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Bismuth
Jun 11, 2010

by Azathoth
Hell Gem
Is this not weird looking to anyone else

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YF-23
Feb 17, 2011

My god, it's full of cat!


It's like that one horrible Captain America illustration where he's standing side-on but his chest is drawn at 3/4 view so it bulges out.

Mx.
Dec 16, 2006

I'm a great fan! When I watch TV I'm always saying "That's political correctness gone mad!"
Why thankyew!


the neck bone's connected to the, shoulder bone ♫

PoptartsNinja
May 9, 2008

He is still almost definitely not a spy


Soiled Meat
Both of his arms are forward, but even though their elbows are in the same place the left forearm is 'above' the right forearm while the left bicep is below and behind the right, which gives the impression that his left arm is growing out of the middle of his ribcage.

Also he's got huge breasts.

Mx.
Dec 16, 2006

I'm a great fan! When I watch TV I'm always saying "That's political correctness gone mad!"
Why thankyew!


PoptartsNinja posted:

Both of his arms are forward, but even though their elbows are in the same place the left forearm is 'above' the right forearm while the left bicep is below and behind the right, which gives the impression that his left arm is growing out of the middle of his ribcage.

Also he's got huge breasts.

drat he do

Mors Rattus
Oct 25, 2007

FATAL & Friends
Walls of Text
#1 Builder
2014-2018

I love that the final panel has him smiling. Oh yeah, kind and here for his friends.

Iacen
Mar 19, 2009

Si vis pacem, para bellum



Mx. posted:

drat he do



That Captain America drawing with his huge chest

Mors Rattus posted:

I love that the final panel has him smiling. Oh yeah, kind and here for his friends.

Everyone but orc lady and Snout looks utterly embarrased of being part of this comic.

Mordja
Apr 26, 2014

Hell Gem
Snout rocking those jumbo naturals.

Billy Gnosis
May 18, 2006

Now is the time for us to gather together and celebrate those things that we like and think are fun.
So he couldn't have any drama with Snout doing the opposite of what seaweed lady asked? She's dtf anyways with no acknowledgement?

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Remember how this moron spent the entire previous chapter picking his nose for hours rather than interacting with his supposed "friends"? What the hell has Snout ever done to help his friends except maybe hug them once or twice? He is completely and utterly passive in his friendship.

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!
He’s just pretending the Ink Witch is also troubled and in need of comforting when the chandak never talked to her and we saw the Ink Witch actually being there for her friends instead of just saying she would be.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Mookie couldn't actually think of an issue the Ink Witch has that might hold Snout back so he just stated she is and is assuming the audience will buy it.

Douche Wolf 89
Dec 9, 2010

🍉🐺8️⃣9️⃣

TheHan posted:

He’s just pretending the Ink Witch is also troubled and in need of comforting when the chandak never talked to her and we saw the Ink Witch actually being there for her friends instead of just saying she would be.

This will be answered in a tweet reply of "Of the Ink Witch has empathy powers so she's very sad with Arudak" or "you didn't see it, but the chandak told her that the redactor is gonna win" or some poo poo. I'm guessing he's gonna come see her at night and surprise she's the redactor, or durr hurr luna is the moon just like on earth for some reason

I love how cool the chandak who is clearly trying to gently caress their party dynamic up is about him rejecting her prophecy right in front of the others. She's not mad he thinks he knows better? Or might inspire the others to not give up over what some random lake lady told them? She had to vomit on his book and do all this lake magic and it's fine if he just fucks off not taking anything to heart?

Douche Wolf 89 fucked around with this message at 20:10 on Nov 1, 2021

Midnight Voyager
Jul 2, 2008

Lipstick Apathy

Rotten Red Rod posted:

Mookie couldn't actually think of an issue the Ink Witch has that might hold Snout back so he just stated she is and is assuming the audience will buy it.

Worse, he might have a reason and doesn't understand he needs to tell the audience. "I know it, why don't you guys??"

BattleMaster
Aug 14, 2000

She is holding him back though. Every moment he's with her is a moment spent where he isn't being handed stuff and given looks of pity from strangers

Douche Wolf 89
Dec 9, 2010

🍉🐺8️⃣9️⃣


Look at her

Bismuth
Jun 11, 2010

by Azathoth
Hell Gem
long torso and short arms, just how I like em

Tesseraction
Apr 5, 2009

Right-angle triangle foot and isosceles triangle foot.

Howard Beale
Feb 22, 2001

It's like this, Peanut

Bismuth posted:

long torso and short arms, just how I like em

She's changing her name from Corpsemom to Kaianda

skeleton warrior
Nov 12, 2016


She's trading her ink ship for a sad softboy snout panda

Roman Reigns
Aug 23, 2007

SatansOnion posted:

to my mind, Mookie’s still too full of hangups and insecurity to draw a proper gently caress scene. remember (because I do, and misery loves company) that even his self-styled erotica is nothing but wall-to-wall limp dicks. knowing well that I may have to eat these words later, right now I don’t think he has the balls to deflower his self-insert softboy on the actual page. that said, I wouldn’t rule out some sort of “camera pans to the open window as they get it on” shenanigans

Full frontal nudity is his comfort zone now and nothing indicates he's going past it in the comic.

Maxwell Lord
Dec 12, 2008

I am drowning.
There is no sign of land.
You are coming down with me, hand in unlovable hand.

And I hope you die.

I hope we both die.


:smith:

Grimey Drawer

Bismuth posted:

long torso and short arms, just how I like em

I want a girl with a short arm and a loooooooooooooooooooong torso

Mutant Headcrab
May 14, 2007
Has anyone seen any of his Patreon exclusives? Are they anymore explicit or is it the same limp dick posing? Because if it's all the same, imagine paying money for Snout dick, lol.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Mutant Headcrab posted:

Has anyone seen any of his Patreon exclusives? Are they anymore explicit or is it the same limp dick posing? Because if it's all the same, imagine paying money for Snout dick, lol.

I did, once. It was a dumb thing to do and I discourage anyone else from doing it.

There wasn't anything explicit at the time, but from the Twitter previews of the recent ones, I THINK he might have actually done some actual explicit art... But it's locked behind the $15 tier so THAT will remain a mystery!

There may have also been Dominic x Luna boning porn a while ago. We got to see Luna's O-face in the Twitter preview. It was... Something.

Mutant Headcrab
May 14, 2007

Rotten Red Rod posted:

I did, once. It was a dumb thing to do and I discourage anyone else from doing it.

There wasn't anything explicit at the time, but from the Twitter previews of the recent ones, I THINK he might have actually done some actual explicit art... But it's locked behind the $15 tier so THAT will remain a mystery!

There may have also been Dominic x Luna boning porn a while ago. We got to see Luna's O-face in the Twitter preview. It was... Something.

Thank you for your sacrifice.

I decided to take a page from Garfield Minus Garfield. Legacy Minus Snout.



EDIT:

Corpsemommy/Kaianda has hooves in that last panel, I just noticed.

Zereth
Jul 9, 2003



Wait

What's Aveksh?

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Zereth posted:

Wait

What's Aveksh?

Mookie knows, that's all that matters. You made the mistake of reading this comic while not being Mookie. Just be Mookie and it will make a lot more sense.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Mutant Headcrab posted:

Thank you for your sacrifice.

Found Luna's O-face.



Bet you're sorry you asked, right?

... Wait, no one asked? Oh. Well.

Zereth
Jul 9, 2003



Rotten Red Rod posted:

Mookie knows, that's all that matters. You made the mistake of reading this comic while not being Mookie. Just be Mookie and it will make a lot more sense.
Like, Mookie went to great effort to show them leaving civilization and traveling through a lot of not-civilization. This is the middle of fuckign nowhere. Was there a town just offscreen the whole time or something??

Mutant Headcrab
May 14, 2007

Zereth posted:

Wait

What's Aveksh?

Aveksh deez nuts

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

So I looked back, and... It's apparently the name of the island they're on? I think? But from what little we've seen of it it appears to be incredibly tiny, like dozens of feet across. I'm guess it's ACTUALLY intended to be really big, because the lake is also huge? Ugh, again, everything is so poorly conveyed.

Happy Landfill
Feb 26, 2011

I don't understand but I've also heard much worse
Watch, Orc Lady is going to try and naked cuddle Snout and Snout is going to Not Be In To It, and then Ink Witch is going to come in and tell him about how Orc Lady is manipulative and an abuser :downs:

Bismuth
Jun 11, 2010

by Azathoth
Hell Gem

Rotten Red Rod posted:

Found Luna's O-face.



Bet you're sorry you asked, right?

... Wait, no one asked? Oh. Well.

dear god

Moola
Aug 16, 2006

Pulsarcat
Feb 7, 2012

I gotta say this last arc not only shows off Mookies' laziness when comes too art, but also his laziness when it comes too storytelling.

This arc is suppose too show how much Snout cares for his friends above the legacy, but it fails for so many reasons.

These people feed and clothe him, provide him with shelter, they guide him by the hand through everything and hell, they're even his only ride out of this place.

The last time he actually did anything was the very first arc when he retrieved the pages, even the cabin arc was mostly just him getting through effortlessly due too being deaf and then acting like a punching bag.
So he brings nothing too the table, he's not strong, brave, skilled or clever.

You can barely call him kind or generous, yeah being there for vine clone was nice and all, but the moment people starting paying attention too her he shut down until someone told him he was a good boy.
And he's never sacrificed anything for anybody, and he has no personal stake in any of this beyond idle curiosity.
He doesn't even try to talk to any of these people beyond stamping his feet every time someone gets mad.

So at the end of the day he needs them far more than they need him.

And this is what I mean by lazy storytelling, Mookie put zero time and effort into building up to this moment, and yet he shoved it in there on a whim in the middle of someone else's story.

I hate using this term, but Snout is the very definition of a Mary Sue, he's an obvious self insert that the story and characters (Both the heroes and villains) warp around in order to hold him up as the best thing ever, and none of it is earned.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002



Oh, it's a city. That was just off-screen the whole time. That they didn't see when they flew over.

Pulsarcat
Feb 7, 2012

I'm not too sure which is funnier too me.
The fact that their Ink Jet went down hard like five minutes away from a city and no one came to investigate.

Or the fact that this mystical lake...seer? lives like right next to a major port city.

Seriously, where does she live? Does she live in town, does she own an upscale town house and only comes out here when it's time to shoot down a plane and vomit all over their books?
Or does she live in a soggy lake cave despite there being a city right nearby, just like Snout does?

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Every orc parent tells their kids to stay away from the weird naked lady that lives on that stretch of the beach

Twelve by Pies
May 4, 2012

Again a very likpatous story
Not only do we have Mookie's favorite thing, "If something isn't in the panel it doesn't exist," but everyone (except Snout) is apparently completely surprised that this city exists, on the route that they had planned to travel.

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Cloacamazing!
Apr 18, 2018

Too cute to be evil
This city sure looks like something that would have interested a curious guy when he saw it from an airship. Or something that would have kept a bored child entertained during a long car ride. Too bad it wasn't there half an hour ago.

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