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ShinsoBEAM! posted:Umm I'm pretty sure their magic does work that way though in a sense, because throwing the live chicken into the tailroader actually did fix it, there are a few other clues hanging around that their stuff is real too. It's just that some of the characters think it's bullshit/luck. Yeah I just went to find that part and realized it actually *did* work, but the fact that they had it undermined by a white guy saying he went out to weld because orcs think it's "black magic" is still pretty poo poo. If the entire Hind was only kept operational through orc magic, that would actually be better; engines roaring because there's goddamned spirits in there, etc. Still would be real racist, but without the "white savior" poo poo. But there's also the part where someone literally names their species in Latin like it's just a known thing, because apparently they're genetically related to humans, but while that's a thing *and* they obviously have a society they're still on the PUFF list as "monsters" because they're "below" humanity. Like, I actually *enjoyed* trailer trash elves, I thought that was a cool little up-ending of the "graceful and wise elves" trope, but goddamn y'all the orcs in this series are depicted in a real fuckin' racist way
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 18:24 |
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If an orc becomes a vampire does that make it double racist if you shoot it
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 18:27 |
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Orthodox Rabbit posted:If an orc becomes a vampire does that make it double racist if you shoot it The racism is in two opposite directions so they cancel each other out and it becomes racist to not shoot the vampire orc.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 18:29 |
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Vampires are fantasy rich people and orcs are fantasy black people. Not sure I really want to see how those would intersect in the mind of a right-wing hack writer.
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^Fantasy Herman Cain^Orthodox Rabbit posted:If an orc becomes a vampire does that make it double racist if you shoot it Renegret posted:The racism is in two opposite directions so they cancel each other out and it becomes racist to not shoot the vampire orc. There's been a lot of productive conversation on the topic of implicit racial bias in the novel so far. I am not sure why both of you are so opposed to these conversations that you seek to derail them. Its pretty explicitly against the subforum rules.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 18:40 |
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So when Skippy convinces his orc friends that Owen is a demigod will he become the Emperor of Mankind? There's a lot of discussion about the racism in this book, but barely anything outside the updates themselves about what a loving creep Owen is to Julie, and I can't decide if I hate it more that Julie is reacting sensibly to his advances at the moment or not considering the inevitable eventual hookup. The worst would be if it turns out Julie resisted his "charms" and stayed with Grant because of some dumb hypnotism or love-potion-esque shenanigans or something and surely no Real Woman would have thought Owen was a creepo to stay away from.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 18:42 |
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Zanzibar Ham posted:So when Skippy convinces his orc friends that Owen is a demigod will he become the Emperor of Mankind? I mean the problem is that the origin of why Correia has created the relationship to have that dynamic is so obvious that there is not really much else to discuss. Its just "bad thing continues to be bad for the same reason"
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 18:44 |
There’s one moment about halfway through the book where Pitt gets his fantasy subverted in a way that immediately makes him and the reader very uncomfortable.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 18:45 |
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I still want Trip to be the protagonist. Julie can come too. Trip: When faced with darkness I held out for the light and lo and behold all I met were hick elves, guess I'll just have to be the light I can be. Owen: Can you install a vibrator on this gun for...reasons.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 18:51 |
Professor Bling posted:Like, I actually *enjoyed* trailer trash elves, I thought that was a cool little up-ending of the "graceful and wise elves" trope, but goddamn y'all the orcs in this series are depicted in a real fuckin' racist way The elves are definitely the high point of the worldbuilding so far and I would have liked to see orcs flipped the same way. Maybe an ex-British Army orc who went to Sandhurst and talks like Denholm Elliot.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 19:28 |
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Clipperton posted:The elves are definitely the high point of the worldbuilding so far and I would have liked to see orcs flipped the same way. Maybe an ex-British Army orc who went to Sandhurst and talks like Denholm Elliot. I mean, Tolkein’s orcs were the purpose-bred soldiers of an evil empire...
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 19:33 |
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Darth Walrus posted:I mean, Tolkein’s orcs were the purpose-bred soldiers of an evil empire... Not so much all orcs. Mainly the Uruk-Hai.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 19:37 |
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Is it ever explained why the protagonist starts having dreams or did I miss it? Is it just because or is there an actual narrative reason?
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 19:43 |
quote:Dreaming. Pleasant dreams, just the normal disjointed clearing of the human subconscious. I slept deeply, able to tune out Trip's snores from the other bunk, and my only visions were good ones. Julie's beautiful smile and full-auto assault shotguns. Byreika leads Pitt to a bombed church, and says that this is a Place of Power where Machado last tried to use the artifact he has to conquer time. He was unprepared and didn't perform the ritual correctly, so he failed and the church simply got blown up rather than letting him destroy the universe. He also explains that Machado wants to control time rather than destroy it, but his vanity keeps him from understanding that he won't be able to control it and is more likely to just destroy everything instead. Byreika finally places his hands on Pitt's face, and as he stares into his glasses he sees his face start to change... quote:Confusion, resolving itself into a hazy vision from long ago. The vision changes to a city of stone buildings and towering pyramids. It's jerky and distorted, with muted colors and sounds that fade into background buzzing, reflecting the imperfections of memory. quote:If I was truly viewing the Cursed One's memories, that would explain why I somehow understood medieval Portuguese. Ah yes, medieval Portuguese. Spoken by the medieval Portuguese conquistadors, of the medieval period of the 16th century. quote:The occupants of the city lined the street. Almost all of them bowed in fear. I ordered my men to kill the few who did not bow as a warning to any who would dare challenge their new rulers. My small army had penetrated further into the interior of the continent than any previous conquistadors and I intended to claim the riches of this city as my own. I led my men toward the central palace, lances up, muskets ready. Many of the people averted their eyes rather than see us in our armor and upon our horses. Bah . . . primitives. Found Mel Mudkiper some racism! quote:The priests were happy. We were going to send souls to the Lord, one way or the other. My men were content. There was more plunder, gold and women than they could have ever imagined. It was only through fear and loyalty to me that I had kept them from immediately looting the city. My troops worshipped me, and an entire country feared me. It was a good day. I hope this guy isn't as long-winded as an immortal demon in the 21st century. The king and royal guard all bow before Machado, except for one woman. Machado is a walking stereotype so he regrets having to execute such a beautiful pagan to set an example for his army, but he walks up with his axe anyway. quote:She cut him off. "I am Koriniha, High Priestess of the Temple of Neihor." I'm really glad Correia isn't trying to make a career out of writing historical fiction. The vision ends as Byreika returns Pitt to his own mind; it's difficult for him to do such a thing, so he can only do these glimpses of memory for short times. He also says that it would be a really bad idea to try and pull from his current mind because of how warped he's become through his deal with the Old Ones, but suggests that he might be able to send the equivalent of a photograph from his current location. Finally, Pitt asks about the Tattooed Man. quote:"Guardian of the artifact. Do not trust. He wants one thing. Just one thing. Get in his way—" The Old Man dragged his bony finger across his throat and made a gack sound. "You go now. Help your lady friend. Keep her safe. She is good girl. You two make cute babies someday." He patted me on my arm. As Pitt wakes up, he quickly throws on a T-shirt and jeans (no word on if they ripped under the strain of his bulging muscles) and sprints out the door, colliding with Trip and making him spill his coffee. He finds Harbinger in the basement library, staring vacantly at a heavy old book, and quickly tells him that he learned the Cursed One's full name and origin. As Harbinger goes to get the rest of the group, Pitt tries to rest at the table. Byreika interrupts him with his promised "photograph": quote:However, it came from such a tortured mind, so filled with hate and darkness and pain, that just the brief second I felt the connection was enough to knock me to the ground and leave me gasping for air in a blind panic. The Old Man must have made a mistake. I could feel the Cursed One as he sensed me intruding. I could feel his anger, and his promise to destroy me and the very fabric of my world. He sent me a message. I screamed in agony and clutched my face as I was wracked with spasms of unspeakable pain. Crashing out of the chair, I twitched wildly as thousands of invisible blades stabbed at my flesh. Tears streamed from my eyes as I thrashed about, trying to evade the pain. Everything went mercifully black. Pitt awakens to find everyone standing over him, as from their point of view he just suffered a seizure and passed out. quote:"How do you feel?" Oh no. Not Alabama. I could never stand to see the destruction of Alabama.
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Clipperton posted:The elves are definitely the high point of the worldbuilding so far and I would have liked to see orcs flipped the same way. Maybe an ex-British Army orc who went to Sandhurst and talks like Denholm Elliot. Yeah it would be interesting to see someone of a different race act exactly the same cognitively as a human. Like, have the racial distinction turn out to be irrelevant when compared to education, class, opportunities, etc.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 19:52 |
Mel Mudkiper posted:Yeah it would be interesting to see someone of a different race act exactly the same cognitively as a human. Like, have the racial distinction turn out to be irrelevant when compared to education, class, opportunities, etc. A later book has a similar depiction of a fantasy race as low-class trash. Gangsta gnomes. G-nomes.
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Mel Mudkiper posted:Yeah it would be interesting to see someone of a different race act exactly the same cognitively as a human. Like, have the racial distinction turn out to be irrelevant when compared to education, class, opportunities, etc. book 4: They meet a dragon who is a ultra wealthy investor, that is part of a self help group online over their addictions his is of course hoarding valuable items. So far it enabled him to be able to sell valuable things and spend money as long as it was never physically in their presence.
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chitoryu12 posted:A later book has a similar depiction of a fantasy race as low-class trash. Well yeah but are they gangsta gnomes or gnomes who are gangsta. The second is infinitely more interesting than the first
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 20:03 |
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Samizdata posted:Not so much all orcs. Mainly the Uruk-Hai. Naah, the orcs were modified elves weaponised by Sauron. Saruman just had better quality-control.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 20:06 |
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The last update had a lot of WTF, but the most WTF part was in the first paragraph.quote:... my only visions were good ones. Julie's beautiful smile and full-auto assault shotguns.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 20:06 |
Mel Mudkiper posted:Well yeah but are they gangsta gnomes or gnomes who are gangsta. I think the second, like the elves in the trailer park are just redneck elves and there's presumably "normal" ones out in Europe where they originated.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 20:08 |
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Darth Walrus posted:Naah, the orcs were modified elves weaponised by Sauron. Saruman just had better quality-control. Nope. They were a long lived early race that quickly hid underground a lot. It was only post Sauron/Saruman that they really came topside much.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 20:10 |
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ShinsoBEAM! posted:book 4: He's still a hoarder though, he just hoards information, which has made him fabulously wealthy
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 20:39 |
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chitoryu12 posted:I think the second, like the elves in the trailer park are just redneck elves and there's presumably "normal" ones out in Europe where they originated. Yeah, this is where a film like Bright also failed. By trying to make statements about class while also maintaining a near total racial segregation, it ends up implying economic and class-based stigma is a natural outcome of inherent ethnic traits.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 20:41 |
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Mel Mudkiper posted:Current status: an ever-growing that eventually engulfs the sun How embarrassing.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 21:02 |
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The abomination is where I realized that, for all the knowledge of civilian firearms he possessed, Larry had no better idea of military weaponry than a teenage COD player who thinks the m203 is used like an alt-fire to his assault rifle.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 21:06 |
Darth Walrus posted:There’s a bunch of dealers in Belarus who’ll hook you up with that poo poo - relatively above-board, too. Seriously, not kidding. Sorry, missed this earlier. Thank you! Also, awesome!
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Monocled Falcon posted:The abomination is where I realized that, for all the knowledge of civilian firearms he possessed, Larry had no better idea of military weaponry than a teenage COD player who thinks the m203 is used like an alt-fire to his assault rifle. What makes you say that? I'm willing to let the GP-25 slide since the rest of the gun is customized, so it shouldn't be hard for him to attach it. The way it's written later when he actually uses it in combat, he knew about things like the GP-25's stupid heavy trigger (check it out on Gun Disassembly on Steam and you can see how the trigger works) and that it uses caseless rounds loaded from the front.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 21:45 |
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Mostly just putting the grenade launcher on a shotgun in the first place. And I should rephrase that, he knows details about how military firearms work, but not how they're used. Mounting a grenade launcher to an assault rifle makes sense because it's the weapon the grenadier is most familiar with and can best protect himself. Attaching it to a shotgun seems to have little advantage over just having a shotgun and a m79 standalone launcher because you can't use the two at the same range.
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 22:19 |
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Mel Mudkiper posted:Well yeah but are they gangsta gnomes or gnomes who are gangsta. It's actually the latter, not the former, but hoo boy their introduction is, um, interesting
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 22:21 |
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I've often learned that "customized" is the key word in the arsenal of those who subscribe to the Tom Clancy school of "gently caress it, magic"
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# ? Apr 17, 2018 22:38 |
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chitoryu12 posted:Guess the cat’s out of the bag on just what Skippy is now! EDIT: Like it's still problematic and apparently not pulled off very well with the whole 'still classified as below humans' thing etc etc but the idea itself is interesting if not original. PetraCore fucked around with this message at 00:19 on Apr 18, 2018 |
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Also, at the point I’m at in the book (63%) it’s been established that MHI exclusively hunts supernatural creatures that have been found to be dangerous, but the PUFF applies to any non-human creature regardless of danger. This is a source of friction between MHI and the government because they actively harbor non-humans or keep their existence secret to keep the MCB from hunting them down.
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# ? Apr 18, 2018 01:02 |
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I just realized... This is going on in 2001, right? What month is it where we're at in the story?
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# ? Apr 18, 2018 01:11 |
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9/11 isn't present in the storyline
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# ? Apr 18, 2018 01:23 |
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Dammit, though kudos to him if it's because he realized he couldn't do it in a respectable manner rather than just forgetting about it.
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# ? Apr 18, 2018 01:26 |
sky shark posted:9/11 isn't present in the storyline Wait, like it's just ignored or this is a universe where 9/11 never happened?
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# ? Apr 18, 2018 01:26 |
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Off the top of my head I don't think it's ever referenced at all. Edit: Iraq & Afghanistan are mentioned, as is DHS which was formed after 9/11 so if it didn't happen, something else did that caused similar sky shark fucked around with this message at 02:35 on Apr 18, 2018 |
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Mel Mudkiper posted:I've often learned that "customized" is the key word in the arsenal of those who subscribe to the Tom Clancy school of "gently caress it, magic" The Ghost Recon: Future Soldier gunlab is still a work of art for doing that I'm more annoyed he said it had a custom select fire, when its still default Kalashnikov/Izhmash. All AK derivitives go safe/full/semi.
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chitoryu12 posted:Also, at the point I’m at in the book (63%) it’s been established that MHI exclusively hunts supernatural creatures that have been found to be dangerous, but the PUFF applies to any non-human creature regardless of danger. This is a source of friction between MHI and the government because they actively harbor non-humans or keep their existence secret to keep the MCB from hunting them down. Including trailer park elfs?
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# ? Apr 18, 2018 02:39 |