Nov 18, 2011

A little privacy, please?

Toxxupation posted:

I just bought a wii u so if my reviews turn into the words "Bayonetta 2" over and over well, you know why

What's your NNID? Mine's "Zagreus". I just beat Bayo1 and want someone to rant and rave about it with.

Regy Rusty
Apr 26, 2010

Toxxupation posted:

I just bought a wii u so if my reviews turn into the words "Bayonetta 2" over and over well, you know why

You made a good choice

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NieR Occomata
Jan 18, 2009

Glory to Mankind.

DoctorWhat posted:

What's your NNID? Mine's "Zagreus". I just beat Bayo1 and want someone to rant and rave about it with.

I don't have online access right now but when i do i'll hit you up

because bayonetta is the greatest thing platinum has ever done and im always willin to talk about it

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