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I AM GRANDO
Aug 20, 2006

Lincoln posted:

My only complaint with this film is that they should have manufactured a better Ticking Clock than “we have to keep outrunning the star destroyer until we run out of fuel.” Pretty much everything else was rock-solid, and everyone in this thread who says otherwise is trying hard to be a Cinema Discusso contrarian. Worst Thread Ever continues to deliver.

Another revision would have helped the script a lot. Much of it tells a story, but stays kind of clumsy in a first-draft way. Ideally I wouldn’t sit there confused about why there are ice foxes cruising around everywhere until someone points out a reason how they connect to the plot. I’m just baffled about why those ice foxes are just walking around in tense drama scenes. Just letting someone else take a crack at integrating them into the story would make everything smooth.

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euphronius
Feb 18, 2009

Native wildlife are a big theme in the movie.

homullus
Mar 27, 2009

business hammocks posted:

Another revision would have helped the script a lot. Much of it tells a story, but stays kind of clumsy in a first-draft way. Ideally I wouldn’t sit there confused about why there are ice foxes cruising around everywhere until someone points out a reason how they connect to the plot. I’m just baffled about why those ice foxes are just walking around in tense drama scenes. Just letting someone else take a crack at integrating them into the story would make everything smooth.

Uh, they were shown running into the cave fleeing the First Order's walkers. They normally live outside. They are afraid of giant walkers and not people. What more did you need?

I AM GRANDO
Aug 20, 2006

Yeah, but it’s just surreal in a silly way to spend like 10 minutes of the movie with a bunch of foxes sitting around in tense scenes. It’s not a dumb idea on the face of it, but just clumsy in a way a script doctor could maybe fix by introducing the idea more naturally.

teagone
Jun 10, 2003

That was pretty intense, huh?

Does anyone remember if the exposed kyber crystal in Anakin's lightsaber was split in two? Or was it just the hilt?

euphronius
Feb 18, 2009

teagone posted:

Does anyone remember if the exposed kyber crystal in Anakin's lightsaber was split in two? Or was it just the hilt?

Appeared to be intact.

I AM GRANDO
Aug 20, 2006

Like ideally my experience of watching a movie doesn’t feature me wondering why they wrote a bunch of foxes into the movie that just wander through all the shots and sit on consoles to be ignored by everyone until a character points out a plot function the foxes serve.

It’s not that I don’t understand the plot reasons why foxes are there. The writing and presentation is just rickety in a way I found distracting because usually movies have little looped in dialogue tricks to smooth over stuff like that.

teagone
Jun 10, 2003

That was pretty intense, huh?

euphronius posted:

Appeared to be intact.

drat. Still holding out Rey fashions together a double bladed blue lightsaber in episode 9.

homullus
Mar 27, 2009

business hammocks posted:

Like ideally my experience of watching a movie doesn’t feature me wondering why they wrote a bunch of foxes into the movie that just wander through all the shots and sit on consoles to be ignored by everyone until a character points out a plot function the foxes serve.

It’s not that I don’t understand the plot reasons why foxes are there. The writing and presentation is just rickety in a way I found distracting because usually movies have little looped in dialogue tricks to smooth over stuff like that.

In other words, you prefer movies to spell things out for you, rather than inferring things from what you see.

Lincoln
May 12, 2007

Ladies.

homullus posted:

What was wrong with it that wasn't already the kind of thing routinely appearing in Star Wars?

It was a Ticking Clock that too easily led the audience to think to themselves, wait, why don’t they just do X? Most Ticking Clocks are manufactured, but good ones don’t leave audiences scratching their heads. Episode IV’s “The “Death Star will be in range in three minutes” was wonderfully executed.

Also:
Get out of the trash compactor before it squishes us.
Evacuate Hoth before the Empire takes control of the base.
Blow up the shield generator before the rebel fleet is destroyed.

Thanks for playing.

euphronius
Feb 18, 2009

Animal chat

animals are established to be connected to the force in a fundamental way and act as a symbol for the Force. Humans exploit their connection to the Force and animals for various ruinous ends that causes spiritual and universal disharmony. This is explicitly shown in the Casino town. The presence of animals (life) at the end in the mine with the dregs of the resistance thus serves as visual and symbolic shorthand for their spiritual and political connectedness to the force. There are no animals with the first order. Indeed they sit alone in a salt desert like undead mechanical carrion .

euphronius fucked around with this message at 20:38 on Dec 19, 2017

homullus
Mar 27, 2009

Lincoln posted:

It was a Ticking Clock that too easily led the audience to think to themselves, wait, why don’t they just do X? Most Ticking Clocks are manufactured, but good ones don’t leave audiences scratching their heads. Episode IV’s “The “Death Star will be in range in three minutes” was wonderfully executed.

Also:
Get out of the trash compactor before it squishes us.
Evacuate Hoth before the Empire takes control of the base.
Blow up the shield generator before the rebel fleet is destroyed.

Thanks for playing.

Condescension noted. I was wrongly inferring that you thought they could have done a better Ticking Clock with the major story elements as-written, rather than "entirely new script."

Bongo Bill
Jan 17, 2012

euphronius posted:

Animal chat

animals are established to be connected to the force in a fundamental way and act as a symbol for the Force. Humans exploit their connection to the Force and animals for various ruinous ends that causes spiritual and universal disharmony. This explicitly shown in the Casino town. The presence of animals (life) at the end in the mine with the dregs of the resistance thus serves as visual and symbolic shorthand for their spiritual and political connectedness to the force. There are no animals with the first order. Indeed they sit alone in a salt desert.

Porgs, too. Chewbacca roasting one, and to a lesser extent Luke spearing that space piranha, point to predation as part of the natural order distinct from the exploitation of the space horses - made explicit when Rey was meditating and she saw death, but then the Dark Side as a separate thing from that.

euphronius
Feb 18, 2009

Bongo Bill posted:

Porgs, too. Chewbacca roasting one, and to a lesser extent Luke spearing that space piranha, point to predation as part of the natural order distinct from the exploitation of the space horses - made explicit when Rey was meditating and she saw death, but then the Dark Side as a separate thing from that.

Also the wonderful milking scene! The alien bird was so happy to be ethically used !!

Bongo Bill
Jan 17, 2012

euphronius posted:

Also the wonderful milking scene! The alien bird was so happy to be ethically used !!

can't believe we finally got fully exposed bare titty in Star Wars

Filthy Casual
Aug 13, 2014

Regarding the salt foxes: I'm on board with what Euphronius is putting down, but they also found the structural fault that allowed the surviving Rebels to escape so...pretty plot important. Also, they lived there, so I dunno why anyone hiding out at the base would be perturbed by their presence in their natural habitat.

Choom Gangster
Oct 29, 2006

This movie is very enjoyable, and people are overreacting to that 'Mary Poppins' scene.

She's a half-frozen old woman, shes not going to gingerly fly through the debris like Superman, man. I was more upset about the air-lock tbh.

pop fly to McGillicutty
Feb 2, 2004

A peckish little mouse!
It's like watching a movie set in New York and you complain that there isn't a B plot about why rats exist.

Lincoln
May 12, 2007

Ladies.

homullus posted:

Condescension noted. I was wrongly inferring that you thought they could have done a better Ticking Clock with the major story elements as-written, rather than "entirely new script."

That’s not the question you asked. You implied the ham-fisted Ticking Clock was normal for a Star Wars film, and I argued otherwise, with evidence. The condescension was an internet-argument reflex action. My apologies (for real).

The casino planet storyline was written only as a way to get Boyega’s character involved, so they invented a Ticking Clock to give his quest some urgency. It could have been one of a number of different plot devices, but they chose one that doesn’t make a lot of sense from a logical sci-fi perspective. An “entirely new script” is definitely not required. Fill in the blank: “Finn and his sidekick have to accomplish their quest before __________ happens or the Resistance fleet will get blown up.” They just filled in the blank with something that is silly on its face. Staying ahead of light-speed starships? Fuel? it wasn’t a huge deal, as I could tell it was just a Ticking Clock, but it was the only thing besides “chrome dome” that pulled me out of the movie.

Lord Hydronium
Sep 25, 2007

Non, je ne regrette rien


Yeah, every Star Wars movie has scenes where you see little bits of wildlife or other local color to set the scene that this is an alien world. That's what I assumed the foxes were until they became plot relevant. That was actually a bigger surprise than them just being in there for no reason other than it's cool.

AdjectiveNoun
Oct 11, 2012

Everything. Is. Fine.

Lord Hydronium posted:

Re Luke:

One of the recurring ideas in the sequels is the power of mythology, for good and ill. TFA contrasted Han as a mythological figure of the underworld and Rebellion with Han the flawed parent, and had Kylo Ren modeling himself after a myth of Vader that has very little to do with the real one. TLJ has some of the more positive aspects of mythologizing with the idea of resistance itself being a myth we spread through symbols and ideas. But it also has one of the more negative forms: Luke mythologizing himself.

At the end of Return of the Jedi, Luke performs an extraordinary act of compassion by rejecting the teachings of his mentors to look past Vader's mask and spare his father, and in doing so he saves the galaxy. And to the fandom and Luke himself, that's who he becomes. The Man Who Forgives. The perfect exemplar of the Jedi. The thing is, that extraordinary act is just that - extraordinary. It's remarkable because Luke goes above and beyond, not because it's easy for him. In fact, he only makes that decision after losing his own battle to temptation and trying to murder his father mere seconds before.

So now some years pass, and Ben comes into the picture, and Luke realizes what he could become. And while everything might have worked out well in the end regarding Vader, a lot of people had to suffer and die in the meantime. So Luke has a moment of weakness. For a second, he considers murdering his nephew to stop the darkness before it begins. It's not a good thing he does, but it's very human. (It's also extremely important that he stops himself, not Ben; while he has the moment of temptation, he was never going to go through with it, because that really would be out of character for Luke.) So Ben sees him, thinks Luke is going to kill him, yada yada years of darkness.

And Luke, the exemplar of the Jedi who can forgive anything, finds that the one thing he can't forgive is himself being merely human. He's bought into his myth so hard that his failure is not just a moment of weakness, not just a failure of himself, but a failure of the whole concept of being a Jedi. The old Jedi hosed up and made Vader, the new Jedi (him) hosed up and made Ren. Rather than accept he made a mistake and move on, he figures the whole Jedi experiment is a failure, cuts himself off from the Force, and runs off to find a temple he just wants to hide in and look after some books he doesn't actually care about. When TLJ rolls around, Rey shows him that he still has value as a teacher and Jedi, R2 shows him that people still need the myth of Luke Skywalker, and Yoda tells him to learn from his mistakes, there's only so much responsibility you can take for the actions of your students, and to build a bridge with the Force and get the gently caress over it.

The Luke who fights at the end is not the real Luke, in many senses. It's an illusion, but even the representation is of a younger Luke, wielding his original lightsaber. It's pure myth, created to serve as a symbol to inspire the Resistance and distract Ren. Luke can be the hopeful Jedi symbol and the flawed man, and he can have a student symbolic of his failure and one who represents everything good he has to pass on.


I think this post got lost in the discussion (at least I didn't see anyone else comment on it) but I loved this and agree 100% with this interpretation. I really loved how they handled Luke in this movie.

Timeless Appeal
May 28, 2006

Choom Gangster posted:

This movie is very enjoyable, and people are overreacting to that 'Mary Poppins' scene.

She's a half-frozen old woman, shes not going to gingerly fly through the debris like Superman, man. I was more upset about the air-lock tbh.
Honestly, I really wouldn't be surprised if Miyazaki was a big influence for Johnson. Despite being much more attractive, Leia really does resemble one of Miyazaki's old woman characters and the flying scene very much felt like a live version of something I'd see from one of his films. I personally enjoyed it a lot. I think it embraced a level of theatricality that avoided uncanny valley issues.

But it also spoke to the bigger idea of Johnson opening up the imagination space for what exactly the force is and what it's capable of in this movie. The force feels like it's filled with infinite possibility when Yoda speaks about it in Empire, but it's really only ever used for space parkour in the prequels.

Aladdin
Feb 16, 2011
I know it long overstays its due, but I feel bad that the casino planet stuff is largely discussed as being worthless or worthless for Finn when it appeared to me that a lot of it was meant to round out Rose’s backstory and allow her to drive the action. The movie did seem dedicated to rounding out the ensemble with her so for her (especially as an Asian character who doesn’t practice martial arts) to basically be forgotten in these discussions is a little disheartening...

Bongo Bill
Jan 17, 2012

Yeah, the old Jedi were pretty narrow-minded about what they could do.

If you got an issue with the particular appearance of that scene with Leia in it, just imagine she's pulling the ship to her, not the other way around and suddenly it's cooler.

euphronius
Feb 18, 2009

Rose actually bothers to free the slaves. Take that Qui Gon!!

Waffles Inc.
Jan 20, 2005

euphronius posted:

Rose actually bothers to free the slaves. Take that Qui Gon!!

They are promptly re-enslaved because Rose not only didn’t overturn the systemic issues but is unwilling to even allow allies to do what’s necessary in the fight to do so *sad trombone sound*

euphronius
Feb 18, 2009

Waffles Inc. posted:

They are promptly re-enslaved because Rose not only didn’t overturn the systemic issues but is unwilling to even allow allies to do what’s necessary in the fight to do so *sad trombone sound*

The horses.

Arist
Feb 13, 2012

who, me?


Waffles Inc. posted:

They are promptly re-enslaved because Rose not only didn’t overturn the systemic issues but is unwilling to even allow allies to do what’s necessary in the fight to do so *sad trombone sound*

that's not what happens at all

Rough Lobster
May 27, 2009

Don't be such a squid, bro

teagone posted:

drat. Still holding out Rey fashions together a double bladed blue lightsaber in episode 9.

I'd be totally down with this and in fact was hoping that's where things were going when she was practicing with her staff on Luke's island. She did seem a lot more proficient with her saber than in TFA, where she kept using an awkward looking rapier type stab (which would probably actually be really effective but they didn't really do a good job making it look good). Still I really liked all the cool new melee weapons the First Order and the Emperor's Guard used. I think Rey making a sweet light saber spear would be the coolest as far as giving Rey a unique and effective fighting style.

Timeless Appeal
May 28, 2006
I'd be down for her taking Kylo on with nothing but her staff. The moment where he swings down and her staff actually deflects his blade because of force magic I'll applaud while they internet tears itself apart.

CountFosco
Jan 9, 2012

Welcome back to the Liturgigoon thread, friend.

Martman posted:

The prequels are like the Crusades or something. Like, "Wow, it turns out Christians totally suck." Well, yeah, a lot of them have sucked throughout history. But that doesn't mean the ideas behind the religion are bad.

Does this mean that Order 66 was the equivalent of the 1204 Latin sack of Constantinople?

John Wick of Dogs
Mar 4, 2017

A real hellraiser


Rey shows up with a cortosis weave staff and her new best friend resistance Thrawn with a backpack full of those snakes that bar the force not work. But then they all have to team up when a bunch of Yuuzahn Vong show up, and they find The Jedi Exile and Revan frozen in Carbonite and free then to help in the battle.

A wormhole opens and a single runabout flies through. Sisko proclaims "Just where the hell are we Dax?"

They are hailed by Terra venture "You are in the Lost Galaxy. We and the inhabitants here are under assault by Trakeena and her army of Sting Wingers"

Teek
Aug 7, 2006

I can't wait to entertain you.
One of the movies Johnson listed as in influence was Three Outlaw Samurai. Looking back now, I can see what he was talking about. Highly recommended for anyone interested. Basically Some well intentioned and not well intentioned samurai try to do what they feel is right but it blows up in their face. Their selfish desires and those of the people they try to protect just end up making things worse.

ImpAtom
May 24, 2007

Al Borland Corp. posted:

Rey shows up with a cortosis weave staff and her new best friend resistance Thrawn with a backpack full of those snakes that bar the force not work. But then they all have to team up when a bunch of Yuuzahn Vong show up, and they find The Jedi Exile and Revan frozen in Carbonite and free then to help in the battle.

A wormhole opens and a single runabout flies through. Sisko proclaims "Just where the hell are we Dax?"

They are hailed by Terra venture "You are in the Lost Galaxy. We and the inhabitants here are under assault by Trakeena and her army of Sting Wingers"

Ready Player One is already coming

CODChimera
Jan 29, 2009

Teek posted:

One of the movies Johnson listed as in influence was Three Outlaw Samurai. Looking back now, I can see what he was talking about. Highly recommended for anyone interested. Basically Some well intentioned and not well intentioned samurai try to do what they feel is right but it blows up in their face. Their selfish desires and those of the people they try to protect just end up making things worse.

Sounds interesting but is the writing and plot a mess like TLJ or not?

Teek
Aug 7, 2006

I can't wait to entertain you.
It's a simple plot with complex motivations and outcomes. Take that as you will.

Alternately it's also slow and deliberately paced with a plot which zigs when you expect a zag.

Teek fucked around with this message at 23:34 on Dec 19, 2017

Lord Krangdar
Oct 24, 2007

These are the secrets of death we teach.

CODChimera posted:

Sounds interesting but is the writing and plot a mess like TLJ or not?

TLJ is not a mess, its about a messy situation.

Sombrerotron
Aug 1, 2004

Release my children! My hat is truly great and mighty.

Al Borland Corp. posted:

Rey shows up with a cortosis weave staff and her new best friend resistance Thrawn with a backpack full of those snakes that bar the force not work. But then they all have to team up when a bunch of Yuuzahn Vong show up, and they find The Jedi Exile and Revan frozen in Carbonite and free then to help in the battle.

A wormhole opens and a single runabout flies through. Sisko proclaims "Just where the hell are we Dax?"

They are hailed by Terra venture "You are in the Lost Galaxy. We and the inhabitants here are under assault by Trakeena and her army of Sting Wingers"
The horror. The horror.

P.S. They're called ysalamiri you ignoramus !!

PostNouveau
Sep 3, 2011

VY till I die
Grimey Drawer

Teek posted:

It's a simple plot with complex motivations and outcomes. Take that as you will.

Alternately it's also slow and deliberately paced with a plot which zigs when you expect a zag.

I think you'll find that it zigs when it SHOULD have zagged because I expected it to zag therefore 3 samurai is A MESS. :sad:

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CODChimera
Jan 29, 2009

Lord Krangdar posted:

TLJ is not a mess, its about a messy situation.

Nope it's a mess.

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