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Hogge Wild
Aug 21, 2012

by FactsAreUseless
Pillbug


"It's not rape, because she's a good person!"

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Wittgen
Oct 13, 2012

We have decided to decline your offer of a butt kicking.
Unreal. Digging into replies to that tweet a little bit, she agreed with a tweet saying there were very specific legal definitions of rape, so of course this is not rape. Which, just, what?

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
If it's a legitimate rape, the libertarian body has ways of shutting that whole thing down

Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747

Wittgen posted:

Unreal. Digging into replies to that tweet a little bit, she agreed with a tweet saying there were very specific legal definitions of rape, so of course this is not rape. Which, just, what?

In some countries, marital rape is by legal definition impossible as spouses are supposed to have automatic consent.

ManlyGrunting
May 29, 2014
Hell, you don't even need to switch the genders for both characters, this would be self-evident if Alison was male and even with Max as female, M/M or F/F would make wigs flip. The only thing that prevents this from being blindingly obvious is pre-concieved notions of what each gender can and cannot do AND THEY JUST DID A YEAR-LONG CHAPTER ON RAPE CULTURE. :psypop:

e: it is a rare treat to watch a webcomic pratfall in real-time, usually I learn of it after the fact.

Batman's Shameful Secret > Strong Female Protagonist: The Key to Having a Sympathetic Rapist is to Make The Victim a Libertarian

e2: How did I miss the first time through that the full line was "Well sweetheart, I was only asking as a courtesy. Let's go." I know I've said the comic needed an editor but I mostly meant pacing, this is something that should have been caught days before this came out. I mean I'm hooked, but only because I desperately want this to continue the trainwreck. :suspense:

ManlyGrunting fucked around with this message at 06:13 on Oct 6, 2016

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG

Hogge Wild posted:



"It's not rape, because she's a good person!"

Seeing as her avatar is an orc/half-orc I gotta wonder if she's a Dominic Deegan fan herself.

e: I hope I didn't mis-otherkin somebody :ohdear:

EndOfTheWorld
Jul 22, 2004

I'm an excellent critic! I automatically know when someone's done a bad job. Before you ask, yes it's a mixed blessing.
Cybernetic Crumb

Wittgen posted:

Unreal. Digging into replies to that tweet a little bit, she agreed with a tweet saying there were very specific legal definitions of rape, so of course this is not rape. Which, just, what?

No you see Count Dracula is going into Mina Harker's bedroom at night, penetrating her with his teeth, taking her blood and transforming her from a demure Victorian woman into a sexual night slave. That's not rape at all! Why would you even think that?!

Brought To You By
Oct 31, 2012

BravestOfTheLamps posted:

Sans words, sans art, sans taste, all ends in loss.
They sent a poet.
The real sad part is. This probably isn't just an artist who is trying to damage control a page that has been misinterpreted. The imagery and phrasing is very suggestive and if it were just her standing over him I probably wouldn't have noticed anything. Calling him sweetheart and stating that his consent wasn't really a factor just left no ambiguity. No, instead the artist actually believes that if nobody is actually being penetrated there isn't any grounds for a rape comparison.

Christ.

AnonSpore
Jan 19, 2012

"I didn't see the part where he develops as a character so I guess he never developed as a character"
This webcomic keeps getting better I'm kind of impressed

FlocksOfMice
Feb 3, 2009
Oh my goodness the artist even deleted the tweet?

How do you do an entire chapter on rape and then completely miss the similar overtones to a person who can do whatever they want forcing someone to use their body in a way they don't want? ? ? ?

It's amazing how this comic started out great, got kinda bad, got entertainingly bad, and has become a full-on train-wreck. It's an amazing flip.

Ashcans
Jan 2, 2006

Let's do the space-time warp again!

Maybe they deleted the tweet because they realized how wrong they were? Probably not.

Hogge Wild
Aug 21, 2012

by FactsAreUseless
Pillbug

FlocksOfMice posted:

Oh my goodness the artist even deleted the tweet?

ahahahahaha

e: did anyone get a screenshot?

Serene Dragon
Mar 31, 2011

So seeing she'd deleted that tweet I went into her feed and uhhhhhh

https://twitter.com/MollyOstertag/status/783685897854128128

https://twitter.com/MollyOstertag/status/783695243031916544

Hogge Wild
Aug 21, 2012

by FactsAreUseless
Pillbug

and here's the comic in the case she removes it too:

mycot
Oct 23, 2014

"It's okay. There are other Terminators! Just give us this one!"
Hell Gem

Hogge Wild posted:



"It's not rape, because she's a good person!"

"You can't rape men."

AnonSpore
Jan 19, 2012

"I didn't see the part where he develops as a character so I guess he never developed as a character"
Every time I read it I get more and more :catstare:

Two Inch Bee
Apr 17, 2003
Damn you, Lyle, and damn your style.

Ashcans posted:

Maybe they deleted the tweet because they realized how wrong they were? Probably not.

Whenever I see something controversial deleted, I always hope it's because reasonable people responded proportionately and convinced them that they were wrong. In practice, I imagine that's rarely the case.

mycot posted:

"You can't rape men."

I don't think it's fair to put words in her mouth. I'll agree that this page suggests a narrow outlook on what perpetrators and victims of rape look like, but I suspect it's a product of carelessness as opposed to a firmly held belief.

The Lord of Hats
Aug 22, 2010

Hello, yes! Is being very good day for posting, no?

:chloe:

That... makes me honestly uncomfortable with this whole thing in a way that I wasn't before. Like, no, the specific act being committed isn't technically rape, but every single aspect of the situation--from the relative positions, to specific phrasing she uses ("Well, sweetheart, I was only really asking as a courtesy") to the fact that she is using physical violence to force Max into a specific physical act ("sprinkle a little pixie dust"! :suicide:) is basically textbook rape. And if that was intentional, I'd find it to be an interesting take! But when you write it, like this, and you can't see for yourself how this comes across, just... what?

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
I'm pretty sure no one looks at that page and says "that is literally rape" but it's a very good metaphor for it, and responding to that with "b-b-b-but the dictionary definition says X" is super lame weaselly bullshit.

The Lord of Hats posted:

And if that was intentional, I'd find it to be an interesting take! But when you write it, like this, and you can't see for yourself how this comes across, just... what?

I agree it'd be an interesting story direction but the comic has had a recurring problem with this kind of big dumb blind spot.

Xelkelvos
Dec 19, 2012
How much text has to be changed to make the page about rape?

Bobulus
Jan 28, 2007

The Lord of Hats posted:

:chloe:

That... makes me honestly uncomfortable with this whole thing in a way that I wasn't before. Like, no, the specific act being committed isn't technically rape, but every single aspect of the situation--from the relative positions, to specific phrasing she uses ("Well, sweetheart, I was only really asking as a courtesy") to the fact that she is using physical violence to force Max into a specific physical act ("sprinkle a little pixie dust"! :suicide:) is basically textbook rape. And if that was intentional, I'd find it to be an interesting take! But when you write it, like this, and you can't see for yourself how this comes across, just... what?

FWIW, this is the artist, not the writer, right? I could easily see someone just making the pages as described to them and not processing the metaphors. After someone points it out to her, she basically says 'I didn't see that that, but your interpretation is valid.'

HorseRenoir
Dec 25, 2011



Pillbug
So, do the creators not believe in metaphors or something? I don't know how someone can write that page and not see the parallels.

Vonnie
Sep 13, 2011

Xelkelvos posted:

How much text has to be changed to make the page about rape?
First balloon and ninth balloon, maybe the second, fourth, and seventh depending on how explicit you wanted it to be.

Xelkelvos
Dec 19, 2012

Xelkelvos posted:

How much text has to be changed to make the page about rape?

Someone PM'd me this:

ManlyGrunting
May 29, 2014
Alison's dead, dead eyes in panel three are what really seal the deal. That is the look of someone committing themselves to monstrosity.

Typical Pubbie
May 10, 2011

Bobulus posted:

FWIW, this is the artist, not the writer, right? I could easily see someone just making the pages as described to them and not processing the metaphors. After someone points it out to her, she basically says 'I didn't see that that, but your interpretation is valid.'

To make the page she had to read the script, create the thumbnails for it (sort of like storyboarding for comics), take the thumbnails and pencil them, then do the inks, then add the flat colors, then render the whole thing. And after all that she presumably did the lettering as well. That's, like, 8-10 hours of work. 8-10 hours spent staring at this page, and at no point did she stop to think, "Huh. This is pretty rapey."

Typical Pubbie fucked around with this message at 01:18 on Oct 7, 2016

RiotGearEpsilon
Jun 26, 2005
SHAVE ME FROM MY SHELF
Understandably, she is now looking for someone else to handle comment moderation. Probably for the best, because hoo lawd.

Unlucky7
Jul 11, 2006

Fallen Rib

Typical Pubbie posted:

To make the page she had to read the script, create the thumbnails for it (sort of like storyboarding for comics), take the thumbnails and pencil them, then do the inks, then add the flat colors, then render the whole thing. And after all that she presumably did the lettering as well. That's, like, 8-10 hours of work. 8-10 hours spent staring at this page, and at no point did she stop to think, "Huh. This is pretty rapey."

To be fair, one tends to develop blind spots in respect to their own work. Which is why peer review is as valued as is.

A big recent example I can think of where you can look at something and think "How the gently caress did no one see this?!" is the movie Zootopia. Or rather, an earlier version thereof. Now, I consider it a real good movie and has a great message against the small bits of racism that come from our upbringing and society that, however well meaning, can be just as harmful as overt racism, if not moreso.

However, the making of that movie had several major shakeups relatively late in its production. One of which is dumping a plot point that had been in near the beginning: The idea that predator animal people would be required to wear shock collars that would jolt them anytime they got "too excited". Needless to say, it was hosed up, everyone else who saw it (Including people from Pixar) said it was hosed up, but they kept trying to make it work until the writing was on the wall, underlined, and highlighted. Despite all that, everyone involved agrees that the change was absolutely the right thing to do.

In other words, this comic needs a drat editor.

Unlucky7 fucked around with this message at 06:42 on Oct 7, 2016

Synthbuttrange
May 6, 2007

I'm looking forward to today's train wreck. Any idea how much lead time they work with, like if they decide to rewrite, how long would it take?

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
I don't even know why she put him in a headlock and bent him over and humped his rear end :shrug: She's super strong and can fly at high speed, she could physically control him just by holding his wrist.

Hogge Wild
Aug 21, 2012

by FactsAreUseless
Pillbug

Flesh Forge posted:

I don't even know why she put him in a headlock and bent him over and humped his rear end :shrug: She's super strong and can fly at high speed, she could physically control him just by holding his wrist.

But then the artist couldn't masturbate to it.

Typical Pubbie
May 10, 2011
This comic is so twisted.

Serene Dragon
Mar 31, 2011

I lost it at teary eyed Alison in the last panel.

Typical Pubbie
May 10, 2011

Serene Dragon posted:

I lost it at teary eyed Alison in the last panel.

"... Good" she says as she gives him a hug.

It's so sick.

BravestOfTheLamps
Oct 12, 2012

by FactsAreUseless
Lipstick Apathy

Elysiume
Aug 13, 2009

Alone, she fights.
"Why do you make me hurt you? This is your fault."

Typical Pubbie
May 10, 2011
This is one of those instances where I wish I could compare the script to the finished product.

Piell
Sep 3, 2006

Grey Worm's Ken doll-like groin throbbed with the anticipatory pleasure that only a slightly warm and moist piece of lemoncake could offer


Young Orc

Typical Pubbie posted:

This is one of those instances where I wish I could compare the script to the finished product.

Yeah, I would bet there wasn't any of the black panel stuff and it showed it until the comments section on the last post showed up.

idonotlikepeas
May 29, 2010

This reasoning is possible for forums user idonotlikepeas!
Nah, the movement from total darkness to gradual illumination in the last three panels is obviously intentional.

And yeah, this comic would, in general, do a lot better with an editor.

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SlothfulCobra
Mar 27, 2011

The fact that the author wrote a rape scene and the artist drew it without either of them knowing it is bad.

The fact that there is a rape scene, I actually like. I like Allison being so desperate for any sort of tangible progress in her idiotic quest to save the world with a liberal arts degree that she starts doing terrible things that won't even help if you think about it. I like the drat fool optimistic thing that this comic has been smashing hopelessly against the rocks.

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