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Fajita Queen
Jun 21, 2012

chrisoya posted:

He won't even be in the top ten worst people trying to spam the Hugos this year. He's even a better writer than some of the Puppy trash that got nominated last time around.

Would it be cruel to ask these guys' expert opinion on A Girl Corrupted by the Internet is the Summoned Hero?!?

Yep.

divabot posted:

Pounded In The Butt By My Own Girl with Red Tidday Up and White Tidday Down Corrupted by the Internet who is the Summoned Hero?! by Roko's Tinglisk

:golfclap:

Fajita Queen fucked around with this message at 20:12 on Jan 30, 2016

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divabot
Jun 17, 2015

A polite little mouse!
oh, just before today's literary disaster I rambled on Tumblr a bit about HPMOR: one, two. (In that second one you'll see me write the words "i expect his second will be better." HOLLOW loving LAUGH.) I thought there wouldn't be anything more to say on Tumblr, but The Discourse(tm) has been rich, rich today, I assure you.

divabot fucked around with this message at 01:06 on Jan 31, 2016

Death Bot
Mar 4, 2007

Binary killing machines, turning 1 into 0 since 0011000100111001 0011011100110110
Big fan of "the rape thing is valid" like it's supposed to be on a list after "the tone is inconsistent"

divabot
Jun 17, 2015

A polite little mouse!
This new terrible POS will be on Kindle Unlimited in a coupla weeks, so if you've already hocked your soul to Amazon you can read it without giving Yudkowsky money directly (though he'll still get some pennies out of the KU monthly pool).

anilEhilated
Feb 17, 2014

But I say fuck the rain.

Grimey Drawer
"Rationalism" is a horrible, horrible misnomer.

Darth Walrus
Feb 13, 2012

anilEhilated posted:

"Rationalism" is a horrible, horrible misnomer.

Well, they do use it to rationalise horrible, horrible things.

Doctor Spaceman
Jul 6, 2010

"Everyone's entitled to their point of view, but that's seriously a weird one."

anilEhilated posted:

"Rationalism" is a horrible, horrible misnomer.

Rationalism is to rationality what Scientology is to science.

Seraphic Neoman
Jul 19, 2011


Really? He's moving to loving light novels now? :psyduck:

divabot posted:

Pounded In The Butt By My Own Girl with Red Tidday Up and White Tidday Down Corrupted by the Internet who is the Summoned Hero?! by Roko's Tinglisk

I hate that I get this joke.

EDIT: Oh my god this is poo poo.

quote:

The old warrior in chain-mail speaks up. “How is this girl supposed to do that, exactly? Is there more to her than is apparent?”

“I have similar questions,” I say. I’d better have arrived here with some incredible cheat-like advantage, or this world is amazingly doomed.

quote:

That’s some convenient exposition, but I’ll excuse it since you’re stating it for my sake.

EDIT: OH MY GOD THIS IS poo poo :psypop:

Seraphic Neoman fucked around with this message at 20:06 on Jan 31, 2016

Nakar
Sep 2, 2002

Ultima Ratio Regum
But you see, the source genre is also poo poo, so you can't criticize it!

90s Cringe Rock
Nov 29, 2006
:gay:

Nakar posted:

But you see, the source genre is also poo poo, so you can't criticize it!
Those quotes do seem pretty accurate. Dodgy web-novels being fan-translated, he's captured the tone perfectly. At least he's not writing litrpg.

Edit: oh, right, there was a rationalist fanfic where the singularity uploaded everyone into an mmo already. or should I say, everypony...

Law Cheetah
Mar 3, 2012
He really is even emulating the writing style of shittily translated light novels. Like, the ones where the people run it through google translate and then try to make a rough guess at what the text means

anilEhilated
Feb 17, 2014

But I say fuck the rain.

Grimey Drawer
Real difference from his own lovely writing.

divabot
Jun 17, 2015

A polite little mouse!
Hey, critical geniuses! I've been asked an interesting question: what's Hermione like in HPMOR, as compared to canon?

The problem here is that HJPEV is as utterly unobservant as canon HP, except more arrogant about it. So I'm finding it hard to get a picture of Hermione. She is very smart, and hasn't had a serious upgrade the way HJPEV has so is nearly as smart as him. The few times she outthinks him are presented as amusing reversals. But all of this is through HJPEV's eyes, and he is sufficiently unobservant that he fails to notice Quirrell is loving Voldemort, so one would have to dredge deeper to get actual characterisation of Hermione. The story ends with her in the role of HJPEV's Sidekick Scientist Dream Girl, though that's more characterisation of HJPEV (and indeed of the author).

EY literally fridges Hermione at one point (both in motivational trope and physical action), and when bloggers dared point this out he exploded at them daring to critique his work when it wasn't finished (which would not be for another couple of years), because he doesn't understand non-adulation. Does anyone have links to that stuff? I recall various blog posts analysing the work and its author in way more detail than EY was used to.

Edit: Found what I was after: this essay by Sam Keeper (Storming the Ivory Tower), a followup to this essay. (In response, the Tumblr rationalists proceeded to be such hugely annoying turds that Sam blocked the lot of them and now refers to them as The Cult That Shall Not Be Named.) I note also some apposite discussion on the LW HPMOR thread, particularly this subthread started by Nancy Lebovitz (who, as well as being a LW regular and moderator, has been active in SF fandom for decades and has some idea about the stuff): again focusing on the fact that Hermione didn't get the massive upgrade that HP did.

divabot fucked around with this message at 11:16 on Feb 11, 2016

CountFosco
Jan 9, 2012

Welcome back to the Liturgigoon thread, friend.

I like Scott a lot, but I have to ask him, how is "Carefully optimized to be maximally embarrassing to him" a good decision by a writer?

Fenrisulfr
Oct 14, 2012

divabot posted:

The story ends with her in the role of HJPEV's Sidekick Scientist Dream Girl, though that's more characterisation of HJPEV (and indeed of the author).

I only read the finale once, but my impression of it was more that Harry is Hermione's sidekick/mysterious old wizard because while he may be more "intelligent" than her she is better than him by literally every other measure; going back to the last chapter now, she's referred to explicitly as the "hero" in the penultimate paragraph, which is how Harry thought of himself throughout the entire story until that moment. Knowing what I do of Yudkowsky that's probably more charitable than he deserves, though.

anilEhilated
Feb 17, 2014

But I say fuck the rain.

Grimey Drawer
I really wouldn't call the Harry in this thing an "upgrade".

Tunicate
May 15, 2012

anilEhilated posted:

I really wouldn't call the Harry in this thing an "upgrade".

In the same way you upgrade a computer from windows 98 to Windows ME.


As with most of Yud's writing, its all about ME.

Pvt.Scott
Feb 16, 2007

What God wants, God gets, God help us all

Tunicate posted:

In the same way you upgrade a computer from windows 98 to Windows ME.


As with most of Yud's writing, its all about ME.

ME...METRO...TROPES...TRIPE!

I think I've cracked the Yud-Windows Code, fellas!

divabot
Jun 17, 2015

A polite little mouse!
red tidday UP white tidday DOWN review:

i have read it.

* it is self consciously a pastiche of a trash genre, and that's fine y'know. it has no pretensions to quality
* i observably have no literary standards and read worse fanfic
* as a story it's reasonably constructed
* (the intro is fatuous)
* contains no actual porn
* i laughed out loud once
* will probably not read it a second time
* is not worth 99c
* but is not actually an offence against all human dignity
* just some of it

divabot
Jun 17, 2015

A polite little mouse!
Well, that's annoying: su3su2u1 just deleted his Tumblr. (Someone on Tumblr threatened to dox him if he didn't. Love these rationalists!) Wonder if anyone kept a copy of the detailed HPMOR denunciation.

divabot fucked around with this message at 10:57 on Feb 27, 2016

Pavlov
Oct 21, 2012

I've long been fascinated with how the alt-right develops elaborate and obscure dog whistles to try to communicate their meaning without having to say it out loud
Stepan Andreyevich Bandera being the most prominent example of that
Don't worry, his review lives on... in my heart.

Pavlov
Oct 21, 2012

I've long been fascinated with how the alt-right develops elaborate and obscure dog whistles to try to communicate their meaning without having to say it out loud
Stepan Andreyevich Bandera being the most prominent example of that
Also jesus christ yud's cultists are obsessive.

blastron
Dec 11, 2007

Don't doodle on it!


Does tumblr have a report button or something because I don't understand how someone could openly say "yeah i stalked a dude and asked him nicely to take his site down while insinuating that if he didn't i'd loose the crazy people who would ruin his life on him" and not get kicked off of a website.

Ysengrin
Feb 13, 2012
They do but like most sites, good luck getting them to actually do something about it,

McTimmy
Feb 29, 2008
Probably wouldn't be hard to find posts where they reblogged art without permission. That tumblr sure-as-poo poo cares about.

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Dec 22, 2003

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divabot posted:

Well, that's annoying: su3su2u1 just deleted his Tumblr. (Someone on Tumblr threatened to dox him if he didn't. Love these rationalists!) Wonder if anyone kept a copy of the detailed HPMOR denunciation.
Totally sane. Completely reasonable. Not a cult. etc.

divabot
Jun 17, 2015

A polite little mouse!
archive.is delivers: chapter reviews up to 103, full review. Might want to save these somewhere. Later chapter reviews don't appear to be in archive.is, sadly, and any of the discussion around EY exploding on Reddit would need to be reconstructed from others' reblogging.

The old blog was not indexed by archive.org; but philippesaner grabbed the URL and has let stuff through via robots.txt, so let's hope archive.org did grab snapshots and will reveal them when it notices it's allowed to. edit: it's back!

divabot fucked around with this message at 11:46 on Feb 28, 2016

JosephWongKS
Apr 4, 2009

by Nyc_Tattoo
Chapter 17 – Locating the Hypothesis
Part Twenty-Six


quote:


"Well," Dumbledore said. "I fear I have a confession to make, Harry. A confession and an apology."

"Apologies are good" that doesn't even make sense! What am I talking about?

The old wizard sighed deeply. "You may not still think so after understanding what I have to say. I'm afraid, Harry, that I've been manipulating you your entire life. It was I who consigned you to the care of your wicked stepparents -"

"My stepparents aren't wicked!" blurted Harry. "My parents, I mean!"

"They aren't?" Dumbledore said, looking surprised and disappointed. "Not even a little wicked? That doesn't fit the pattern..."

Harry's inner Slytherin screamed at the top of its mental lungs, SHUT UP YOU IDIOT HE'LL TAKE YOU AWAY FROM THEM!


Hasn’t Eliezarry already been taken away from his adoptive parents? He’s already in Hogwarts, after all. What guarantee does he have that Dumbledore will let him leave the school grounds?

Also, it’s actually rather sweet to see that Eliezarry loves his adoptive parents so much.



quote:


"No, no," said Harry, lips frozen in a ghastly grimace, "I was just trying to spare your feelings, they're actually very wicked..."

"They are?" Dumbledore leaned forward, gazing at him intently. "What do they do?"

Talk fast "they, ah, I have to do dishes and wash problems and they don't let me read a lot of books and -"


Seems like Eliezarry didn’t buy Dumbledore’s explanation that the “chicken” was actually a phoenix that had self-combusted. The narration doesn’t give enough clues for me to tell whether Eliezarry had seen past Dumbledore’s ruse (i.e. Dumbledore had actually set fire to an actual chicken) or if Dumbledore had been telling the truth and Eliezarry’s scepticism had again led him to the wrong interpretation of the situation.


quote:


"Ah, good, that's good to hear," said Dumbledore, leaning back again. He smiled in a sad sort of way. "I apologise for that, then. Now where was I? Ah, yes. I'm sorry to say, Harry, that I am responsible for virtually everything bad that has ever happened to you. I know that this will probably make you very angry."

"Yes, I'm very angry!" said Harry. "Grrr!"

Harry's Internal Critic promptly awarded him the All-Time Award for the Worst Acting in the History of Ever.

"And I just wanted you to know," Dumbledore said, "I wanted to tell you as early as possible, in case something happens to one of us later, that I am truly, truly sorry. For everything that has already happened, and everything that will."

Moisture glistened in the old wizard's eyes.

"And I'm very angry!" said Harry. "So angry that I want to leave right now unless you've got anything else to say!"

Just GO before he sets you on fire! shrieked Slytherin, Hufflepuff, and Gryffindor.

"I understand," said Dumbledore. "One last thing then, Harry. You are not to attempt the forbidden door on the third-floor corridor. There's no possible way you could get through all the traps, and I wouldn't want to hear that you'd been hurt trying. Why, I doubt that you could so much as open the first door, since it's locked and you don't know the spell Alohomora -"

Harry spun around and bolted for the exit at top speed, the doorknob turned agreeably in his hand and then he was racing down the spiral stairs even as they turned, his feet almost stumbling over themselves, in just a moment he was at the bottom and the gargoyle was walking aside and Harry fired out of the stairwell like a cannonball.


Oh well, whether Dumbledore had or had not actually set fire to a chicken, it’s probably a wise idea to spend as little time around him as possible.*

* This also applies to the canon Dumbledore.

Liquid Communism
Mar 9, 2004

коммунизм хранится в яичках

Ysengrin posted:

They do but like most sites, good luck getting them to actually do something about it,

Yet at the same time they have an automated removal process that is exploitable and nigh irreversible that is often used to target people who disagree with SJW's. It's sickly amusing from the outside.

GottaPayDaTrollToll
Dec 3, 2009

by Lowtax

Liquid Communism posted:

Yet at the same time they have an automated removal process that is exploitable and nigh irreversible that is often used to target people who disagree with SJW's. It's sickly amusing from the outside.

I have no idea where you're getting this from, but it doesn't really pass the smell test - if it were that easy for a disgruntled user to get things taken down from Tumblr, there would hardly be any Tumblr left.

Death Bot
Mar 4, 2007

Binary killing machines, turning 1 into 0 since 0011000100111001 0011011100110110
Yeah idk there's just a bunch of literal neonazis on the site

Liquid Communism
Mar 9, 2004

коммунизм хранится в яичках

GottaPayDaTrollToll posted:

I have no idea where you're getting this from, but it doesn't really pass the smell test - if it were that easy for a disgruntled user to get things taken down from Tumblr, there would hardly be any Tumblr left.

It may have been fixed. For a while there was a trend of fake DMCA requests which were getting blogs auto-deleted, same strategy that was being used on YouTube.

neongrey
Feb 28, 2007

Plaguing your posts with incidental music.
There was a brief period where being OP of audio posts of copyrighted material was getting blogs auto-removed but it wasn't driven by some conspiracy, it was a pretty broadly-reaching problem.

Cavelcade
Dec 9, 2015

I'm actually a boy!



I think reading some of the posts in this thread made me realise one of the things I have a big problem with in HP:MOR.

If you wanted to tell the story of a rationalist in the Harry Potter world, why not just bloody well use Hermione? She's right bloody there already just have her be the one who read Feynman instead of what she did already read. She's basically ready made to have one tiny alteration. And then you open up so many interesting areas to explore - Harry is thought of as the hero but he doesn't want it and is relieved you're here to take over, for instance. You have a female with actual agency in the story. Basically it'd be those alternate titles for the books things but fully fleshed out with a rationalist Hermione.

I guess the Main Character would be less of an author insert then, though.

Soylent Pudding
Jun 22, 2007

We've got people!


That's basically what Arithmancer did and it's pretty great.

Death Bot
Mar 4, 2007

Binary killing machines, turning 1 into 0 since 0011000100111001 0011011100110110
You could even have the characters be intellectual rivals, which is so much more interesting than one character talking whole everyone stares on dumbly

anilEhilated
Feb 17, 2014

But I say fuck the rain.

Grimey Drawer

Death Bot posted:

You could even have the characters be intellectual rivals, which is so much more interesting than one character talking whole everyone stares on dumbly
I'm not sure Yud understands the concept.

Nessus
Dec 22, 2003

After a Speaker vote, you may be entitled to a valuable coupon or voucher!



Cavelcade posted:

I think reading some of the posts in this thread made me realise one of the things I have a big problem with in HP:MOR.

If you wanted to tell the story of a rationalist in the Harry Potter world, why not just bloody well use Hermione? She's right bloody there already just have her be the one who read Feynman instead of what she did already read. She's basically ready made to have one tiny alteration. And then you open up so many interesting areas to explore - Harry is thought of as the hero but he doesn't want it and is relieved you're here to take over, for instance. You have a female with actual agency in the story. Basically it'd be those alternate titles for the books things but fully fleshed out with a rationalist Hermione.

I guess the Main Character would be less of an author insert then, though.
'cos she's a girl

Like I mean, there's a few different possible takes on that - Yudkowsky may not have thought of her, because he identified with Harry; Yud may have wanted to keep the main character to maximize readership and potential recruits for his phyg; Yud may have thought that Hermione wouldn't make a convincing rationalist, somehow; it may have started as cheap gags before becoming a giant novel-length piece of wank material - but other than the last one they all come back to "she's not the little boy main character, that's why."

Pavlov
Oct 21, 2012

I've long been fascinated with how the alt-right develops elaborate and obscure dog whistles to try to communicate their meaning without having to say it out loud
Stepan Andreyevich Bandera being the most prominent example of that
Harry is an author insert and Yud probably had difficulty identifying with women.

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JosephWongKS
Apr 4, 2009

by Nyc_Tattoo
Chapter 17 – Locating the Hypothesis
Part Twenty-Seven


quote:


Harry Potter.

There must have been something about Harry Potter.

It was Thursday for everyone, after all, and yet this sort of thing didn't seem to happen to anyone else.
It was 6:21pm on Thursday afternoon when Harry Potter, firing out of the stairwell like a cannonball and accelerating at top speed, ran directly into Minerva McGonagall as she was turning a corner on her way to the Headmaster's office.

Thankfully neither of them were much hurt. As had been explained to Harry a little earlier in the day - back when he was refusing to go anywhere near a broomstick again - Quidditch needed solid iron Bludgers just to stand a decent chance of injuring the players, since wizards tended to be a lot more resistant than Muggles to impacts.


Shouldn’t Eliezarry be interested in finding out why wizards have increased resistance to impact / bludgeoning damage e.g. whether it is an inherent property of magic or if it is due to evolutionary selection? Or has the “scientific approach to / experimentation on magic” theme been forgotten about already?


quote:


Harry and Professor McGonagall did both end up on the floor, and the parchments she had been carrying went all over the corridor.

There was a terrible, terrible pause.

"Harry Potter," breathed Professor McGonagall from where she was lying on the floor right next to Harry. Her voice rose to nearly a shriek. "What were you doing in the Headmaster's office?"

"Nothing!" squeaked Harry.

"Were you talking about the Defence Professor?"

"No! Dumbledore called me up there and he gave me this big rock and said it was my father's and I should carry it everywhere!"

There was another terrible pause.

"I see," said Professor McGonagall, her voice a little calmer. She stood up, brushed herself off, and glared at the scattered parchments, which jumped into a neat stack and scurried back against the corridor wall as though to hide from her gaze. "My sympathies, Mr. Potter, and I apologise for doubting you."

"Professor McGonagall," Harry said. His voice was wavering. He pushed himself off the floor, stood, and looked up at her trustworthy, sane face. "Professor McGonagall..."


Another interesting course of research would be to examine whether or not wizards in general are more mentally unstable than muggles.


quote:


"Yes, Mr. Potter?"

"Do you think I should?" Harry said in a small voice. "Carry my father's rock everywhere?"

Professor McGonagall sighed. "That is between you and the Headmaster, I'm afraid." She hesitated. "I will say that ignoring the Headmaster completely is almost never wise. I am sorry to hear of your dilemma, Mr. Potter, and if there's any way I can help you with whatever you decide to do -"

"Um," Harry said. "Actually I was thinking that once I know how, I could Transfigure the rock into a ring and wear it on my finger. If you could teach me how to sustain a Transfiguration -"

"It is good that you asked me first," Professor McGonagall said, her face growing a bit stern. "If you lost control of the Transfiguration the reversal would cut off your finger and probably rip your hand in half. And at your age, even a ring is too large a target for you to sustain indefinitely without it being a serious drain on your magic. But I can have a ring forged for you with a setting for a jewel, a small jewel, in contact with your skin, and you can practice sustaining a safe subject, like a marshmallow. When you have kept it up successfully, even in your sleep, for a full month, I will allow you to Transfigure, ah, your father's rock..." Professor McGonagall's voice trailed off. "Did the Headmaster really -"

"Yes. Ah... um..."

Professor McGonagall sighed. "That's a bit strange even for him." She stooped and picked up the stack of parchments. "I'm sorry about this, Mr. Potter. I apologise again for mistrusting you. But now it's my own turn to see the Headmaster."

"Ah... good luck, I guess. Er..."

"Thank you, Mr. Potter."

"Um..."

Professor McGonagall walked over to the gargoyle, inaudibly spoke the password, and stepped through into the revolving spiral stairs. She began to rise out of sight, and the gargoyle started back -
"Professor McGonagall the Headmaster set fire to a chicken!"

"He wha -"


Still not clear on whether Dumbledore had actually set fire to an actual chicken or if Dumbledore had been telling the truth and Eliezarry’s scepticism / understandable fear of Dumbledore had led him to the wrong interpretation of the situation.

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