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spectralent
Oct 1, 2014

Me and the boys poppin' down to the shops

Jonas Albrecht posted:

Melanie is awesome, and the attempts on RPG.net to justify her situation and status as a Hero with "She followed the thing that was trying to harm her to its lair and slew it, how reckless!" is loving dumb.

I'm fairly sure someone said something along the lines of "She was a burgeoning serial killer".

I mean, let's be real here: My interpretation of that was that she got attacked and instead of taking it, fought back, pursuing the Beast when it tried to abort and managed to kill it in it's lair. It doesn't seem, to me, like that would require immense amounts of forethought or planning, and could easily come under the "impassioned" heading.

But let's say she did pause, there was a day or two as she tracked it down, whatever. Melanie's still not a serial killer!

We have a teenage girl, who was just attacked by an actual monster with actual supernatural powers that she now knows is real. I'm pretty sure she, like every other mortal in the WoD who gets to this point is going to go "I can't tell anyone about this. Everyone is going to think I'm crazy." Following from that obvious first thought, it probably doesn't cross their mind to check if there's a supernatural FBI agency for this kind of stuff (VASCU might not even exist in her ST's chronicle. Getting a bit meta there, but whatever). Taking from that, that there's a scary monster out there attacking people for unspecified reasons, and, again, as a teenage girl, having the ability to track them down to their magical lair and kill it is nothing short of incredible. Yeah, sure, maybe the Collector has a super-rich inner life and donates to the local Help for Heroes fund or whatever. How the hell is Melanie meant to know that, rather than knowing "Holy crap, monsters are real and also randomly attack teenage girls!"? Based on the information she knows, it's hard to argue that, if not the absolute best course of action, she certainly picked a very brave and risky one. This is the motivation of basically every Hunter ever and we generally ascribe to them, at worst, a conflicted antiheroic tenor, rather than going "Yeah serial killer, gently caress them".

Kurieg posted:

Ahahahahaha you poor bastard.

They're *way* past that now.

Hilariously the book actually says the Beasts she's killed are, in fact, making her better, so even if your odds weren't good all of those Beasts were colossal nightmare monsters that are at best passively inflicting horrific nightmares on the world and at worst are the most depraved of terrible, ritualistic serial killers (isn't there wording that suggests feeding must "always inflict loss" or something?), this just puts her at exactly the same level as all the sample player characters who kill people for food.

EDIT: And in fact, again, Melanie probably doesn't know anything about the Beasts now anyway, so she has as her sample solely terrifying abuse elementals that attack young girls, and is stuck in a nightmare world with no other obvious means of escape back to her family, so.

spectralent fucked around with this message at 16:22 on Jun 9, 2015

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Ferrinus
Jun 19, 2003

i'm finding this quite easy, i guess in part because i'm a fast type but also because i have a coherent mental model of the world

Tezzor posted:

Mages can heal one level of damage per day, unless they have Life 2, in which event they can heal (Successes) damage per 1 Magic Juice spent, instead of 1 for 1 as with other groups, and heal others in this way and Agg on themselves with Life 3. Emotional Urging by itself, let alone Mind 2 as a whole, is a far more flexible power than Eye of the Beast, and easily has the potential to have a stronger and/or longer-lasting effect if cast as a ritual, either on somebody tied up, or sympathetically with Space, or powered up and or then hung with Fate, either way for a minimal dot investment that gives tons of additional effects of its own.

Oh, you've started bringing other Arcana in because you couldn't get your point about Mind to stick. Cool.

Emotional Urging doesn't make anyone do anything. It just causes an emotion to be felt. Nightmare either game-mechanically penalizes all actions in general or compels drastic changes in behavior. Not a thing available in Mind 3 actually lets you make someone do something they don't want to do, while one action with Nightmare 3 instantly incapacitates someone or forcibly ejects them from the scene. If a mage with Mind 3 and nothing else higher fougt a vampire with Nightmare 3 the mage would curl up into a ball on the floor and then die.

That's because Disciplines are pound for pound stronger and more dependable than spells, at the cost of being much narrower in scope.

Gerund
Sep 12, 2007

He push a man


Flavivirus posted:

From RichT on the Onyx Path forums:

-----

It is not the main criticism that was taken away, it was _a_ criticism, and one I was able to address now. Other concerns are far more tangled and were not something I intended to address on my weekly blog without first going through those issues with Black Hat Matt and other Onyx Path creators.
----

So it looks like a response to the abuse themes is still incoming. I'm not hopeful, but it's something.

Unless Onyx Path Publications explains why they are asking for money to produce a product that celebrates and justifies child abuse with only the justification of "the abuse of the vulnerable is my soul's fetish", the answer is a base-assumption-level re-write and not pointing at the kickstarter total and saying "Scoreboard".

Luminous Obscurity
Jan 10, 2007

"The instrument you know as a piano was once called a pianoforte, because it can play both loud and quiet notes."
I want Melanie to cameo in either the Changeling or Hunter anthologies.

JDCorley
Jun 28, 2004

Elminster don't surf
Even if VASCU does exist they might not be too immediately helpful.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-dNwFVk68PI

Calde
Jun 20, 2009

Dammit Who? posted:

Yes, I agree. From what other people who've known him longer say it seems very unlikely that McFarland would intend for his work to come across this way.


This, though, bothers me. A game-as-polemic where you're here to imagine beating up all the fuckers that the creator of the game personally hates is not really a good look even if I, too, hate the fuckers. Mage, for instance, has a standin for the ruling classes in the Seers of the Throne. Those are some real fuckers, in-game and in real life! But the game isn't about killing Seers, and moreover the game understands why someone would want to be a Seer - wealth and power can salve the conscience pretty well. The honesty about how the ruling classes perpetuate themselves and how the things they actually do are at a remove from their real-life counterparts (you're arranging proposed roadways into Evil Runes, not lobbying for juveniles to be tried at adults) means that people want to run Seer campaigns; these properties also make those campaigns something the game can support without falling apart. All Beast does is throw glaringly unsupported assertions one after another in a desperate attempt to keep people from playing "the wrong kind of Beast game".

Like, okay. Let's take Beast exactly as it seems to have been intended - Beasts are the marginalized, Heroes are extremist zealots who are not mentally ill. Beast has at its core a fundamental ignorance or dishonesty about where extremists come from. As we've all noticed, Heroes are all atomized weirdos radicalized by a single encounter with the supernatural, which they may have never encountered or put any credence in before. If another Hero exists and has a similar obsession, it's basically a coincidence. This is not how extremism works. Guys like Ted Kaczynski and Timothy McVeigh are referred to as "loners", but the truth is they both had an active ideological support network. McVeigh spent years on the gun show network, spreading his ideas and soaking up new ones. He gave out literature to like-minded friends. He regularly referenced The Turner Diaries. He was tutored in bomb-making by Terry Nichols. Harvard was awash in Ted Kaczynski's brand of anti-technological despair when he attended and taught there. When he encountered the work of French philosopher Jacques Ellul, he was delighted to find someone writing what he already suspected. When he finally published his manifesto, the press and public were shocked by how unremarkable the ideas in it were - not mainstream, but reasonable and a reflection of more common attitudes. As science author Robert Wright put it in TIME magazine, "There's a little bit of the unabomber in most of us."

Extremists don't emerge from a single traumatic incident and don't produce their obsessions ex nihilo, they're grown over a lifetime of soaking in attitudes already present in society. TERFs and MRAs and white nationalists aren't boxes of coincidentally-obsessed loners, they're support structures and lobbying networks who police themselves ideologically. A Slasher can be a lone nut, but a Hero never is.

Beast's misunderstanding of how extremists (and hence, Heroes) work means that it has a hard time portraying them in ways that make sense. Take Melanie, for instance. She's loving awesome. Like the star of some unmade Nightmare on Elm Street spinoff, or a changeling culture hero battling against all odds in Arcadia, she's an inspirational tale for people who've been shat on by the World of Darkness. Nothing she's described as doing sounds anything less than laudable. But she's a Hero, and the text says Heroes are narcissistic and incapable of self-reflection, so she must be bad somehow! This leads to reactions I've already seen over at rpg.net, where people start combing through the rest of her character sheet looking for something they can interpret as evil in order to resolve the text's contradictions. Ah, she has a Specialty of Finding Weaknesses, eh? How unlikely, for a long-term monster hunter! She must have been a real bully before being attacked. What a piece of poo poo 'mean girl', throw her in the garbage with all the rest of the Heroes.

At best, it makes the reader do all the heavy lifting and go through some serious contortions in order for things to make sense. At worst, it's one of the unfortunate tendencies of the more immature wings of the social justice community, where someone is declared Bad by a local authority and there's a brief scramble through their previous output (Tumblr posts, instagrams, whatever) to find things that can be interpreted or misinterpreted as justifying the declaration. If Heroes are bad, I should be able to come to that conclusion without the text constantly and explicitly reminding me so. If I can't, it means something's gone badly wrong.

Another great post. Incidentally this is why I realized the Kinship and Family rules don't resonate for me the way they do for the defenders of Beast. They see LGBT support groups... I see 8chan's child pornography addicts standing beside their baphomet doxxers and white supremacists.

spectralent
Oct 1, 2014

Me and the boys poppin' down to the shops
Oh wow I bailed out of the RPGnet thread when it became obvious that I was headbutting a brick wall with increasing force, but in response to "Melanie is only a teenage girl" someone posted:

quote:

Rachel Shoaf and Sheila Eddy were teenage girls surrounded by friends and families who lured 16 year old Skylar Neese out of her house, stabbed her to death, and hid her body in the woods in Pennsylvania.

Jesus titty shitfucking christ what the actual making GBS threads fucknuggets.

moths
Aug 25, 2004

I would also still appreciate some danger.



Vampire also benefits from being clearly fantasy. The vampires do fantastic things that cannot be done in real life, it serves as a reminder that it's a game. People don't get attacked by vampires in real life.

But compare that to the imitable violence in Beast. Beasts vandalize property to intimidate. They run over your family's dog. They threaten children. It's like someone saw a neo-Nazi spraying a swastika in a synagogue, and said yes - let's tell a story where that guy's the hero. Beast's ugliness exists in our world.

CommissarMega
Nov 18, 2008

THUNDERDOME LOSER

spectralent posted:

Oh wow I bailed out of the RPGnet thread when it became obvious that I was headbutting a brick wall with increasing force, but in response to "Melanie is only a teenage girl" someone posted:


Jesus titty shitfucking christ what the actual making GBS threads fucknuggets.

Worst part is? In Beast, you'd play the murderers.

But yeah, trying to equate Melanie with those two is not just reaching, you're trying to pull something you've seen through the Hubble Telescope. Good God, I think bringing them is as an example is showing disrespect to everyone involved.

LatwPIAT
Jun 6, 2011

Jonas Albrecht posted:

Melanie is awesome, and the attempts on RPG.net to justify her situation and status as a Hero with "She followed the thing that was trying to harm her to its lair and slew it, how reckless!" is loving dumb.

On a general scale, you could make something out of how the common narrative of a hero who slays a beast is that the hero is heroic for having slain the beast. That just because Melanie has slain a Beast, she's not necessarily heroic, because the Beast wasn't necessarily a bad person. Twisting the narrative on its head, like Foucault and Chomsky playing D&D and concluding that the humans are monsters in the eyes of the goblins, and the human tendency to go kill them is just a form of imperialism. But the game has spent a long of text telling us all the myriad ways in which Beasts victimize humans, abusing, hurting, and murdering them. It's natural to assume that when a Beast breaks into a teenage girl's house, it was in fact not up to anything good. Even if all it wanted was to steal one of her dolls to feed off her loss, it would still be intentionally hurting a teenage girl to satisfy its lusts, which is not a position that elicits sympathy for the Beast. Perhaps following it and killing it wasn't a measured response - but Melanie is a teenage girl and cannot be expected to know what the measured response to being terrorized by a monster is. When she then ends up comatose, trapped in the strange and presumably scary/dangerous Primordial Dream, it's difficult not to feel sorry for her; for how long has this teenage girl been alone and missing the safety of her parents?

It seems like they wanted to do a twist on the story of the hero who enters the magical realm, like Narnia or something - but how do you make someone trapped in a confusing and scary world the villain-of-another-story? Even children's cartoons ultimately portray the monster that is just lost and accidentally rampages around as a victim of circumstance; not one to be punched, but one to be returned home.

The most horrible reading I can come up with for what kind of metaphor this is is that Melanie is a child molestation victim who has latched onto some trivial feature of her molestor and how hates everyone with that feature; maybe she was molested by a black man and is now a White Supremacist... but that's still an incredibly tragic narrative, and Melanie is ultimately the victim or the tragic villain. She's latched onto the "Beast" part of "abusive Beast", rather than the "abusive" part, but this fails for two reasons; the first is that someone so obviously traumatized (a teenage girl with Integrity 4) is not someone you can hate, and the second is that "abusive" and "Beast" seem far too much like synonyms for latching onto "Beast" as the important part to be a sign of psychological hatred.

The funny thing is, I could see playing a game that makes you, metaphorically, play someone with a socially transgressive urge; a game of playing pedophiles and serial killers, or at best exhibitionistic fetishists. It would be an incredibly dark game, but a workable one nonetheless - because you'd be playing someone desperately trying to balance the fact that they have a psychological urge that cannot be satisfied without harming others - but it would be a game about avoiding harming others, and finding escape through questionable means. It would be a game about confronting the shame of what you are, the fact that you are incompatible with society, and the issues a liberal culture faces when it comes to how to include members who through no fault of their own cannot play well with others. Beast: the Primordial has a lot of the elements of this, but the message it seems to communicate is that you should be socially transgressive, even when it hurts others.

spectralent posted:

Oh wow I bailed out of the RPGnet thread when it became obvious that I was headbutting a brick wall with increasing force, but in response to "Melanie is only a teenage girl" someone posted:

quote:

Rachel Shoaf and Sheila Eddy were teenage girls surrounded by friends and families who lured 16 year old Skylar Neese out of her house, stabbed her to death, and hid her body in the woods in Pennsylvania.

Jesus titty shitfucking christ what the actual making GBS threads fucknuggets.

The wikipedia article for that case doesn't go into depth on the perpetrator's family backgrounds, so instead I'll look at a similar case. If you have the stomach for it, look at the kind of families the murders had; in the end, they're also the victims; every single one of them so broken by abuse that they are capable of planned torture and murder. I can't hate someone who is so obviously suffering.

LatwPIAT fucked around with this message at 17:23 on Jun 9, 2015

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!

Ferrinus posted:

Oh, you've started bringing other Arcana in because you couldn't get your point about Mind to stick. Cool.

Emotional Urging doesn't make anyone do anything. It just causes an emotion to be felt. Nightmare either game-mechanically penalizes all actions in general or compels drastic changes in behavior. Not a thing available in Mind 3 actually lets you make someone do something they don't want to do, while one action with Nightmare 3 instantly incapacitates someone or forcibly ejects them from the scene. If a mage with Mind 3 and nothing else higher fougt a vampire with Nightmare 3 the mage would curl up into a ball on the floor and then die.

That's because Disciplines are pound for pound stronger and more dependable than spells, at the cost of being much narrower in scope.

According to Ferrinus 3E Fighters are balanced with Wizards because fighters are better at doing one thing, assuming no preparation or synergy

Wales Grey
Jun 20, 2012

Tezzor posted:

According to Ferrinus 3E Fighters are balanced with Wizards because fighters are better at doing one thing, assuming no preparation or synergy

This analogy would be accurate if in comparing "Dominate Creature" the Bard got a superior version compared to a Wizard. Please try to argue in good faith.

spectralent
Oct 1, 2014

Me and the boys poppin' down to the shops

LatwPIAT posted:

It's natural to assume that when a Beast breaks into a 12-year-old girl's house

Wait wait wait she's twelve? People are trying to hold a twelve year old for moral accountability for murder of, not only a home-invading grown-rear end human, but one with supernatural powers who was there to, in disturbingly unspecific detail, prey on her? :eyepop:

I am rapidly coming aboard flagship "Burn this splat to the ground" but probably one of the most even-handed assessments and best critiques for reform has been from Rand, which I'm partially quoting here and providing a link to. It lays out basically all the issues I can think of (the other one is "That is an ugly shade of pink to put a monochrome artset through") in good detail and suggests fixes.

quote:

The first two problems are ultimately intertwined. The first problem is that Beasts are incredibly unsympathetic. This exacerbates the second problem, which is that the text and subtext of the game are decoupled...

CommissarMega
Nov 18, 2008

THUNDERDOME LOSER
The original text mentions she's still a teenager after 2 years in a coma, so she could have been up to 16 years old when she went all :black101:

However, since 16 is the legal age of consent in some states, that means she was a legal adult who must have willfully gone after a poor creature that was only fulfilling its narrative and biological imperatives. Thank God she's in a coma, otherwise she'd be looting and murdering and raping everything with a pulse!

Goddamn Beast.

EDIT: Here's the original text.

quote:

Sleeping Beauty

Background: Heroes on the hunt have seen glimpses of a young warrior queen in their dreams, pointing the way to the Lair of their quarry. When they get to the creature’s Lair, she’s there, fighting beside them to vanquish the creature. She says she is sleeping somewhere in the real world and beseeches the Heroes she allies with to find her. To date, none of the Children or the Heroes who have encountered her can track her down.

If they did, they would be surprised at what they see: a sickly teenage girl named Melanie, trapped in a coma for the past two years. Doctors and nurses regularly check her bedside, as do worried family members. Her mother spends the entire window of visiting hours sitting with her daughter, either knitting or working on crosswords to pass the time. Her father drops in when he can. They have no idea what caused their presumably healthy daughter to fall so ill, and the doctors are equally stumped.

Melanie fell into the coma after an enterprising Collector sought her out to take God-knows-what from her in order to feed his own hoard. He never got what he wanted; instead of cowering, she gave chase, following him right back to his Lair where she killed him. When she tried to make it back to the real world, however, something went horribly wrong. Her body made it back, but her soul remains in the Primordial Dream, just out of reach. She learns a great deal from the other Heroes she encounters, though she has yet to chase a Beast back out of the Primordial Dream into the mortal world. Through their guidance and a heavily assisted kill, Melanie does not even need a physical presence to strike out at her enemies.

With each victory, Melanie grows stronger, and in her hospital bed, she twitches in her sleep, her hands clenching into fists and unclenching. Her body shows remarkably few signs of atrophying despite the coma, and it gives her parents and doctors hope that one day they may see Melanie, their darling daughter, walk and smile again. They have no idea what keeps Melanie preserved through her coma. When Melanie awakens, she will take everything away from the creatures who took away years of her life.

Description: In the physical world, Melanie is a gaunt, delicate slip of a girl with pale, dull, lifeless hair and glazed-over eyes. She rests in a hospital bed, wearing a thin hospital gown that does very little to protect against the elements. Then again, she doesn’t need to worry about that.In the Primordial Dream, her hair is a lustrous blonde mane and her eyes are a clear ice blue. Her armor gleams with light reflected from some unknown source.

Storytelling Notes: Melanie does not fully understand what has happened to her, or how to free herself. She knows that her body is asleep somewhere, but doesn’t know if she can get back to it or how. She is young and scared, and likely not aware of how long she has been separated from her body. Still, she’s smart and determined, even if she assumes that any Hero she meets will help her get back to her body.

Melanie’s Life is Comatose; since she is stuck in a coma, she can’t do much else in the physical world. She’s trapped between worlds and can’t reach her body to fulfill her destiny as a Hero. If anyone who wishes to do her bodily harm finds her body, she has little to no recourse to defend herself.

Her Legend as a Dreamer stems from the way she can manifest her full potential and fight what she sees as the good fight. Dreams are where anyone can be who they want to be. In her mind, Beasts do the most damage in dreams; humanity’s inner demons trouble dreams enough without the Begotten cultivating and preying on those fears. With her powers as a Hero, she can follow the Children from dreams back to their Lair, the place where they can be who they truly are, and show them how it feels to be the victim.

Ferrinus
Jun 19, 2003

i'm finding this quite easy, i guess in part because i'm a fast type but also because i have a coherent mental model of the world

Tezzor posted:

According to Ferrinus 3E Fighters are balanced with Wizards because fighters are better at doing one thing, assuming no preparation or synergy

According to me you are not competent to prosecute this argument. I cite as evidence your backing off immediately from every specific example you brought up. I don't think you could actually explain what the fighter/wizard problem was or how it applies to this if you tried. It's not the same as the sorcerer/wizard problem.

Loomer
Dec 19, 2007

A Very Special Hell
Actually, you know what, the Melanie thing is pushing me over an edge. I'm actually going to write to Onyx Path and request it be removed or expressly presented as a case where a person is justified in killing a Beast, because it is way too loving close to some real-life poo poo I've seen and that's making it very personal.

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!
A mage with Mind 3 and nothing else faces a vampire with Nightmare 3 and nothing else. (The 0xp vampire has 3 dots total and the 0xp mage actually has some other Arcana at 2 and a third at 1, but hey.) Let's assume both have equal resistance stats, dicepools, no preparation, etc, are naked and weaponless, and both parties are acting optimally. Already at this point it's just a question of initiative rolls and luck on dice. If the vampire goes first he attempts to freeze the mage in fear. If the mage goes first he turns on Not-Obfuscate. The next turn the vampire would attempt to get the mage in a grapple and start sucking before the spell is broken, then it's a resisted grapple situation between two characters with equal and crappy physical stats (although the vampire can spend blood to buff stats so has some advantage). Or, if he went first the Mage would kick the vampire into Frenzy, then use telepathy to make him really mad at whatever furniture is nearby, then start blasting away with psychic bashing until he's torpored.

Or, with a few hours notice, the mage could come in pre-Obfuscated, with his Composure bumped to 7 with the resulting benefit to mind-control resistance and Initiative, and an additional +3 resistance to mind control for good measure. Maybe +3 armor too if his Spell Tolerance is high enough.

spectralent
Oct 1, 2014

Me and the boys poppin' down to the shops

CommissarMega posted:

The original text mentions she's still a teenager after 2 years in a coma, so she could have been up to 16 years old when she went all :black101:

However, since 16 is the legal age of consent in some states, that means she was a legal adult who must have willfully gone after a poor creature that was only fulfilling its narrative and biological imperatives. Thank God she's in a coma, otherwise she'd be looting and murdering and raping everything with a pulse!

Goddamn Beast.

EDIT: Here's the original text.

Of that text there are exactly one and a half lines that could be read to imply she's anything close to a bad person, and the entire rest of it is sympathetic. I repeat, :eyepop:

Ferrinus
Jun 19, 2003

i'm finding this quite easy, i guess in part because i'm a fast type but also because i have a coherent mental model of the world
Not-Obfuscate is.... not Obfuscate. It does not force people to instantly ignore you who were focusing on you. You don't seem to understand that the subtle, surface-level effects generated by third level Mind magic don't have the explosive force or declarative power that third level Disciplines do. You also keep trying to sneak hours of cumulative pre-buffing back into the discussion as though it hadn't already been addressed.

Axelgear
Oct 13, 2011

If I'm wrong, please don't hesitate to tell me. It happens pretty often and I will try to change my opinion if I'm presented with evidence.

Calde posted:

Another great post. Incidentally this is why I realized the Kinship and Family rules don't resonate for me the way they do for the defenders of Beast. They see LGBT support groups... I see 8chan's child pornography addicts standing beside their baphomet doxxers and white supremacists.

When I started thinking of "What would a Beast 'group' look like?", along the lines of Mage Orders or Vampire Covenants, the first thing that came to mind was the Collectors Convention in Sandman.

On reflection, I sincerely cannot think of anything more fitting.

e:

Axelgear fucked around with this message at 17:51 on Jun 9, 2015

Night10194
Feb 13, 2012

We'll start,
like many good things,
with a bear.

Axelgear posted:

When I started thinking of "What would a Beast 'group' look like?", along the lines of Mage Orders or Vampire Covenants, the first thing that came to mind was the Collectors Convention in Sandman.

On reflection, I sincerely cannot think of anything more fitting.

Which is funny, because the solution to Beasts is pretty similar. "Man, you fuckers don't actually matter and aren't really that important in the long run, so run along."

Mormon Star Wars
Aug 13, 2005
It's a minotaur race...

Axelgear posted:

When I started thinking of "What would a Beast 'group' look like?", along the lines of Mage Orders or Vampire Covenants, the first thing that came to mind was the Collectors Convention in Sandman.

On reflection, I sincerely cannot think of anything more fitting.

If there are beasts that can feed without actually loving people up, they need to be the majority of examples, not just the one pawn shop guy or whatever.

Here's a helpful example. Someone on RPGnet went through the book and listed all the example characters and how they feed:

quote:

Originally Posted by Logos Invictus View Post
Anakim
* A judge who doesn't hurt criminals but enacts strict judgments and has an intimate knowledge of the law with which to ensure that criminals can't escape justice.
* A professional safecracker who feeds on the challenge of "defeating" tricky locks, and sometimes lashes out physically at the safe when it defeats him. - Theft
* A "hammer of God" who brings judgment to the wicked. - Through murder
* A "great white hunter" who feeds by challenging herself against animals and - eventually, possibly - other Beasts.

Eshmaki
* The administrator of a juvenile justice facility who protects "his kids" from people who would prey on them, including the other children if necessary. - Abuse
* A woman who has been disinherited unjustly by relatives who distributed her inheritance without any concern for her material needs, and steals back her inheritance from her relatives, leaving behind deadly traps. - Murder
* A serial killer who targets people who come out of a specific nightclub in his home town. - Murder
* A privileged woman who strikes out at the privileged to show them that they aren't as much better than others as they believe themselves to be, somewhat murderously. - Murder

Makara
* A teenage girl who's feeding on the stress and anxiety of her fellow students without actively doing anything to them, although she sometimes feels like she's losing control.
* A man who protects a swimming hole wherein a creature lives that grants wishes. He profits by listening to the secrets about his neighbors the creature imparts.
* A siren who lures people into the ocean and drowns them - Murder
* A young woman who is drawn into her Lair in the ocean and pines for her lover.

Namtaru
* A sculptor who's creating a "hit list" of celebrities she wants to terrorize in order to build up her courage to do so. - Soon murder
* A lawyer who helps people in cases where the system has failed them - domestic abuse and stalking. He uses his powers and legal acumen to strike fear into those who have abused his clients.
* The nurse. She doesn't prey on patients, but she does visit those that are dying naturally (probably to feed, but it's not explicit). She DOES protect the patients from a creature that lives in the hospital basement and eats the lives of the sick and helpless.
* A doctor who works at a free clinic in a bad part of town for next to nothing and feeds by stealing dirty syringes.

Ugallu
* An eccentric who raises crows. Nothing mentioned on how he feeds.
* A cat burgler who targets people who "keep treasure to themselves" - Theft
* A crop duster, no notes on how he feeds but there's a mild implication that it has something to do with the conspiracy theorists he spends time with.
* A woman who thinks of herself as a ghost, and sometimes kidnaps a person to keep her company before returning them unharmed to their lives. - Kidnapping

Tyrants
* Jo, a woman who feeds by proving her mastery of nearly any topic when men challenge and/or gatekeep her, and enjoys fighting the ones that get angry enough that they can't prove her inferiority to take a swing at her. - Humiliating and beating men up for kicks
* Reynold, a health inspector who feeds by holding restaurant owners to the full legal standards of the health code and watching them squirm. - Sadism, petty lording over others
* Ari, a cab driver who sometimes drops people in the "wrong side of town", and feeds off of their fear of being an alien in their own city. - Terrorizes people
* Ms. Blaise, an assistant principal who keeps a pet scorpion in her office and draws attention to it when she's talking to problem children, feeding on their fear of the creature. - Child abuse
* Dave, an executive who wants to become a CEO so he can get office on the top floor.

Collectors
* Zmei, a burgler who walks into occupied houses to take what he wants, challenging the owner to try to stop him. - Theft and assault, probably murder
* Rose, who collects teeth - though she's willing to take them from a living victim, she prefers to collect teeth that have naturally fallen out, or take them from corpses. - Murder
* Yin, who might be a serial killer or might just dump bags in a small, semi-hidden body of water in order to make people fear that she's a serial killer. Text unclear. - Nah, it's pretty clear: murder
* Tim, highway maintenance. Collects roadkill, including human roadkill. Makes roadkill when he needs to, with the implication that he does this to humans. - Murder
* Anya, who buries her collection beneath apple trees. She only buries things that will nourish her trees, and there's no implication that she actually harms anyone to get the things she needs.

Predators:
* Darius, who chases people down and breaks a bone. He kills sometimes, when his Soul is hungry enough. - Physical assault and murder
* Father Landon, who tempts clergymen to break their vows and, if they break, reveals their crimes and feeds on either the coverup by the church or the public reaction. - Entrapment
* Brianna, middle school student who does the siren thing. She doesn't kill, she just pretends to drown and leaves would-be rescuers to either search for her or return to show. - Psychologically abuses lifeguards
* Vanessa prefers to prey on people who are disdainful of their fellow humans, and likes blood. She doesn't necessarily kill, nor does she terrorize per se, but she does harm. - Physical abuse, probably murder
* John Dawson, who kidnaps a person, waits until their family starts airing their dirty laundry, and then returns them. The families usually reconcile, having cleared the air. - Kidnapping, psychologically tortures families

Nemesis
* Ogre, who preys on people who break oaths and betray trusts.
* Jess, who preys on date rapists and abusers.
* Patrick and Ahmed, a Collector and Nemesis who fell in love. Patrick leaves his horde where people can find it, Ahmed punishes people who take from the horde. - Basically entrapment, resulting in whatever is implied with 'punishmnet'. Based on the trend from all the other Beasts, I'm guessing it's murder.
* Angela, another lawyer who defends the disenfranchised and oppressed, though in this case she does so by terrorizing the lawyers of the oppressors into settling. - I think that psychologically terrorizing people with nightmares about millions of spiders is abusive, and furthermore, a perversion of justice
* Benjamin, who works with Father Landon above, and punishes those priests who break their vows - offering them a choice of confession, renunciation, or being thrown off a building. - Murder

Ravagers
* Grace destroys cars - targeting the vehicles of those who show more love to their car than they do to other people. - Property destruction
* Lester breaks the windows of the rich and powerful to disrupt their sense of security. - Terrorizes people
* Naia calls up storms big enough to scare people and do some damage. When her Soul gets very hungry, she might call up a flood. - She's trying to hold back, but she's still a danger to everyone around her. In particular, floods can kill.
* Amon, who cultivates a fungus within his Lair that can consume anything. He works with werewolves and uses it to destroy spirits and creatures that invade their territory.
* Diana is a professional assassin who focuses on high value, high profile targets. - Murder

Traveller
Jan 6, 2012

WHIM AND FOPPERY

quote:

[Again, everyone needs to stop comparing Beasts or Heroes to specific real-life minorities or abusers of those specific minorities. This is the second time I've said this, and Future Villain Band has also said this elsewhere. If it keeps happening, we're going to look at infractions.

I feel like this may need a clear explanation so people can understand this ruling. I'm going to use this post as an example, but it applies to the general trend we're seeing here.

The fact that so many different real-life minorities have been invoked is a good sign of why they _shouldn't_ be invoked, because it's obvious that they're being used as generic examples of "people who are victimized by others" that happen to carry particularly strong emotional resonance and shock value. Whether that's the intent or not, it serves to lower the level of discourse and make it difficult for anyone else to argue.

There are dozens of ways you could talk about Beasts or Heroes being abuse victims/abusive monsters without inserting minority-of-choice in the victim side of the equation. If either side clearly resembled a particular minority, that would be a valid topic of discussion. But if the minority is one of dozens of examples you could use, completely interchangeable, differing only in the level of shock value, it's not a valid use.

In the example above, almost anyone could have been mentioned as a victim of abusive "punishment" or as the example of an abuser who claims to punish people. There's nothing specific that's like "gay conversion therapy" except that it involves victimization and blaming, like tons of other examples. It's a fill-in-the-blank where any bad person could easily fit, and people are consciously or subconsciously choosing the absolute worst possible people that could fit in a way that makes it difficult to argue with them without being seen as defending that behavior. It's very much an example of, "you know who else did [X]? Hitler!" That's not going to lead to productive discussion.

If you have a specific reason that you think "gay conversion therapy" is a particularly appropriate comparison, based on specific wording in the text or some similar evidence, feel free to bring it up in Trouble Tickets. But as it stands, "monster that punishes people for dumb reasons" describes Pinhead from Hellraiser, the kappa from Japanese folklore, Santa Claus putting coal in kids' stocking, and probably thousands of other cases as well as it does gay conversion therapist, transphobe, or any other especially controversial and topical bad person. Please try to avoid going directly to the most inflammatory examples possible unless there's a very, very good reason why those examples fit much better than anything else.

Redtext, too.

unseenlibrarian
Jun 4, 2012

There's only one thing in the mountains that leaves a track like this. The creature of legend that roams the Timberline. My people named him Sasquatch. You call him... Bigfoot.
The thing that gets me is that a lot of examples of "Good Beasts" are basically quasi-villainous comedic stock characters. A hanging judge who enacts harsh penalties. A petty bureaucrat who feeds on the despair of people caught in his technically correct net of red tape. _A really bad cab driver_.

These are the guys where the audience cheers when they get their comeuppance, usually by falling face-first into a pile of manure or getting a pie to the face.

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!

Ferrinus posted:

Not-Obfuscate is.... not Obfuscate. It does not force people to instantly ignore you who were focusing on you. You don't seem to understand that the subtle, surface-level effects generated by third level Mind magic don't have the explosive force or declarative power that third level Disciplines do. You also keep trying to sneak hours of cumulative pre-buffing back into the discussion as though it hadn't already been addressed.

Incognito Presence makes it more difficult to notice or remember the caster. If you want to rule that someone actively viewing the caster isn't affected, then drop that step and just dump the vampire into fear frenzy. I keep bringing up pre-buffing because it's a very common and non-esoteric factor and you're attempting to claim splat balance by declaring the strongest aspect of one splat out of the discussion. Why not argue that humans are stronger than vampires as long as it isn't night?

spectralent
Oct 1, 2014

Me and the boys poppin' down to the shops

Traveller posted:

Redtext, too.

Thing is that you can't use Beasts as stand-ins for minorities under that either! But, nominally, that's the point of the line.

Xelkelvos
Dec 19, 2012
Tezzor, go back to Hellthread. They miss you. Also, this thread needs people debating Ferrinus like Beast needs more defenders.

Pope Guilty
Nov 6, 2006

The human animal is a beautiful and terrible creature, capable of limitless compassion and unfathomable cruelty.

Traveller posted:

Redtext, too.

RPG.net management posted:

STOP THINKING SO HARD AND JUST GO ALONG WITH THIS DISTASTEFUL THING

Ferrinus
Jun 19, 2003

i'm finding this quite easy, i guess in part because i'm a fast type but also because i have a coherent mental model of the world

Tezzor posted:

Incognito Presence makes it more difficult to notice or remember the caster. If you want to rule that someone actively viewing the caster isn't affected, then drop that step and just dump the vampire into fear frenzy. I keep bringing up pre-buffing because it's a very common and non-esoteric factor and you're attempting to claim splat balance by declaring the strongest aspect of one splat out of the discussion. Why not argue that humans are stronger than vampires as long as it isn't night?

Oh? Oh, yeah? Drop the vampire into fear frenzy, i.e. replicate the effects of Nightmare 3 exactly? Which spell are you doing that with? I don't remember one in the corebook, or any other 3-or-lower spell in the corebook which sets the precedent. While we're at it, how about you figure out why I'm discounting buff-stacking in the course of claiming that vampire powers are dot-for-dot stronger and more convenient to use than mage powers.

Soonmot
Dec 19, 2002

Entrapta fucking loves robots




Grimey Drawer
Hey, Ferrinus. When Mage 2E comes out are you going to run a game here?

Ferrinus
Jun 19, 2003

i'm finding this quite easy, i guess in part because i'm a fast type but also because i have a coherent mental model of the world
I'm running a game of Mage using an incredibly intricate constellation of houserules for some friends of mine already, but I'll definitely consider at most switching to a fiddled-with 2E or at least mining 2E for all its setting changes and spell ideas once it comes out. I've already been drawing on a lot of setting stuff from WoD 2E in general and some of the description and aesthetic of Mage 2E.

Ferrinus fucked around with this message at 18:59 on Jun 9, 2015

Chernobyl Peace Prize
May 7, 2007

Or later, later's fine.
But now would be good.

Brutal Casting

Kurieg
Jul 19, 2012

RIP Lutri: 5/19/20-4/2/20
:blizz::gamefreak:

spectralent posted:

Thing is that you can't use Beasts as stand-ins for minorities under that either! But, nominally, that's the point of the line.

I think the issue is that some trolls were back tracing the comment. Saying that if beasts were stand-ins for minorities then minorities were actually monsters and racists were justified.

Except the game does paint them that way, and it's something that needs to be addressed.

Cabbit
Jul 19, 2001

Is that everything you have?


"We're here to make everything metal. Blacker than the blackest black... times infinity." 'You don't have enough Matter dots for that.'

Daeren
Aug 18, 2009

YER MUSTACHE IS CROOKED

Cabbit posted:

"We're here to make everything metal. Blacker than the blackest black... times infinity." 'You don't have enough Matter dots for that.'

This reminds me of that grimoire that's a limited run vinyl of a death metal album that actually plays "Satanic" High Speech when run backwards, and has a rote to turn a corpse's skeleton into metal and rip itself free from the body.

God drat, that was great.

Zikan
Feb 29, 2004

Daeren posted:

This reminds me of that grimoire that's a limited run vinyl of a death metal album that actually plays "Satanic" High Speech when run backwards, and has a rote to turn a corpse's skeleton into metal and rip itself free from the body.

God drat, that was great.

Dark Revolution was its name and I agree it was the best one of the whole grimoire spalt.

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!

Ferrinus posted:

Oh? Oh, yeah? Drop the vampire into fear frenzy, i.e. replicate the effects of Nightmare 3 exactly? Which spell are you doing that with? I don't remember one in the corebook, or any other 3-or-lower spell in the corebook which sets the precedent. While we're at it, how about you figure out why I'm discounting buff-stacking in the course of claiming that vampire powers are dot-for-dot stronger and more convenient to use than mage powers.

http://nwod.org/wiki/index.php/Provoke_Wrath

Can trigger rage frenzy in a vampire, so fear frenzy for the same level seems reasonable. And yes, if we're going by this, Mind 3 can exactly replicate the effects of Nightmare 3. Unlike Nightmare 3, it can also do dozens of other things. As far as vampire powers "being dot-for-dot stronger and more convenient to use" than Mage powers, to keep it just within Nightmare, Nightmare 5 can for 1 Willpower cause lethal psychically. Mind 5 can cause lethal psychically for free, or agg for 1 Mana. In addition to that, it can also possess people, read and utterly dominate minds, read and rewrite personalities and memories, imprison someone in the Astral plane, create a mind, enter the Shadow, network minds together, get up to +5 in up to 6 attributes and/or 3-5 ranks in any skill or skills, paralyze, drain willpower, create hallucinations, decrease a target's mental or social attribute, turn off a target's senses, enter dreams, or make someone fall in love. And about a third of that is covert.

spectralent
Oct 1, 2014

Me and the boys poppin' down to the shops
So Beast's pretty poo poo. The thing I find most worrying is how strongly a lot of people seem to have identified with the Ghost of Christmas Child Abuse.

Dave Brookshaw
Jun 27, 2012

No Regrets

So one of the amusing things about this meme, is that Brutal Casting doesn't actually exist. I didn't like it in the first draft of Mage's Merits, so I deleted it in the redlines.

And not a single one of you knows what it was supposed to do. Only David Hill and I do.

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Daeren
Aug 18, 2009

YER MUSTACHE IS CROOKED

Dave Brookshaw posted:

So one of the amusing things about this meme, is that Brutal Casting doesn't actually exist. I didn't like it in the first draft of Mage's Merits, so I deleted it in the redlines.

And not a single one of you knows what it was supposed to do. Only David Hill and I do.

I think it only got mentioned the one time in here - I'd forgotten its existence completely until that post. I'm not surprised if people latched onto it though.

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