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Zerilan posted:So basically like, someone similar to Bakugou or maybe Endeavor from My Hero Academia.
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Jun 19, 2018 12:38
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I've heard of sleepwalking, but sleepcucking?
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Jun 19, 2018 12:44
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That is the laziest scene transition I have ever seen in a comic.
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Jun 19, 2018 12:55
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I do enjoy the shapes of the buildings. I dont usually see buildings where you can observe three sides at once.
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Jun 19, 2018 13:02
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Zerilan posted:So basically like, someone similar to Bakugou or maybe Endeavor from My Hero Academia. More the former in this example as the latter is known to the reader to have both done some unnamed mental damage to his wife and abused the rest of his family as well. Granted this current arc is going to deal with that and it's more than likely that the public is going to find out about Endeavors personal life in the near future which is going to make things very interesting for the current No. 1 ranked hero. Bakugou was a bully and lovely brat but also made sure he stayed on the straight and narrow outside of that so he's closer to how Furnace should have been characterized and developed.
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Jun 19, 2018 13:12
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I bet patrick is gonna die. Hopefully I, and every other person who has ever read this poo poo waffle of a comic, die as well.
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Jun 19, 2018 14:35
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Typical Pubbie posted:That is the laziest scene transition I have ever seen in a comic. I'm just... really puzzled over the notch in the black transition bar. What's the point? If you really want to do white borders for real life and black borders for dreams, just move it up a centimeter.
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Jun 19, 2018 14:41
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Personally, I would have waited at least a week before starting a new mindscape arc, but I guess that's why I don't have a webcomic.
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Jun 19, 2018 15:18
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Whoops looks like somebody forgot to hit a story beat! Better just have them go back to sleep immediately after waking up. This is very fluid and the right thing to do after the natural end of the story arc.
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Jun 19, 2018 15:23
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Synthbuttrange posted:I do enjoy the shapes of the buildings. I dont usually see buildings where you can observe three sides at once. I'm sorry that the high quality background distracted you from the storytelling.
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Jun 19, 2018 15:24
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What does Patrick have left to say? "Thank you for letting me be the little spoon?"
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Jun 19, 2018 16:05
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Dawgstar posted:What does Patrick have left to say? "Thank you for letting me be the little spoon?" He forgot to explain the entire Conspiracy. As did Mulligan.
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Jun 19, 2018 17:07
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This is strictly to tie up the dream poo poo from the beginning of the chapter and there will be no mention of The Conspiracy
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Jun 19, 2018 17:26
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With Bakugou and Endeavor, you have an author attempting to write characters for the sake of a story. In SFP, characters only seem to exist to serve as avatars for vague political opinions. It's really no different than the works of Ayn Rand or some lovely direct-to-video Evangelical Christian movie about a cynical atheist professor who learns to love God when she meets the right man.
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Jun 19, 2018 18:01
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So I want to focus on the "permission to cry" part. I think Milligan basically is saying that the only real way to be healthy is to be utterly driven by emotion and have acceptance and permission from a woman? So basically he is the softest of us all.
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Jun 19, 2018 18:23
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Bakugou is also in a position where the author has admitted he made him way too lovely at the start (like, actively trying to drive vulnerable kids to suicide) and it made it too hard for a lot of people to tolerate him at all.
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Jun 19, 2018 18:38
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TheHan posted:Whoops looks like somebody forgot to hit a story beat! Better just have them go back to sleep immediately after waking up. This is very fluid and the right thing to do after the natural end of the story arc.
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Jun 19, 2018 20:13
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He is definitely jerking off under the sheets.
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Jun 19, 2018 20:45
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Okay, so the people being made of paper is because Allison has super strength. That's obvious and a decent anxiety dream, even though we've never really seen her have a problem regulating the lower bounds of her strength before. Them having mirrors for heads is hilariously self-centered, though.
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Jun 19, 2018 20:50
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careful! careful that!
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Jun 19, 2018 21:06
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Allison is going to end up with Patrick for all the mind-sex because the one superhero essay the author has read was Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex.
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Jun 19, 2018 21:42
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Rand Brittain posted:Bakugou is also in a position where the author has admitted he made him way too lovely at the start (like, actively trying to drive vulnerable kids to suicide) and it made it too hard for a lot of people to tolerate him at all. Horikishi was also surprised that Bakugou was as popular as he was despite this.
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Jun 19, 2018 21:48
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No seriously, where the gently caress is Clevin. Did the writer just forget he was supposed to have only run out on a quick trip to the store? So this whole sequence of mind poo poo, Alison's bleeding prompting Feral to fall asleep as well to check in on her, the resolution, and now this second nap all happened in the span of like ten minutes?
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Jun 19, 2018 21:54
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clevin's off snorting meth from the blade of a bowie knife, while balls deep in a superhero-themed stripper
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Jun 19, 2018 22:17
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Hm how do I communicate that this character has emotional baggage? *draws big-rear end suitcase*
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Jun 19, 2018 22:31
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I look at each new page the same way I look at a firecracker that doesn't explode. Sure it wasn't going to be spectacular but it could have at least popped a little instead of just fizzle out. Clevin will be the new villain for not agreeing to a poly relationship
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Jun 19, 2018 22:46
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Brought To You By posted:Instead he's a non-entity that existed to be a guy Allison could intimidate in the early chapters. Then a confused mess of a character for Mary to kill at no consequence to anything since nobody learns anything except Allison who kind of agrees with Mary. I think you'll find that Furnace blew himself up, despite Mary's efforts to save him.
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Jun 19, 2018 23:09
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PetraCore posted:Allison is going to end up with Patrick for all the mind-sex because the one superhero essay the author has read was Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex. I have never seen a comic book in my life. This obviously means I am the best and most qualified person to create a satirical critique of them as a long form webcomic.
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Jun 19, 2018 23:17
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Inexplicable Humblebrag posted:clevin's off snorting meth from the blade of a bowie knife, while balls deep in a superhero-themed stripper Who doesn't like a good Thursday night? Friday is obviously super villianess stripper.
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Jun 19, 2018 23:42
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Breetai posted:Hm how do I communicate that this character has emotional baggage? I liked that panel better when I interpreted the luggage as a random surreal dream element but you're right, it's just totally bland imagery. That's not even how dreams work.
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Jun 20, 2018 00:12
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Could mulligan salvage the comic if it turned out this was all just Patrick mind controlling her?
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Jun 20, 2018 01:03
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Uncle Wemus posted:Could mulligan salvage the comic if it turned out this was all just Patrick mind controlling her? That would be very comic book-y. I genuinely wonder how something like that would play amongst his regulars.
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Jun 20, 2018 01:29
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clevin was a ghost this whole time
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Jun 20, 2018 01:58
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Uncle Wemus posted:Could mulligan salvage the comic if it turned out this was all just Patrick mind controlling her? People have been suggesting that Patrick's just using her since the days when it was thought that this comic might be good, what with manipulation being his entire M.O.
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PetraCore posted:Allison is going to end up with Patrick for all the mind-sex because the one superhero essay the author has read was Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex. Oh wow, I have a sinking feeling you're right. 
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Jun 20, 2018 05:48
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I read the black panel as a literal ‘fade to black’ and was like ohshi did they do it offpanel?
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Jun 20, 2018 07:07
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he's already jerking off in the first panel so why wait
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Flesh Forge posted:Oh wow, I have a sinking feeling you're right. EDIT: I don't actually think this is going to happen but at this point I am just saying the most absurd poo poo I can because the actual comic is just a dissolved puddle of bland viewpoints and pasta. PetraCore fucked around with this message at 07:17 on Jun 20, 2018 |
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super sweet best pal posted:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u_nPp64OrBc I miss park philosophy so much compared to this and I can't wait for them to start the next chapter of bullshit that makes the mindscape look good in comparison.
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