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Galvanik
Feb 28, 2013

In the xmen comics a lot of the allegory about mutants being an unjustly persecuted minority always fell flat for me. Even as a kid I felt like someone who can read and control minds, or has a loaded bazooka for an arm is someone the government should be keeping track of.

Similarly this scene just falls flat on it's face. Body image issues exist, but nobody who believes that they're ugly no-matter-what is an actual 10 foot tall orange ogre covered in razors. And then you have a gas cloud complaining about how the word "body" marginalizes her, after having a rhinosaurus looking woman yell at a porn star about body image.

It's so absurd I'm really struggling to take it seriously, and the comic wants very much to be serious.

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a cartoon duck
Sep 5, 2011

trigger warning: bodies

Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747

Galvanik posted:

a rhinosaurus looking woman yell at a porn star about body image.
I don't think Carmen is actually a porn star, I think this was just the frustrated heap of sharp metal plates being jealous.

Woebin
Feb 6, 2006

This must be a parody at this point, it's dumber than Raine Dog.

Wittgen
Oct 13, 2012

We have decided to decline your offer of a butt kicking.

Galvanik posted:

In the xmen comics a lot of the allegory about mutants being an unjustly persecuted minority always fell flat for me. Even as a kid I felt like someone who can read and control minds, or has a loaded bazooka for an arm is someone the government should be keeping track of.

Similarly this scene just falls flat on it's face. Body image issues exist, but nobody who believes that they're ugly no-matter-what is an actual 10 foot tall orange ogre covered in razors. And then you have a gas cloud complaining about how the word "body" marginalizes her, after having a rhinosaurus looking woman yell at a porn star about body image.

It's so absurd I'm really struggling to take it seriously, and the comic wants very much to be serious.

This is well said. The body thing, especially, just blows me away. I cannot get my head around how that word could be offensive or outdated. There have been incorporeal people for like 20 years in this comic. And how could its use make this person feel unsafe? I get how it would suck to not have a body when everyone else has one, but I don' think that confers a right to decide how everyone else refers to their bodies.

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007

Wittgen posted:

There have been incorporeal people

They prefer the term "Spectral-Americans."

It's funny how this comic seems to be confirming the worst stereotypes of the very ideals it purports to examine.

Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747

Wittgen posted:

And how could its use make this person feel unsafe?

That's largely what makes it read like a parody to me. If Tina in the Tin Can had said something like how it makes her feel excluded, or not listened to, or that this whole thing is irrelevant to her, then it'd make sense. If she said it was a constant reminder of what she lost, it'd make sense as well. But they went for "safe". Since we have no reason to know how and why the word "body" would make her feel threatened, it just makes the whole scene insincere. And the linguistic contortions the other characters go through afterwards just increase the ridiculousness.

Discendo Vox
Mar 21, 2013

This does not make sense when, again, aggregate indicia also indicate improvements. The belief that things are worse is false. It remains false.
I am starting to sympathize with whomever is targeting and killing the mutants in this comic.

RiotGearEpsilon
Jun 26, 2005
SHAVE ME FROM MY SHELF
This is a truly bizarre conversation to overhear.

ManlyGrunting
May 29, 2014
You know I've said it before, but I'm reminded that they managed to make the strawman dudebro flame guy one of the better characters in the comic because they spent the bare minimum trying to make him sympathetic and it actually succeeded in making him come across as subtle and nuanced and human. I think the biggest flaw in this comic is that they so desperately want to get a message across that they overwrite the hell out of their big scenes and it gives readers very little to actually engage with. I think the SAT word I would use to describe this comic is "didactic".

blastron
Dec 11, 2007

Don't doodle on it!


Yeah, I lost all hope for this scene once the words "safe" and "triggered" came out, then everyone started dancing around the subject of that-which-must-not-be-spoken. Being excluded from a group that is already excluded is a big thing that the author could have brought good attention to, but now it just sounds like parody.

Say better words, fart cloud lady! Words like "excluded" or "unwelcome" or even "ignored". Because those are the emotions you are feeling, not some generic "triggered" or "unsafe" condition, and then people around you can make reasonable decisions about how to make you feel less bad.

I bet fart cloud lady was added solely to have a CHECK YOUR PRIVILEGE scene in a discussion group for people who are already unprivileged, since we need to go balls-deep on the "there are people in disadvantaged groups who are even more disadvantaged" thing, even though we're already 3+ levels deep in the disadvantage pile.

Evrart Claire
Jan 11, 2008
Next page is a hivemind of insects stating she is feels unsafe by the use of the word "being" as a singular.

The Lord of Hats
Aug 22, 2010

Hello, yes! Is being very good day for posting, no?
I think there's a point to be made still--namely that playing Oppression Olympics doesn't help anybody and just fractures people who should be able to unite for a common cause--but I don't have much faith that this is going to pull through. It's a shame considering how the arc's gone fairly well up to this point.

Evrart Claire
Jan 11, 2008

The Lord of Hats posted:

I think there's a point to be made still--namely that playing Oppression Olympics doesn't help anybody and just fractures people who should be able to unite for a common cause

OK wait scratch what I said before next page is going to be Allison interjecting to badly attempt to make this point.

McSpanky
Jan 16, 2005






But not before a cooperative mass of sentient amoebas checks the privilege of all the eukaryotes in the room and their insensitivity towards trans-cellular entities.

ManlyGrunting
May 29, 2014
I would love it if this ended with Alison snapping and turning full Randroid.

Deptfordx
Dec 23, 2013

Be sure to read the comments.

Even a lot of the fans are 'Eerrrhhhhmmmmm.......'

RiotGearEpsilon
Jun 26, 2005
SHAVE ME FROM MY SHELF
I'm starting to feel like the actual situation here is less weird than the writing. I can completely believe that Tina - who, let's remember, was by inexplicable act of god violently and abruptly transmuted in to a slime that apparently needs mechanical assistance to speak and move, akin to a paralyzed person dependent on a wheelchair and a communication aid - would want them to not use the word 'body'. This isn't a therapy session, this is a support group. They're not looking to grow through adversity here, they're looking for a place of safety and solace. Some of their wants and needs are going to be bizarre from our perspective.

The thing that bewilders me the most is how completely effortless it comes off as, when I can't imagine this would go so very, very smoothly.

SlothfulCobra
Mar 27, 2011

Lady, you're a body....of water...or gas, it could be either, the art's a bit ambiguous.

But seriously, you're putting people who are severely impaired from their condition in the same room with people who just look a little funny. I wouldn't be surprised if the girl who just had the outburst there just up and left during the asari's page-long discussion about not saying the word "body" in reference to their horribly disfigured bodies. God almighty, this is insufferable.

Patrick Spens
Jul 21, 2006

"Every quarterback says they've got guts, But how many have actually seen 'em?"
Pillbug
I think it's a really weird situation, and I'm actually interested in reading a few more pages of the, "Don't look at me, I'm a monster" support group. But the real value is in the comments

quote:

Wow, the comments are especially terrible today. So many men mansplaining what a body is and having no clue of what support groups are actually like. This is saddening.

Oh my god.

Hollismason
Jun 30, 2007
An alright dude.
This is loving awful and kind of offensive. I was interested in where it was going but its so badly done that it just become offensive.

RiotGearEpsilon
Jun 26, 2005
SHAVE ME FROM MY SHELF
It's worth considering - this only just occurred to me - if anyone has a right to claim 'trigger warnings', its Tina. It's completely believable that she has post-traumatic stress disorder; abruptly starting to dissolve in to a mute, semi-mobile mass of shapeless moist fluid is one of the most nightmarish, kafka-esque scenarios I can imagine someone enduring.

SlothfulCobra is totally right. Her problems are so much more severe than everyone else here that it's a little odd that she's even in the room for this event - but she is, so it's appropriate for the moderator to make some effort to make her welcome.

Frankly, the more I think about Tina's presence here, the more uncomfortable this whole sequence makes me. If you show up to a disability support group, and you have no legs, and someone in the room is talking unhappily about the difficulties their club foot causes them, while someone else in the room has no arms or legs and communicates using a puff-sip speech machine on a computerized wheelchair... What a loving minefield of faux pas waiting to happen.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
A wispy democratic aggregate of plasma particles that can only communicate through visual pictograms formed in its clouds one-ups Tina by showing a cartoon anthropomorphized book firing a machine gun ("words are triggering me")

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
I think in reality, support groups members are much more ready to call someone on dumb bullshit though.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
A vague emanation of outrage pours from everyone's cell phones as a heretofore imperceptible attendee who can't even manifest in the physical world is triggered by everyone rudely flaunting their matter privilege

ManlyGrunting
May 29, 2014

Patrick Spens posted:

I think it's a really weird situation, and I'm actually interested in reading a few more pages of the, "Don't look at me, I'm a monster" support group. But the real value is in the comments


Oh my god.

How do you mansplain a problem that doesn't exist? :psyduck:

Wittgen
Oct 13, 2012

We have decided to decline your offer of a butt kicking.

The Lord of Hats posted:

I think there's a point to be made still--namely that playing Oppression Olympics doesn't help anybody and just fractures people who should be able to unite for a common cause--but I don't have much faith that this is going to pull through. It's a shame considering how the arc's gone fairly well up to this point.

This would be a good point, but it doesn't feel like the comic knows that Oppression Olympics is a very real, fairly bad thing that goes on. It feels more like it's taking Oppression Olympics as the natural order of things.

Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747

ManlyGrunting posted:

How do you mansplain a problem that doesn't exist? :psyduck:

The fact it doesn't exist means that mansplaining is the only explaining of it that can happen, since no one can speak from the perspective of actually having experienced it.

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007

ManlyGrunting posted:

You know I've said it before, but I'm reminded that they managed to make the strawman dudebro flame guy one of the better characters in the comic because they spent the bare minimum trying to make him sympathetic and it actually succeeded in making him come across as subtle and nuanced and human. I think the biggest flaw in this comic is that they so desperately want to get a message across that they overwrite the hell out of their big scenes and it gives readers very little to actually engage with. I think the SAT word I would use to describe this comic is "didactic".

I wanted to go for "sanctimonious" but yours is better since it doesn't seem to try and take a moral high ground unless Allison's involved.

I've dipped into SFP on and off out of morbid curiosity but it seems to have the same problem on repeat - it sincerely, earnestly wants to address social issues through an offbeat superhero allegory, but unfortunately it's written by complete god damned idiots and so it constantly validates the same harmful viewpoints it tries to confront.

Oxxidation fucked around with this message at 02:02 on Jul 9, 2016

Gravitas Shortfall
Jul 17, 2007

Utility is seven-eighths Proximity.


basically "Worthy" does not automatically equal "Good"

Al-Saqr
Nov 11, 2007

One Day I Will Return To Your Side.
This entire discussion group sequence reads like something a crazed right winger MRA type person would write if he wanted to parody and make fun of rights activists and support groups.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
And so do the comments

Nuebot
Feb 18, 2013

The developer of Brigador is a secret chud, don't give him money

Hollismason posted:

This is loving awful and kind of offensive. I was interested in where it was going but its so badly done that it just become offensive.

Remember when everyone came to the conclusion that the crazy invisible lady who kidnapped, drugged and attempted to murder an unstable super hero on unproven suspicions, after a murder spree, was in the right and was in fact the most morally right and correct person of all?

And after the guy she drugged went nuclear and broke a dam it was all just kind of blamed on him.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
Somebody in the comments for this current page still defended Mary as being right.

McSpanky
Jan 16, 2005






ManlyGrunting posted:

How do you mansplain a problem that doesn't exist? :psyduck:

Look at this realnorm's contempt for the conceptfluid :rolleyes:

Deptfordx
Dec 23, 2013

Nuebot posted:


And after the guy she drugged went nuclear and broke a dam it was all just kind of blamed on him.

I actually liked that bit. Not the blaming part. The whole ludicrous plan of "Ha Ha! I have captured you, now you must listen helpless to escape, for you see I have wired a bomb to your chest.....etc." Which immediately goes tits up as the confused, panicked, drug aftereffects suffering guy instinctivly starts powering up, as of course he would. An actual example of something that works in most comic books that would really horribly misfire.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
She was just going to murder him anyway at the slightest hint of some kind of past sin, she admitted in conversation with Allison that she was totally fine with not being 100% sure. I mean once you've kidnapped a person, drugged them, dragged them off into a remote location, and rigged them with a bomb you're kind of obviously not planning on walking that back.

Deptfordx
Dec 23, 2013

Oh absolutely. It was the total failure of the plan I was addressing.

Nuebot
Feb 18, 2013

The developer of Brigador is a secret chud, don't give him money

Flesh Forge posted:

Somebody in the comments for this current page still defended Mary as being right.

That's amazing.

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McSpanky
Jan 16, 2005






Nuebot posted:

Remember when everyone came to the conclusion that the crazy invisible lady who kidnapped, drugged and attempted to murder an unstable super hero on unproven suspicions, after a murder spree, was in the right and was in fact the most morally right and correct person of all?

And after the guy she drugged went nuclear and broke a dam it was all just kind of blamed on him.

It's especially messed up that this happens in a comic that goes out of its way to call out and dismantle victim blaming. I mean vigilantism is basically victim blaming's big angry older brother, you're justifying murder by saying to yourself that the victims had it coming. Eventually you'll start to notice that a lot of those people who had it coming have similar beliefs, or wear the same clothes, or hang out together... why bother waiting for them to do it, you already know the type. If they didn't want to get murdered they shouldn't have said it/worn it/ganged up like that, know what I mean? #marywasright #bernardgoetzit

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