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Skooms
Nov 5, 2009

Mithross posted:

Yea I've started anti-anxiety medicine since my place reopened six months ago. Between all the bullshit that working in a kitchen normally entails, the extra bullshit (that's absolutely important, don't get me wrong) for the pandemic, plus being extra extra short staffed because of the pandemic, and just having to deal primarily with the kind of poo poo lord customers that go to a casino during wave 3 of a pandemic (so 80% belligerent senior or meth head, 20% regular human, at best), but absolutely needing the job, money, and best insurance (and basically only insurance) I've ever had, I can't quit or stand on my poor principles. So now I take xanax daily and just try to power through.

Man, I feel this so much. I was on track to gtfo in a week before this all came down on us. Everyday was a test. Drinking more than I ever had before, and for the first time, consistently actually at work just to keep myself from walking out. Was headed back to the city to take any job with less responsibility. I hope there's somehow you can escape that environment.

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Oldsrocket_27
Apr 28, 2009
Got to work tonight and found out that the person I was supposed to be on the line with was out because his SO was positive, and the person replacing him and the owner are both symptomatic right now but won't test. I called the owner and he insisted he just had a cold, but if I wasn't comfortable to clock out and leave. So I clocked out and left. gently caress getting sick and infecting my wife and infant son for his bottom line. I don't know if I still have a job or not but I'm looking for a new one anyway.

Air Skwirl
May 13, 2007

Neither snow nor rain nor heat nor gloom of night stays these couriers from the swift completion of their appointed shitposting.

Oldsrocket_27 posted:

Got to work tonight and found out that the person I was supposed to be on the line with was out because his SO was positive, and the person replacing him and the owner are both symptomatic right now but won't test. I called the owner and he insisted he just had a cold, but if I wasn't comfortable to clock out and leave. So I clocked out and left. gently caress getting sick and infecting my wife and infant son for his bottom line. I don't know if I still have a job or not but I'm looking for a new one anyway.

You absolutely did the right thing.

Shooting Blanks
Jun 6, 2007

Real bullets mess up how cool this thing looks.

-Blade



You did the right thing. Even if he fires you, you've got a rock solid reason for leaving the next time you interview - and hopefully it will make the owner take this poo poo seriously, since it doesn't sound like that's the case currently.

The Maestro
Feb 21, 2006
What you did was so right, that I hope you would have done it even if the owner didn’t say it was okay to.

Guildenstern Mother
Mar 31, 2010

Why walk when you can ride?
My toxic idiot former boss did the stupid thing again where he finds his best server and screams at them and gets way too up in their face when he's mad about something else and spent the morning asking if I could pick up a few shifts because server a "left unexpectedly". I really want to let him twist but I haven't actually found a coding job yet so I'm back in for two more shifts because money. He's lost a lot of FOH recently and I'm not surprised at all.

greazeball
Feb 4, 2003



https://twitter.com/SimplySnaccbar/status/1153657882304368640?s=19

Guildenstern Mother
Mar 31, 2010

Why walk when you can ride?
Actually that was the trigger, server A had the audacity to take the days off that he had requested and been approved for.

Oldsrocket_27
Apr 28, 2009
Done with that job, done with the industry (kinda). I’m already in school to change careers, got an interview Monday to work at the nearby little organic grocery co-op that’s been super good about mask mandates, sanitizer, etc from the very beginning, even before the government told them they had to. I feel good about all of this.

Shooting Blanks
Jun 6, 2007

Real bullets mess up how cool this thing looks.

-Blade



Awesome! Do you have a career path in mind?

Oldsrocket_27
Apr 28, 2009

Shooting Blanks posted:

Awesome! Do you have a career path in mind?

I’m studying biotechnology with laboratory work as the goal. There’s a good amount of opportunities in the field locally, both in medical fields and agriculture. My micro prof recently floated the idea of medical laboratory science specifically, but that would mean two more years of school (but also higher pay grade jobs). I’ve got time to decide on that.

Disargeria
May 6, 2010

All Good Things are Wild and Free!
Hell yeah man that's awesome. I got out of fine dining and now I'm helping run my county's local covid contact tracing efforts.

JacquelineDempsey
Aug 6, 2008

Women's Circuit Bender Union Local 34




Lol, this was totally me last week.

Been on light duty (not lifting 60 lb buckets of grits) for a week since I have a doctor note. Politely asked a co worker if they could move something heavy for me. Got stinkeye. I loudly announced "or I could just do it and y'all can deal with your ace fry cook calling out tomorrow, on a Saturday, because my ribcage is hosed." That got results.

Hyperlynx
Sep 13, 2015

Mithross posted:

Yea I've started anti-anxiety medicine since my place reopened six months ago. Between all the bullshit that working in a kitchen normally entails, the extra bullshit (that's absolutely important, don't get me wrong) for the pandemic, plus being extra extra short staffed because of the pandemic, and just having to deal primarily with the kind of poo poo lord customers that go to a casino during wave 3 of a pandemic (so 80% belligerent senior or meth head, 20% regular human, at best), but absolutely needing the job, money, and best insurance (and basically only insurance) I've ever had, I can't quit or stand on my poor principles. So now I take xanax daily and just try to power through.

I know this is probably the last thing you want to hear right now, but: please be very careful with xanax. Benzos tend to start losing effectiveness, but have tolerance/dependence/withdrawal, and you can get yourself in an awful lot of trouble very easily. Sometimes even taking them as prescribed. https://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3399358

Hyperlynx fucked around with this message at 06:02 on Oct 17, 2020

Mithross
Apr 27, 2011

Intelligent and bright, they explored a world that was new and strange to them. They liked it, they thought - a whole world just for them! They were dimly aware that a God had created them, was watching them; they called out to him, thanking him in a chittering language, before running off.

Hyperlynx posted:

I know this is probably the last thing you want to hear right now, but: please be very careful with xanax. Benzos tend to start losing effectiveness, but have tolerance/dependence/withdrawal, and you can get yourself in an awful lot of trouble very easily. Sometimes even taking them as prescribed. https://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3399358

I honestly appreciate the look out, I am very careful with narcotics, even prescribed ones. I’ve been a cook long enough to see someone abuse just about any drug you can think of, and beyond that am just naturally cautious after a misspent youth featuring my own addictions.

parthenocarpy
Dec 18, 2003

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parthenocarpy fucked around with this message at 17:31 on May 19, 2022

Liquid Communism
Mar 9, 2004

коммунизм хранится в яичках
What's with the dude with the dead possum hanging from his face and no net?

parthenocarpy
Dec 18, 2003

When you take off your mask (been wearing one long before covid) with a ten inch beard after an eleven hour shift, various dead animals are appropriate to describe the tangled mess unleashed

Animal-Mother
Feb 14, 2012

RABBIT RABBIT
RABBIT RABBIT
Anybody else having a hard time finding short grain rice? I don't need it for industrial purposes. I just can't find it in grocery stores.

Coasterphreak
May 29, 2007
I like cookies.

JacquelineDempsey posted:

Lol, this was totally me last week.

Been on light duty (not lifting 60 lb buckets of grits) for a week since I have a doctor note. Politely asked a co worker if they could move something heavy for me. Got stinkeye. I loudly announced "or I could just do it and y'all can deal with your ace fry cook calling out tomorrow, on a Saturday, because my ribcage is hosed." That got results.

Yeah, gently caress them, I had the same problem a few years ago when I fell and jacked up my right shoulder. I couldn't lift my arm over my head for more than a month and lifting more than 30ish pounds was a no go, and every time I asked somebody else to do something I physically could not do I got eye rolls and snarky comments. My reply was usually along the lines of "the doctor said if I don't let this poo poo heal I'm going to need surgery and will pretty much lose the use of my arm completely for six to eight weeks." That shut em up pretty good.

stringless
Dec 28, 2005

keyboard ⌨️​ :clint: cowboy

parthenocarpy posted:

I hope you guys are up for a series of posts like this. These are very short snippets of a larger project I'm working on chronicling my time as a cook and, later, dishwasher at some of Seattle's finest restaurants. I'm also looking for people to share their own stories of the dishpit and the odd characters who work there.
hell of a ride, looking forward to more of it.

the formatting could use a bit of work, but i can see you did have tabs it's just that they don't show on SA

Liquid Communism
Mar 9, 2004

коммунизм хранится в яичках
Inspired by a couple of the other forums, I've thrown up a feedback thread for GWS here: https://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3944730

Swing by if you've got opinions or suggestions, or something you want to get off your chest!

parthenocarpy
Dec 18, 2003

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parthenocarpy fucked around with this message at 17:30 on May 19, 2022

The Maestro
Feb 21, 2006
It’s hard to follow and then I didn’t feel like trying any more.

Naelyan
Jul 21, 2007

Fun Shoe

The Maestro posted:

It’s hard to follow and then I didn’t feel like trying any more.

Scarodactyl
Oct 22, 2015


The Maestro posted:

It’s hard to follow and then I didn’t feel like trying any more.
This. You should consider toning these down a bit--I get what you're going for but it's too much.

Mithross
Apr 27, 2011

Intelligent and bright, they explored a world that was new and strange to them. They liked it, they thought - a whole world just for them! They were dimly aware that a God had created them, was watching them; they called out to him, thanking him in a chittering language, before running off.
It took me a couple passes to get the story, once I did it was a fun anecdote that I enjoyed reading, but I do agree they would be more readable structured differently, even more extensive formatting would be nice.

That said I am enjoying them and would like to see more.

Disargeria
May 6, 2010

All Good Things are Wild and Free!
It's enchanting to read and I want to read more but I'm really struggling to comprehend what is happening between each sentence.

parthenocarpy
Dec 18, 2003

I'll do some more editing. Thanks for reading, everyone. I could just go on and on with these.

Hyperlynx
Sep 13, 2015

Putting speech without quotation marks around it is interesting stylistically, but makes it extremely hard to follow who's saying what. I don't think the stylistic payoff is worth it.

That aside I just did not understand that last exchange about the apple cubes, at all.

From a story point of view I wanted to hear what happened with the Gatorade wine. Don't leave me hanging :(

Still, I'd like to read more.

parthenocarpy
Dec 18, 2003

Hyperlynx posted:

Putting speech without quotation marks around it is interesting stylistically, but makes it extremely hard to follow who's saying what. I don't think the stylistic payoff is worth it.

That aside I just did not understand that last exchange about the apple cubes, at all.

From a story point of view I wanted to hear what happened with the Gatorade wine. Don't leave me hanging :(

Still, I'd like to read more.

Check again, there are italics now. The part at the end was a sarcastic remark, I imagine everyone has tried apples. When I said to the offer of apples "I always like to try new things" she knew I was loving with her and left with her tweezers.

Mithross
Apr 27, 2011

Intelligent and bright, they explored a world that was new and strange to them. They liked it, they thought - a whole world just for them! They were dimly aware that a God had created them, was watching them; they called out to him, thanking him in a chittering language, before running off.

parthenocarpy posted:

Check again, there are italics now. The part at the end was a sarcastic remark, I imagine everyone has tried apples. When I said to the offer of apples "I always like to try new things" she knew I was loving with her and left with her tweezers.

The italics alone help a lot with parsing things out, good call.

Hyperlynx
Sep 13, 2015

parthenocarpy posted:

Check again, there are italics now.
It's a bit better, but the advantage of quote marks is distinguishing who is talking, not just that it's speech

quote:

The part at the end was a sarcastic remark, I imagine everyone has tried apples. When I said to the offer of apples "I always like to try new things" she knew I was loving with her and left with her tweezers.
Oh. From the "acid water" bit I thought there was some kind of fancy preparation of the apple cubes, or something.

parthenocarpy
Dec 18, 2003

Hyperlynx posted:

Oh. From the "acid water" bit I thought there was some kind of fancy preparation of the apple cubes, or something.

Some citric acid from lemon juice in the water keeps the apples white

Guildenstern Mother
Mar 31, 2010

Why walk when you can ride?

Hyperlynx posted:


Oh. From the "acid water" bit I thought there was some kind of fancy preparation of the apple cubes, or something.

Sadly the essence of flavor eludes the chefs of **********

Schneider Inside Her
Aug 6, 2009

Please bitches. If nothing else I am a gentleman
"Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell."

-William Strunk Jr., The Elements of Style

My main feedback for your writing is that it is unnecessarily verbose. I think you need to go over it and edit it down. Not everything requires an additional comment tagged onto it.

I found the stories and subject matter interesting but it is a slog to get through.

Shooting Blanks
Jun 6, 2007

Real bullets mess up how cool this thing looks.

-Blade



Schneider Inside Her posted:

"Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell."

-William Strunk Jr., The Elements of Style

My main feedback for your writing is that it is unnecessarily verbose. I think you need to go over it and edit it down. Not everything requires an additional comment tagged onto it.

I found the stories and subject matter interesting but it is a slog to get through.

Brevity is the soul of wit.

-Shakespeare, Hamlet

pile of brown
Dec 31, 2004
Prose can be its own reward without functionally advancing the narrative, but that was not.

drgitlin
Jul 25, 2003
luv 2 get custom titles from a forum that goes into revolt when its told to stop using a bad word.
Coco Chanel used to have a rule about getting dressed to go out, and then stopping at the door to leave one thing behind as a final edit.

It’s a good thing to try and do as a writer, too. That doesn’t mean you can’t be descriptive or playful, but sometimes you need to write a sentence down to get it out of your brain as opposed to because it really needs to be in the final draft.

The first priority is to tell the story, not impress the reader.

Coco Chanel was also a nazi though.

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Naelyan
Jul 21, 2007

Fun Shoe
GWS > The Restaurant Industry Thread: Coco Chanel was also a nazi though

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