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Reverend Dr posted:I also feel like pointing out that its also just really loving bad writing in general. The whole "Roosevent:Socialsecurity;Johnson:Medicare/aid;Carter:peace;Clinton:haha" ignores the rule of 3's, which is just so drat important for effective writing. in this instance talking about a record of accomplishment across modern history you should imo frame them either advancing toward the present or back into the past, as a way to show achievements building on their predecessors like its a real special but not uncommon case because the stuff is all in living-ish memory—so people have a strong sense of how they should be ordered—but not so recent that you can just slop em all in as current events, any order the more damning thing tho is that shes ostensibly building to a point that dems, are, good and she doesnt earn it. most of that graf is primary salt about how bernie made a bad no-no then a hasty list of things she likes about dems. she could literally keep the  if she wanted if instead of working in a rush to pretend shes being positive, she put some effort into the accomplishment section like"bernie sanders never truly identified w the democratic party. i always have. to me, the democratic party is the party of roosevelt, who fought poverty at home w social security, the public works administration, and the food stamp plan; and who made america a leader in world peace in ww2; it is the party of johnson, who built on those social reforms w medicare and medicaid and the most sweeping civil rights reforms since lincoln; and of carter, who negotiated the peace between israel and egypt. it is the party of universal healthcare and of victory against all qaeda. the democratic party is a party of thinkers like bill clinton, who worked w congress to balance the federal budget; and of democratic dreamers like kennedy, who challenged us to walk the farthest shores by landing americans on the moon. the democratic party is the party of diversity, but it remains united around principles of fairness, justice, peace, and american achievement. i am proud to call myself a democrat. im proud of our record in service to the american people, and im proud to build it higher and higher." and thats like ten minutes of work, a pro ghostwriter (prostwriter) should have slam dunked that poo poo
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holy poo poo were they people who were pissed at the bitter clingers comment? also why did 10% of obama primary voters vote mccain?????
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Shear Modulus posted:im the 4% more of mccain voters that voted for obama than other gop voters that voted for obama the economy collapsed between the end of the primaries and the ge edit: also, sarah palin anime was right has issued a correction as of 19:27 on Sep 5, 2017 |
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Typo posted:holy poo poo https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T133HavQld0 lol at the lady blaming donna brazile and superdelegates
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anime was right posted:the economy collapsed between the end of the primaries and the ge yeah those are reasons why obama won in a huge landslide but its still weird that a romney or huck voter would be more likely than a mccain voter to vote for mccain
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jesus lol at empathizing with Are Troops
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anime was right posted:the economy collapsed between the end of the primaries and the ge The impact of Sarah Palin can't be stated enough. I knew stalwart Republicans who were like, "Nah, gently caress that crazy woman." They probably all voted Trump though. Business success, all of that.
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Typo posted:also why did 10% of obama primary voters vote mccain????? given that the dems, much like the GOP, is composed mostly of white people, it contains a poo poo load of racists.
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Typo posted:
those were the republicans that we were warned about that crossed over to sabotage the democrats by voting for the unelectable obama
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zegermans posted:jesus lol at empathizing with Are Troops i can think of another group that probably got way more PTSD than the troops during Iraq but they're brown and poor so they dont count in the eyes of democrats
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McCain was going down well before Palin turned into poo poo, that was part of why he was desperately flailing to pick someone like her without even looking into it
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in what world is dread abuela a new deal democrat?
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I find it amusing how people found it unthinkable to have someone as stupid and aloof as Sarah Palin as vice president, yet here we are years later with President Trump.
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Raskolnikov38 posted:i can think of another group that probably got way more PTSD than the troops during Iraq but they're brown and poor so they dont count in the eyes of democrats good point my apologies
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Matt Zerella posted:in what world is dread abuela a new deal democrat? well, she owned slaves
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Matt Zerella posted:in what world is dread abuela a new deal democrat? isn't strange how all the accomplishments she calls out in the Bernie bashing people like Medicare and Social Security were things not produced by the New Democrat movement? Lolling how Obama's biggest accomplishment Obamacare is falling apart since it assumed big pharma and medical insurance industry would actually have interest in reducing costs.
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obama in 2008 was the closest thing to a mass political movement in the US in decades, even moreso than trump last year. nobody could have beaten him
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Shear Modulus posted:obama in 2008 was the closest thing to a mass political movement in the US in decades, even moreso than trump last year. nobody could have beaten him But it was a meaningless political movement since Obama pretty abandoned his coalition that gave him victory to server special interests such as Wall Street or SV tech companies.
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etalian posted:It's hilarious after all the hours Bernie put into her GE campaign, she still decided to bash him in her book. she's the female version of trump
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etalian posted:Lolling how Obama's biggest accomplishment Obamacare is falling apart since it assumed big pharma and medical insurance industry would actually have interest in reducing costs. Obama never assumed that because he was always in their pocket. He was just a neoliberal, darker version of Reagan - an optimistic smile in the front and a dagger in the back.
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lmao, apparently Apple didn't like the NYT article about the workface then and now, with how it's shifting to more contract work. https://twitter.com/SeanMcElwee/status/905091969801752576
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Shear Modulus posted:obama in 2008 was the closest thing to a mass political movement in the US in decades, even moreso than trump last year. nobody could have beaten him historically speaking his margins in 2008 was not that big, it was like D+7 Reagan 1980 was R+9, 84 was like R+19 Typo has issued a correction as of 19:51 on Sep 5, 2017 |
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etalian posted:lmao, apparently Apple didn't like the NYT article about the workface then and now, with how it's shifting to more contract work. sums up every problem with the nyt pretty well, tbh
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The NYT and WSJ are Apple's go to newspapers for product leaks, thought balloons. No way Apple gonna put up with their shade.
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etalian posted:But it was a meaningless political movement since Obama pretty abandoned his coalition that gave him victory to server special interests such as Wall Street or SV tech companies. yeah im not arguing that in retrospect its not very surprising since it wasnt smothered in the crib by the powers that be like every other attempt at effecting a movement within the dem party, eg, dean, bernie, or jesse jackson's attempts
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Go to gulag, leftcom.
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Nonsense posted:The NYT and WSJ are Apple's go to newspapers for product leaks, thought balloons. No way Apple gonna put up with their shade. the tech editor is sweating nervously
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etalian posted:lmao, apparently Apple didn't like the NYT article about the workface then and now, with how it's shifting to more contract work. Correction: We're knee bending bitches
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logikv9 posted:the tech editor is sweating nervously how can you tell when most tech editors sweat profusely just from being obese?
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NYT's op-ed writers are really dumb
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working-class* jobs** *: working class defined as anyone whose primary income does not come from investments **: in china
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David Pogue, NYT Tech Writer And Wife Charged In Domestic Dispute 2011 David Pogue, the New York Times’ star technology writer, and his wife Jenifer were arrested on Monday at their home in Westport, Conn., the Westport News reported Thursday. According to the paper, both were charged with disorderly conduct “following a domestic dispute...that police said turned physical.”
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that book is going to earn millions of dollars.
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It's funny because Hillary belongs in a straitjacket zegermans posted:that book is going to earn millions of dollars. the democrats have always been the party of failing upwards
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etalian posted:lmao, apparently Apple didn't like the NYT article about the workface then and now, with how it's shifting to more contract work.
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