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I hate how aggressively cartoonish he got in that last panel. Too little, too late, and too unnerving! Still more actual character motivation than we've seen from him for the entire chapter so far, though.
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Try to make the same pose with your fingers that snout is. It's not natural at all. Also lol at Snout saying he won't abandon his friends who are all sad and instead of seeing if he can help them, he abandons them to drool over food.
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The next page: Somebody rudely yanks on his tail and points at an inexplicable sign that says something like "You have to pay for these vegetables".
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he sure got over that bizarre interaction with the seaweed orc quick. what was the point of that again? to show us some butt cracks and sad dongs? i cant believe he put this in print, i can't believe a single person actually bought this e: looking at it again, i really dont like those hands in the last panel, something about their weird detail bothers me. DamnitGannet fucked around with this message at 06:54 on Nov 5, 2021 |
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Wow he sure is being there for his friends, isn't he.
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DamnitGannet posted:i can't believe a single person actually bought this I can believe a single person actually bought this. As in, I believe that he has only ever sold one copy, to a single person.
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So at a distance everything had this dense line texture that made it look like it was all made of wood, but up close it's just some buildings. There has not been a consistent design aesthetic for any place in this entire godforsaken thing.
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Again, this is the third times Snout's been wowed by the big city. We've been here.
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TheHan posted:
Snout is an absolute vile loathsome piece of poo poo
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Previously: "Maltak cuisine is amazing! I go crazy for it!" Now: "ZOMG raw veggies! My FAVE"
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Mookie making Ink Witch's breech of privacy more easily forgivable by making his goodboy protagonist into an unsympathetic rear end in a top hat isn't what I expected. Snout showing no empathy towards his friends and focusing entirely on himself was bad writing before but by now it's been going on long enough that it's becoming consistent characterisation. Maybe someone will tell mookie and he'll introduce Evil Snout to fix it.
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SubG posted:This is small potatoes compared to the larger narrative issues...but why is the sequence as presented "walking through the market", "standing by the shore", "looking at something in the market"? Like just swapping the order of the first two panels makes the whole thing make more sense, and it makes more sense as a continuation of the prior page. It works for me because it reads like what a nightmare would look like in physical form. There's a sort of reason to it if you squint hard enough, but everything is senseless and disjointed. Events happen outside of your desire, control, and understanding, and the only thing you can do is look on in horror as Snout greedily looks to celebrate his triumph over the orc monster by consuming fresh vegetables garnished with the tears of his neglected friends.
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Hmm I'm not very good at drawing vegetables, how can I subtley make it clear they are vegetables... 🤔 🤔 🤔
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Why show us a wide shot of a bazaar if Snout doesn't go into any of those stalls? The vegetable stall is a tent, which doesn't match any of the stalls. Also, I strongly dislike the motion lines around his tail showing us how suddenly his tailboner sprang to full turgidity.
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MuddyFunster posted:The next page: Somebody rudely yanks on his tail and points at an inexplicable sign that says something like "You have to pay for these vegetables". And then he writes in his diary about how bad it made him feel
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I love how these heavy stone buildings are built right on the ground, which may be generic "ground" or even sand I can't tell from the lack of details, a couple of feet from the water. No foundation, nothing too hold back the water not even doors. These people must love having to mop the water out every day, then having to rebuild every time their house collapses.
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Invisible Clergy posted:Why show us a wide shot of a bazaar if Snout doesn't go into any of those stalls? The vegetable stall is a tent, which doesn't match any of the stalls. Also, I strongly dislike the motion lines around his tail showing us how suddenly his tailboner sprang to full turgidity. just lol if fresh veggies don't make you hard af
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DamnitGannet posted:e: looking at it again, i really dont like those hands in the last panel, something about their weird detail bothers me. The left hand is attached to the arm backwards. There are other issue, but that's a big one.
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Moola posted:Hmm I'm not very good at drawing vegetables, how can I subtley make it clear they are vegetables... 🤔 🤔 🤔 Write it in on a prominent sign in a language foreign to your country, of course.
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Okay, I finally realized what's been bugging me for a while now. Where are they carrying all their things? None of the have any bags, they must have things like money and food, and we know Snout has his diary, ink and brushes. Yet they all dress like they're headed across the street, not dressed for a long distance search which might require some actual walking and searching. I'm not saying they should be decked out like adventurers diving into a massive dungeon, but they should at least have some bags or pouches.
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Snout had that bindle but Mookie got bored of drawing it I guess
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They're in their inventory
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When Snout met the Ink Witch for the second time she had a massive paintbrush with her that was gone within pages, never to be seen again. Arudak also had a big stick but ditched it before getting to Mongreltown (And before Snout magically fixed his back problems forever).
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Twelve by Pies posted:I can believe a single person actually bought this. As in, I believe that he has only ever sold one copy, to a single person. What, like as a joke?
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Everything has at least one person that likes it. I can believe there's one person out there (that isn't Mookie I should clarify) that thinks this is actually really good and wants to own a copy. Hell there's probably at least a hundred. Though we have people in this thread subscribing to Mookie's patreon, as a joke, so I'm sure there's people that bought a copy of the physical book as a joke too.
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also I love how extremely easy it is to edit mookie's comics. Because there's barely any detail to remove and he just uses either solid black or white tones 99% of the time lol e; 30 seconds of editing  another 30 seconds  I'm not really sure what point I'm trying to make here. I'm just sort of mesmerized by how little work goes into his work lol he just farts out a few squiggles as a first draft, "inks them" and done. I honestly reckon each comic takes him less than an hour Moola fucked around with this message at 00:58 on Nov 6, 2021 |
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I felt compelled to actually put something in Mookie's void canvas, I'm not a very good artist though and I got bored half way through e; here's the OG 
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Moola posted:I felt compelled to actually put something in Mookie's void canvas, I'm not a very good artist though and I got bored half way through Good artistry be damned, you created a far more believable beach than Mookie did.
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