Register a SA Forums Account here!
JOINING THE SA FORUMS WILL REMOVE THIS BIG AD, THE ANNOYING UNDERLINED ADS, AND STUPID INTERSTITIAL ADS!!!

You can: log in, read the tech support FAQ, or request your lost password. This dumb message (and those ads) will appear on every screen until you register! Get rid of this crap by registering your own SA Forums Account and joining roughly 150,000 Goons, for the one-time price of $9.95! We charge money because it costs us money per month for bills, and since we don't believe in showing ads to our users, we try to make the money back through forum registrations.
 
  • Post
  • Reply
quantumfoam
Dec 25, 2003

Gnoman posted:

I don't know what you mean by that, but the weapon you describe does not violate international law in any way shape or form. Therefore it cannot be described as "making them more war-crimey".

k, serious post time.

The book I read about the Predator aviation drone project was called Never Mind, We'll Do It Ourselves: The Inside Story of How a Team of Renegades Broke Rules, Shattered Barriers, and Launched a Drone Warfare Revolution, and the first chapter in it was a step by step account of the first time a Predator drone fired a live Hellfire missile at people in Afghanistan. I got through most of the first chapter WTFing constantly, then power-skimmed the rest of it.

The first chapter in "Never Mind.." was really wtf through and through, I essentially sounded like the first 20 seconds of this youtube clip on a loop as I read chapter 1. https://youtu.be/vOTfb2wcrn0

For example in chapter 1 of "Never Min..", the CIA was conferenced called in/watching the video feed of the Predator drone tracking the car convoy and kept saying "shoot. Shoot." everytime the car convoy carrying a suspected terrorist stopped, the program manager physically onsite at the Predator drone remote control trailer kept asking for the kill order in writing everytime the CIA said "shoot. Shoot.".
Then when the convoy stopped in front a large building with other cars around the CIA tried to pressure the image analyst also watching the video-feed/on the conference into un-seeing the minarets on the building the convoy parked at and give the green light to fire away. Minarets on a building typically means it is a mosque or right next to a mosque, and mosques are no-fire zones for US forces. The CIA kept getting pisssed off the suspected terrorist couldn't be identified so they pressured the legal department also on the conference call/watching the video feed to ok shooting one of cars in the convoy in the hopes of "drawing <the terrorist> out (so they could kill them with the remaining Hellfire missile on the Predator drone tracking the car convoy)". The Predator drone operator fired away, and I just put the down the book WTF'ing away, and started to powerskim the rest of the book.

e: the "tantalum fragmentation sleeve" thing in "Never Mind.." was the authors of the book humblebragging how they innovated usage of that tantalum fragmentation sleeve on Predator drone mounted Hellfire missiles because the default Hellfire missile only had a 20lb warhead and might not be able to kill everything/do enough soft-target damage when the missile exploded. Thus requiring the 2nd Hellfire missile on a Predator drone to be fired, and back then Predator drones could carry 2 Hellfire missiles maximum.

That is my example of a WarCrime.

quantumfoam fucked around with this message at 07:36 on Nov 20, 2021

Adbot
ADBOT LOVES YOU

Gnoman
Feb 12, 2014

Come, all you fair and tender maids
Who flourish in your pri-ime
Beware, take care, keep your garden fair
Let Gnoman steal your thy-y-me
Le-et Gnoman steal your thyme




That's usage. If the situation described is a war crime (which requires the violation of an international law or a treaty the US is subject to), that is true no matter what weapon was used.

That the perfectly legal weapon was improved in a perfectly legal way is not in and of itself a war crime, and being happy that they were able to successfully convert a single-use weapon into a dual use one is not "humblebragging about warcriming better" no matter how you try to twist it.

quantumfoam
Dec 25, 2003

Cool I disagree with you on the "but's that usage" thing re: using Hellfire missiles near civilians but whatever it's not worth derailing an entire thread over.


PupsOfWar posted:

oh wait probably the biggest pop-culture example is the gat dang Clone Army

"Yes of course, we use accelerated growth so these soldiers are actually 10-year-olds" explains Kaminoan sales rep, sagely


Clone troopers in the Star Wars prequel movies being maybe 10 yrs old tops and therefore child soldiers: yeah, how could I forget that.

In SF fiction, FIASCO has the most memorable WarCrime events for me, mostly because at first most of them are not intended. Then the human expedition starts getting angry they can't communicate properly with the two alien factions and keeps making things more a, I guess you could call it, <drum beat> a fiasco.

chainchompz
Jul 15, 2021

bark bark
The Halo books talk about the Spartans being used to run ops against wayward colonies up until the war with the covenant started, also as soldiers that were kidnapped and groomed to fight since childhood. Seems pretty warcrimey in spirit if not to the letter of the term. Basically sparks notes in this video but spoilers if you meant to read them yourself. Plus a whole bunch of other stuff I forgot about when I read a few of them ages ago.

chainchompz fucked around with this message at 08:54 on Nov 20, 2021

PupsOfWar
Dec 6, 2013

chainchompz posted:

The Halo books talk about the Spartans being used to run ops against wayward colonies up until the war with the covenant started, also as soldiers that were kidnapped and groomed to fight since childhood. Seems pretty warcrimey in spirit if not to the letter of the term.

can't forget the crime-est part of that, which is that the kids are kidnapped and replaced with clones who are destined to die quickly and horribly from turbocancer

PupsOfWar fucked around with this message at 05:44 on Nov 21, 2021

chainchompz
Jul 15, 2021

bark bark
That's right!

Cobalt-60
Oct 11, 2016

by Azathoth
There was a short story in one of the Honorverse compilations that seemed to have been written off the prompt: "How can we tell a story about cluster-bombing a civilian population and have it done by the good guys?" Not a bad story (one of the series that helped turn the PRH from Evil French Commies into something approaching realistic, but realizing exactly what had been done was disquieting in retrospect.

Anshu
Jan 9, 2019


Cobalt-60 posted:

There was a short story in one of the Honorverse compilations that seemed to have been written off the prompt: "How can we tell a story about cluster-bombing a civilian population and have it done by the good guys?" Not a bad story (one of the series that helped turn the PRH from Evil French Commies into something approaching realistic, but realizing exactly what had been done was disquieting in retrospect.

If it's the story I'm thinking of (the one where the Napoleon-expy cements herself as indispensable by putting down an even-more-radical uprising against the Committee for Public Safety), I'm not sure I'd say it was "the good guys" doing the clusterbombing, exactly.

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007

chainchompz posted:

The Halo books talk about the Spartans being used to run ops against wayward colonies up until the war with the covenant started, also as soldiers that were kidnapped and groomed to fight since childhood. Seems pretty warcrimey in spirit if not to the letter of the term. Basically sparks notes in this video but spoilers if you meant to read them yourself. Plus a whole bunch of other stuff I forgot about when I read a few of them ages ago.

In Marathon (the previous series by the Halo people and somehow connected to Halo) had the Mjollnir Combat Cyborgs. They were the predecessor of the Spartans and could basically be sleeper celled into a population without even knowing it themselves and then activated to massacre large populations with small groups. They describe how a small group of them (like, half a dozen) could and would wiped out entire colonies once activated. It's implied they stopped using them because it turned out to be a bit much even for the government.

The protagonist is one of them, implied to be the only one needed to wipe out the ship it was stationed on, if it came to that.

Libluini
May 18, 2012

I gravitated towards the Greens, eventually even joining the party itself.

The Linke is a party I grudgingly accept exists, but I've learned enough about DDR-history I can't bring myself to trust a party that was once the SED, a party leading the corrupt state apparatus ...
Grimey Drawer

Kchama posted:

In Marathon (the previous series by the Halo people and somehow connected to Halo) had the Mjollnir Combat Cyborgs. They were the predecessor of the Spartans and could basically be sleeper celled into a population without even knowing it themselves and then activated to massacre large populations with small groups. They describe how a small group of them (like, half a dozen) could and would wiped out entire colonies once activated. It's implied they stopped using them because it turned out to be a bit much even for the government.

The protagonist is one of them, implied to be the only one needed to wipe out the ship it was stationed on, if it came to that.

with strategies like this one, it's no wonder the Halo-aliens massacred their way straight to and onto Earth without much opposition

imagine such a cyborg would have accidentally activated on a ship fighting the invaders, suddenly everyone dies and the ship blows up, the aliens are left wondering what the gently caress just happeend

Telsa Cola
Aug 19, 2011

No... this is all wrong... this whole operation has just gone completely sidewaysface

Libluini posted:

with strategies like this one, it's no wonder the Halo-aliens massacred their way straight to and onto Earth without much opposition

imagine such a cyborg would have accidentally activated on a ship fighting the invaders, suddenly everyone dies and the ship blows up, the aliens are left wondering what the gently caress just happeend

The halo aliens basically gave up the ground war and just glassed every human held planet on the way to earth since their navy forces were superior.

Libluini
May 18, 2012

I gravitated towards the Greens, eventually even joining the party itself.

The Linke is a party I grudgingly accept exists, but I've learned enough about DDR-history I can't bring myself to trust a party that was once the SED, a party leading the corrupt state apparatus ...
Grimey Drawer

Telsa Cola posted:

The halo aliens basically gave up the ground war and just glassed every human held planet on the way to earth since their navy forces were superior.

imho Halo would have been 1000x better if they'd just fed the super-cyborgs into giant torpedoes and fired them into the alien ships, Star Crash 2 style

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007

Libluini posted:

imho Halo would have been 1000x better if they'd just fed the super-cyborgs into giant torpedoes and fired them into the alien ships, Star Crash 2 style

Hell they wouldn't even need the torpedos since they could survive in vacuum for extended periods of time as long as they had an external oxygen supply and nothing else. They didn't even need power armored suits to tear through aliens armies. Hell their shields were actually internally emitted.

Kchama fucked around with this message at 23:40 on Nov 28, 2021

General Battuta
Feb 7, 2011

This is how you communicate with a fellow intelligence: you hurt it, you keep on hurting it, until you can distinguish the posts from the screams.
Is this some hyperbole joke I'm not getting? The shields just came from the armor.

Also the first battle the Spartans have against the Covenant is indeed boarding one of the alien starships by uhh unconventional means (they shoot themselves at the damaged Covenant ship from a dropship's depressurized troop bay iirc). They were 14 at the time, which is a bit jarring.

Libluini
May 18, 2012

I gravitated towards the Greens, eventually even joining the party itself.

The Linke is a party I grudgingly accept exists, but I've learned enough about DDR-history I can't bring myself to trust a party that was once the SED, a party leading the corrupt state apparatus ...
Grimey Drawer
Someone really needs to go see Star Crash 2, asap

PupsOfWar
Dec 6, 2013

i didn't realize Star Crash had a sequel

how was i unaware of this

General Battuta
Feb 7, 2011

This is how you communicate with a fellow intelligence: you hurt it, you keep on hurting it, until you can distinguish the posts from the screams.
I already have a stark rash :(

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007

General Battuta posted:

Is this some hyperbole joke I'm not getting? The shields just came from the armor.

Also the first battle the Spartans have against the Covenant is indeed boarding one of the alien starships by uhh unconventional means (they shoot themselves at the damaged Covenant ship from a dropship's depressurized troop bay iirc). They were 14 at the time, which is a bit jarring.

We're talking about the Mjollnir Combat Cyborgs from Marathon, the predecessor to Halo. It's just amusing how stronger they are than Spartans in Mjollnir combat armor.

General Battuta
Feb 7, 2011

This is how you communicate with a fellow intelligence: you hurt it, you keep on hurting it, until you can distinguish the posts from the screams.
Yes, my history of stuffing Destiny with Marathon references will tell you I know a thing or two about battleroids.

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007

General Battuta posted:

Yes, my history of stuffing Destiny with Marathon references will tell you I know a thing or two about battleroids.

... oh, so that was you.

EDIT: Also just to clarify, your response made me think you thought we were talking about Halo, and not the Marathon equivilant, due to confusing names, sorry.

Kchama fucked around with this message at 01:38 on Nov 29, 2021

quantumfoam
Dec 25, 2003

Robert S McNamara once claimed Curtis LeMay admitted in private conversation that he (Curtis LeMay) would have been convicted as a War Criminal for his strategic firebombing of Japan tactics in World War 2 if the USA had lost World War 2.

The thing RS McNamara leaves out in that "Curtis LeMay/firebombing of Japan/WarCriminal if the USA lost World War 2" claim is that he himself served in Pacific theater of World War II as an US statistics expert for the US Air Force who set theater-wide policies on minor stuff like the most efficient supply airplane routes for India/China/Marianas, the most efficient fuel/bomb weight ratios on bomber aircraft, firebombs loadouts being way more statistically efficient in Japan vs normal bomber loadouts in Japan, and the locations of airplane repair hubs for India/China/Marianas, etc.

tldr: You need take anything Robert S McNamara has said or ever claimed with a massive 1-ton grain of salt, because he was a shitbag of unparalleled potency.

quantumfoam
Dec 25, 2003

More quasi mil-scifi/mil-history related stuff.

There is a IRL organization called the Association of Old Crows which started off as a next-tier style veterans assistance group for retired U.S. Air Force electronic warfare people but expanded their scope, and now do a bunch of additional things like give scholarships, fund academic studies, and mentor anyone who asks, but now mainly acts as boosters for all kinds of ElectroMagnetic Warfare/SIGINT efforts "nationally and internationally across government, defense, industry, and academia." U.S. Air Forces veterans may have heard about this organization before /known about this organization previously, I stumbled across it this weird during a weird aside in a non-fiction book about corvids/how humankind deals with & thought about corvids through recorded history.


Anyway what makes the Association of Old Crows noteworthy to this thread that they also publish the Journal of Electromagnetic Dominance a periodical magazine for the EW/SIGINT communities, and the description of what goes inside the JoED is giving me hardcore vibes of the kind of "What-if" future-tech mil-fiction/mil-scifi bullshit that initially hooked me on mil-scifi and mil-fiction as a teenager.

Libluini
May 18, 2012

I gravitated towards the Greens, eventually even joining the party itself.

The Linke is a party I grudgingly accept exists, but I've learned enough about DDR-history I can't bring myself to trust a party that was once the SED, a party leading the corrupt state apparatus ...
Grimey Drawer
Man, in comparison I got hooked by space ships shooting each other a lot, but that's it

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007
Thank you, thread, for reminding me to go back and play through the Marathon series. It has some real neat writing and ideas.

quantumfoam
Dec 25, 2003

Finally watched V the Miniseries (1983), V the Final Battle Miniseries (1984), and V the Series (1984). The "V" SF franchise explains so so much about science-fiction tv-shows and SF movies and SF/mil-scifi books that came out after it. Lots of tv-series tried to recapture V's success or aped elements in it over and over again. Despite being almost forty years old, that franchise aged extremely well. Some thoughts on the series.

-Liked that V the Miniseries (1983), V the Final Battle Miniseries (1984), and V the Series (1984) pioneered the concept of bulletproof shrubbery that was such a core-mechanic in Jagged Alliance 1, a 1995 turn-based tactical computer game.

-You can make the argument that X-COM: UFO Defense, a 1994 turn-based tactics and strategy computer game about fighting an alien invasion, was directly inspired by the "V" SF franchise and the justly forgotten "War of the Worlds" (1988) tv-series.

-In that note, John Ringo one thousand and five percent based his Posleen War series on mashing up "War of the Worlds" (1988) tv-series and the "V" franchise into one. So you can directly blame CBS & NBC for kickstarting John Ringo's writing career.

-Want to say that the "karma is a motherfucker" moments in the Final Battle were gratifying.

radmonger
Jun 6, 2011

quantumfoam posted:

The "V" SF franchise explains so so much about science-fiction tv-shows and SF movies and SF/mil-scifi books that came out after it.

Hmm, UN-associated cloaked reptilian aliens who have mostly, but not entirely, taken over the US government. While secretly indulging in disgusting practices that would cause mass revolt if only they were more widely known.

When talking about the influence of that series, it wouldn’t be fiiction I would focus on…

quantumfoam
Dec 25, 2003

radmonger posted:

Hmm, UN-associated cloaked reptilian aliens who have mostly, but not entirely, taken over the US government all world governments. While secretly indulging in disgusting practices that would cause mass revolt if only they were more widely known.

When talking about the influence of that series, it wouldn’t be fiiction I would focus on…

No real arguments there, V kickstarting the "lizardpeople politicians" meme and Californian almond farming and Californian wineries stealing just as much or more IRL water combined from real life California USA than the Visitors ever dreamed possible are real :aaaaa:

Just thought I would initially focus on the mil-scifi/mil-fiction related elements of the "V" tv-series franchise in the mil-scifi/mil-fiction thread. There is so much drat stuff in the 1980's "V" franchise to unpack, would love to hear other peoples takes on the 1980's "V' franchise once they've refreshed their memories on it.

branedotorg
Jun 19, 2009
Not sure I expected a jaggd alliance link but any mention of Sir-Tech's finest is ok by me

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007
It's been a while since I did one of these. I don't know where I was and frankly I don't care to look, so this might be retreading old ground. That's okay, I might have something fresh to say. Or not. I don't think anybody but Gnoman reads these anyways.

quote:

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN

Commander Manning paused outside the briefing room and drew a deep breath.

Manning liked Captain Yu. In a service where too many senior officers came from Legislaturist families, Yu was that rarest of birds: a self-made man. It couldn't have been easy for him, but somehow the Captain had won his way to the very brink of flag rank without forgetting what he himself had been through on the way up. He treated his officers firmly but with respect, even warmth, and he never forgot those who served him well. Thomas Theisman commanded Principality because he'd served with Captain Yu before and Yu had wanted him for the slot, and Manning had been handpicked as Thunder's exec for the same reasons. That sort of treatment earned the Captain a remarkable degree of personal loyalty and devotion, but he was only human. He had his bad days, and when a CO-any CO—was out of sorts, his subordinates trod warily.

Theisman is a very important person in the future. He's something of a fan favorite, largely because he's probably one of the better written characters in the series. This isn't a high bar, admittedly, since most characters are very flat and boring, but the early-mid Haven crew are probably the best you're going to get in this.

Anyways "Yu is a self-made man" is mostly eye-rolling because it doesn't actually show that Yu is good and cool like it wants to say, just that he didn't have the biggest advantage in the world.

quote:

And if the Captain had ever had reason to feel out of sorts, now was certainly the time, Manning thought as he pressed the admittance button.

"Yes?" The voice over the intercom was as courteous as ever, but it held a dangerous, flat undertone for ears which knew it well.

"Commander Manning, Sir."

The hatch opened. Manning stepped across the sill and braced to attention, and some instinct told him to do it Havenite style.

"You wanted to see me, Sir?"

"Yes. Sit down, George."

Yu pointed to a chair, and the commander relaxed just a tad at the use of his first name.

"What's the status of Tractor Five?"

"Engineering says another ten or twelve hours, Sir." Yu's face tightened, and Manning tried to keep any defensiveness out of his voice. "The components were never intended for this sort of continual power level, Captain. They have to strip it clear down to the flux core to make replacements."

So how are they making replacements? This implies that they were basically salvaging the damaged parts to make replacements, but there's no real indication how. What, do they have a machining shop or factory on board? You still need tools and equipment to make that sort of stuff, and is every ship suppose to have space for this sort of thing? We don't really get a good look how any of this works as far as I remember. Weber just says stuff like this and lets it go.

quote:

"Goddamn it." Yu ran a hand through his hair in a harried gesture he never let a Masadan see, and then his free hand suddenly slammed the table top.

Manning managed not to flinch. It wasn't like the Captain to carry on, but these Masadans were enough to try the patience of a saint. The cliché was less amusing than it might have been, but the fact that the Captain was allowing himself to use the sort of language he hadn't let himself use since arriving here was a fair indication of how far he'd been pushed.

Yu smashed the table again, then sat back in his chair with a groan.

"They're idiots, George. loving idiots! We could wipe out everything Grayson has left in an hour—in fifteen minutes!—and they won't let us do it!"

"Yes, Sir," Manning said softly, and Yu shoved himself up to stalk back and forth across the briefing room like a caged tiger.

"If anyone back home had told me there were people like this anywhere in the galaxy, I'd have called him a liar to his face," Yu growled. "We've got Grayson by the balls, and all they can see is how bad they got hurt! Goddamn it, people get hurt in wars! And just because Madrigal chewed the hell out of their piss-ant navy, they're making GBS threads their drawers like they were up against the Manticoran Home Fleet!"

This time Manning was tactfully silent. Anything he said could only make it worse at this point.

Yu's right to be pissed. Like yadda yadda the Masadans have their own agenda, but it's always funny how the bad guys have a very specific agenda that always means foregoing an easy victory and always costs them their actual goals in the end. You never see the heroes bound by this sort of thing. It really only works for me if you can really sell that the easy victory isn't actually in their best interests. Allow for some real turn-the-chess-board-around thinking. Weber doesn't really try.

quote:

No one, Captain Yu included, had been prepared for just how good Manticoran anti-missile systems had turned out to be. They'd known the RMN's electronic warfare capability was better than theirs, and they'd assumed a certain margin of superiority for their other systems as well, but the speed and accuracy of Madrigal's point defense had shocked all of them. It had turned what should have been a complete kill into something far less, and if the destroyer's defenses hadn't been overextended by her efforts to protect her consorts, she probably would have gotten out completely undamaged.

It would have been different in a sustained engagement, when their own computers could have gotten a read on Madrigal's responses and they could have shifted their firing patterns and penaid settings until they found a way through them. But they'd only had one shot each, and the destroyer had knocked down entirely too many of their missiles.

Does this ever actually pan out? The Manticorean EW advantage is always complete and total and in fact just constantly grows bigger and bigger. I guess it is from the Haven's point of view at this time, but it'd be interesting if it was true.

quote:

That had smarted badly enough for the "immigrants" in Thunder's crew—it had been their hardware that showed up so poorly, after all—but it had more than smarted for the Masadans. Sword Simonds had been livid as Madrigal and the two surviving Graysons raced out of their missile envelope. Manning was still astonished the Captain had managed to hang onto his temper as the sword ranted and railed at him, and despite his outward calm, Manning knew he'd been as close to murder as the exec had ever seen him when Simonds refused to order Franks to bypass Madrigal and pursue the Grayson survivors.


'the sword' should be capitalized here to 'the Sword' since it is referring to a specific Sword, and not the generic title. Minor nitpick, though. Yu's right to be angry, though.


quote:

Simonds had practically danced with rage as he rejected Yu's suggestion. The extent to which Madrigal had degraded the ambush had not only infuriated but frightened him, and he'd known perfectly well that at least some of Franks' ships would have been exposed to her fire, however widely they dispersed, if the squadron spread out to over-fly her.

Well, of course they would have been, but the Sword's response to the threat had proven once and for all that he was no tactician. If his ships had dispersed, he might have had to write off one or two cruisers to Madrigal's missiles, but the others would have been outside the destroyer's effective engagement range. She simply wouldn't have had the reach to hit that many targets. But he'd insisted on backing Franks' decision to go in together for mutual support—and paid the price hesitant tactics almost always exacted. The Masadan ships had actually decelerated to meet Madrigal in an effort to bring their own weapons into effective range and keep them there!

It had been like a mob armed with clubs charging a man with a pulser. Madrigal's missiles had blown the cruisers Samson and Noah and the destroyer Throne right out of space as they closed, and then the Masadans entered her energy range and it only got worse. The cruiser David had survived, but she was little more than a hulk, and the destroyers Cherubim and Seraphim had been crippled before they ever got into their energy range.

But I am not entirely unsympathetic with Sword Simonds here. They made real mistakes, yes, but at the same time... they couldn't know what would be the mistake and what wouldn't be. They were woefully unprepared, with little to no experience with modern ship to ship combat, and the Manticorean's super advanced EW basically had just destroyed all of their expectations of what was suppose to happen, and made it pretty clear that Haven had no loving clue what they were doing either.

quote:

Of course, the clubs had had their own turn after that. Crude as Masadan energy weapons were, there'd simply been too many of them for her, and they'd battered her to bits. But even after she'd been mortally wounded, Madrigal had set her teeth in the destroyers Archangel and Angel. She'd pounded them until she didn't have a single weapon left, and she'd taken Archangel with her. Of the entire squadron which had closed with her, only the cruiser Solomon and the destroyer Dominion remained combat effective . . . and, of course, Franks' decision to slow for the suicidal engagement meant the surviving Graysons had escaped.

It shouldn't have mattered. If nothing else, what Madrigal had done should have made Simonds even more confident. If a destroyer could wreak that kind of carnage, what did he think Thunder could do?!

"Do you know what that insufferable little prick said to me?" Yu whirled to face his exec, one finger pointed like a pistol, and his eyes blazed. "He told me—told me, drat him!—that if I hadn't lied to him about my ship's capabilities, he might be more inclined to listen to me now!" A snarl quivered in the Captain's throat. "What the gently caress does he expect is going to happen when his frigging 'admirals' have their heads so far up their asses they have to pipe in air through their navels?!"

Sword Simonds is right in the end. Yu clearly overestimated their ships. Simonds have realize the Thunder could do a lot of damage, but also that it didn't do nearly as well against a mere Destroyer as it should have. That mere Destroyer fended off the Thunder of God's missiles and also the entire Masadan fleet by basically itself. Hell, if I remember correctly, the only reason why they defeated the Madrigal is that it was having to protect the Grayson fleet as well. A mere Destroyer doing that in the face of both the Thunder of God, the Principality, and the Masadan fleet is absolutely the epitome of confidence-destroying. If the actual Manticorean fleet returned, they are doomed in his eyes.

quote:

Manning maintained his silence and concentrated on looking properly sympathetic, and Yu's lips worked as if he wanted to spit on the decksole. Then his shoulders slumped, and he sank back into his chair.

"God, I wish the Staff had found someone else to dump this on!" he sighed, but the fury had left his voice. Manning understood. The Captain had needed to work it out of his system, and for that he had to yell at one of his own.

"Well," Yu said finally, "if they insist on being stupid, I suppose there's nothing we can do but try to minimize the consequences. There are times I could just about kill Valentine, but if this weren't so completely unnecessary, I might almost admire the cleverness of it. I don't think anyone else ever even considered towing LACs through hyper space."

"Yes, Sir. On the other hand, they couldn't have done it with their own tractors or hyper generators. I guess by the time you've got the technical ability, you've figured out how to build good enough ships that you don't need to use it."

"Um." Yu inhaled deeply and closed his eyes for a moment. Stupid as he thought the whole idea was, he also knew that only his chief engineer's suggestion had kept the Masadans going at all.

They'd flatly refused to attack Grayson with their remaining combat strength in Yeltsin. As near as Yu could figure out, they were afraid Manticore might have slipped some sort of superweapon to the Graysons. That was the stupidest idea they'd had yet, but perhaps it shouldn't be so easy to blame them for it. They'd never seen a modern warship in action before, and what Madrigal had done to their antiquated fleet terrified them. Intellectually, they had to know Thunder and Principality were many times as powerful as Madrigal had been, but they'd never seen "their" two modern ships in action. Their capabilities weren't quite real to them . . . and Yu's credibility had been damaged by Madrigal's escape from the ambush, anyway.

They also intellectually saw the Madrigal basically tank the Thunder of God and Principality's shots not only against itself but against an entire fleet single-handedly, and only be defeated due to having to spread its defenses out so thinly. If you're talking about an entire fleet, even if most are antiquated, having to focus-fire everything it has to defeat a single Destroyer, then you're not going to be too confident in any ships that took part in it.

quote:

For one whole day, Simonds had been adamant about the need to suspend all operations and seek a negotiated settlement. Yu didn't think Masada had a hope in hell of pulling that off after their sneak attack and Madrigal's destruction, but the sword had dug his heels in and insisted he simply didn't have the tonnage in Yeltsin to continue.

That was when Commander Valentine made his suggestion, and Yu didn't know whether to strangle his engineer or kiss him. It had wasted three days already, and Tractor Five's breakdown was going to stretch that still further, but it had gotten Simonds to agree, if only hesitantly, to press forward.

Valentine had pointed out that both Thunder and Principality had far more powerful hyper generators than any Masadan starship. In fact, their generators were powerful enough to extend their translation fields over six kilometers beyond their own hulls if he redlined them. That meant that if they translated from rest, they could take anything within six kilometers with them when they did. And that meant that if Masadan LACs clustered closely enough around them, they could boost the lighter vessels into hyper space.

Normally, that would have been little more than an interesting parlor trick, but Valentine had taken the entire idea one stage further. No LAC crew could survive the sort of acceleration ships routinely pulled in hyper for the simple reason that their inertial compensator would pack up the instant they tried it. But if they took the entire crew off and removed or secured all loose gear, Valentine suggested, there was no reason the ships themselves couldn't take the acceleration on the end of a tractor beam.

Yu had thought he was out of his mind, but the engineer had pulled up the numbers on his terminal and demonstrated the theoretical possibility. Simonds had jumped at it, and to Yu's considerable surprise, it had worked.

This is actually the more interesting part of the setting's setup. It is also what kind of helps drain a lot of the suspense out for the heroes, though. The heroes are the one with advanced technology that far outstrips anything the villains do in a setting where this is basically the end-all be-all, and the bad guys are the ones who have to come up with plucky and clever plans to even come within spitting distance of the heroes. It's never even close to enough, which is what keeps it from working out nearly as well as it should.

quote:

So far, they'd lost only two of the tiny ships. The LACs were just big enough it took three tractors to zone each of them, and one tractor had lost lock during acceleration. That LAC had simply snapped in half; the second had survived the journey only to have its crew find a ragged, three-meter hole torn half the length of their ship where a twelve-ton pressure tank had come adrift and crashed aft like an ungainly cannonball.

Of course, the towing ships had been crowded almost beyond endurance by packing in the crews who couldn't survive aboard their own ships and, as Manning had said, the strain on their tractors had been enormous. But it had worked—and Yu had found Thunder and Principality playing tugboat back and forth between Endicott and Yeltsin's Star.

It was a short hop, barely twelve hours either way for a modern warship, even towing LACs behind her, but there were only two vessels capable of pulling it off, and they could tow only three LACs at a time: two behind Thunder and one behind Principality. They simply didn't have enough tractors to move more than that. In three days, they'd transferred eighteen of Masada's twenty LACs to Yeltsin—well, sixteen, discounting the two they'd lost. This final trip by Thunder would move the last of them, and if he couldn't see that their firepower afforded any particular tactical advantage, it seemed to have bolstered the Masadans' confidence, so perhaps it hadn't been an entire waste.

"I need to talk to the Ambassador," he said suddenly, and Manning's eyebrows rose at the apparent non sequitur. "About getting out from under Simonds' thumb," Yu clarified. "I know we have to maintain the fiction that this is a purely Masadan operation, but if I can give them a good, hard push just once, we can tie this whole thing up in a couple of hours."

"Yes, Sir." Manning felt oddly moved by his captain's openness. It wasn't the sort of thing one normally encountered in the People's Navy.

"Maybe repairing Tractor Five will give me enough time ground-side," Yu mused. "It'll have to be face-to-face; I don't trust our com links."

Actually, Manning knew, the Captain didn't trust his com officer, since that was one of the slots now filled by a Masadan.

"I understand, Sir."

"Good." Yu rubbed his face, then straightened. "Sorry I screamed at you, George. You were just handy."

"That's what execs are for, Sir," Manning grinned, not adding that few other captains would have apologized for using an exec for one of his designed functions.

"Yeah, maybe." Yu managed a smile. "And at least this will be the last tow trip."

"Yes, Sir. And Commander Theisman will keep an eye on things in Yeltsin till we get back."

"Better him than that rear end in a top hat Franks," Yu growled.
* * *

Sword of the Faithful Matthew Simonds knocked on the door and walked through it into the palatially furnished room. His brother, Chief Elder Thomas Simonds of the Faithful of the Church of Humanity Unchained, looked up, and his wizened face was not encouraging. Senior Elder Huggins was seated beside Thomas, and he looked even less encouraging.

Deacon Ronald Sands sat opposite Huggins. Sands was one of the youngest men ever to attain the rank of deacon, and his face was much less thunderous than his seniors'. Part of that was probably because he was so junior to them, but Sword Simonds suspected most of it was because Masada's spy master was smarter than either of them and knew it.

Cloth rustled, and he turned his head to see his brother's junior wife. He couldn't recall her name, and she wore the traditional form-shrouding dress of a Masadan woman, but her face was unveiled, and the Sword suppressed a grin as he suddenly realized that at least a portion of Huggins' obvious anger was directed at that shocking breach of propriety. Thomas had always been vain about his virility, and it had pandered to his amour propre to take a wife barely eighteen T-years of age. He already had six others, and Matthew doubted he still had the endurance to mount any of them, but Thomas had taken to flaunting his new prize's beauty whenever his associates met in his home.

Simonds not remembering her name is absolutely suppose to be a comment on 'Graysons are better than Masadans at everything', no doubt. It's probably the most subtle characterization of that type Weber uses.

quote:

The practice drove Huggins berserk—which was one reason Thomas did it. Had the wench belonged to anyone else, the fire-and-brimstone elder would have sent her to the post for a public flogging prefaced by a few pointed words on the laxity of the man who allowed his wife to behave in such ungodly fashion. If the man in question had been unimportant enough, he might even have called for his stoning. As it was, he had to pretend he hadn't noticed.

See?

quote:

The sword advanced across the carpet, ignoring her presence, and sat in the chair at the foot of the long table. The appearance of a tribunal, with himself in the role of the accused, was not, he was certain, a coincidence.

"So you're here." Thomas' voice was creaky with age, for he was the eldest child of Tobias Simonds' first wife, while Matthew was the second son of their father's fourth wife.

"Of course I am." Matthew was well aware of the danger in which he stood, but if he showed any consciousness of his vulnerability his enemies would close in like a rathound pack pulling down a Masadan antelope.

"I'm gratified to see you can follow at least some orders," Huggins snapped. The rancorous elder considered himself the sword's main competition for the Chief Elder's chair, and Matthew turned to him, ready to strike back, but Thomas' raised hand had already rebuked the elder. So. At least his brother wasn't yet ready to cut him totally adrift.

"Peace, Brother," the Chief Elder said to Huggins. "We are all about God's Work, here. Let there be no recriminations."

His wife moved silently about the table, refilling their glasses, then vanished as a jerk of his head banished her back to the women's quarters. Huggins seemed to relax just a bit as she disappeared, and he forced a smile.

"I stand rebuked, Chief Elder. Forgive me, Sword Simonds. Our situation is enough to try even Saint Austin's Faith."

"Indeed it is, Elder Huggins," the sword said, with just as much false graciousness as Huggins, "and I can't deny that, as commander of our military, the responsibility for straightening that situation out is mine."

"Perhaps so," his brother said impatiently, "but it was no more of your making than ours—except, perhaps, in that you supported that infidel's plans." The Chief Elder's jaw worked, and his head seemed to squat lower on his shoulders.

"In fairness to Sword Simonds," Sands put in in the diffident tone he always assumed before his superiors, "Yu's arguments were convincing. And according to my sources, they were generally sincere, as well. His motives were his own, of course, but he truly believed he had the capabilities he claimed."

Huggins snorted, but no one disputed Sands. The Masadan theocracy had gone to great lengths to deny its "ally" any participation in its own covert activities, and everyone in this room knew how extensive Sands' network was.

"Nonetheless, we're in serious trouble because we listened to him." The Chief Elder gave his brother a sharp glance. "Do you think he's right about his ability to destroy what's left of the Apostate fleet?"

"Of course he is," the sword said. "He overestimated Jericho's initial effectiveness, but my own people in his tactical section assure me his fundamental assessments are correct. If a single destroyer could do so much damage to our fleet, Thunder and Principality together could make mincemeat of the Apostate."

Matthew was aware that Huggins no longer trusted Yu—or anyone who agreed with him, for that matter—a millimeter. Yet what he'd just said was self-evidently true . . . and he'd avoided mentioning what those same people of his in Yu's tactical section had had to say about his own decision to support Franks' tactics in Yeltsin. He hadn't been too happy to hear it himself, but if he punished them for it, they would almost certainly start telling him what he wanted to hear, not what they truly thought.

Franks did mess up, and it is good that they were least able to figure that out instead of being complete idiots forever.

quote:

"Deacon Sands? Do you agree?"

"I'm not a military man, Chief Elder, but, yes. Our own sources had already indicated that Manticoran systems are better than those of Haven, but their margin of superiority is vastly less than Thunder's superiority to anything the Apostate have."

But they're going to go immediately back to being suicidally overconfident.

quote:

"So we can let him proceed if we must?" the Chief Elder pressed.

"I don't see any option but to let him if Maccabeus fails," Sands said unflinchingly. "In that event, only a military solution can save us. And with all due respect, time is running out. Maccabeus wasn't able to tell us if the Manticoran escort was returning, but we must assume it will be back within days. One way or the other, we must control both planets by that time."

"But Maccabeus is our best hope." Huggins shot a venomous glance at the sword. "Your operations were supposed to support him, Sword Simonds. They were supposed to be a pretext, not a serious attempt at conquest!"

"With all respect, Elder Huggins," Matthew began hotly, "that-"

"Peace, Brothers!" The Chief Elder rapped a bony knuckle on the table and glared at them both until they sank back into their chairs, then turned his basilisk gaze on Huggins. "We're all aware of what was supposed to happen, Brother. Unfortunately, we couldn't exactly tell the Havenites that, nor could we proceed without their support in case Maccabeus failed. God has not yet decided our efforts merit His Blessing, but neither has He condemned us to failure. There are two strings to our bow, and neither has snapped yet."

I think 'basilisk gaze' is actually one of the worst ways to put that I have ever heard.

quote:

Huggins glowered for a moment, then bobbed his head stiffly. This time he didn't even pretend to apologize to the sword.

"Very well." Thomas turned back to his brother. "How much longer can you stall direct military action without arousing Haven's suspicions?"

"No more than another thirty or forty hours. Thunder's tractor damage buys us a little time, but once all of our LACs are in Yeltsin, we'll either have to move or admit we have no intention of doing so."

"And your last contact with Maccabeus?"

"Cherubim lagged far enough behind on our fourth strike to speak with his courier. At that time, Maccabeus believed there was still too much popular support for the current regime, despite our attacks. We've been unable to contact him since, of course, but he indicated that he was prepared to move if public morale began to crack, and Jericho must have weakened it further."

"Do you concur, Deacon Sands?"

"I do. Of course, we can't know how much it's weakened. Our own losses and the fact that any of their ships escaped may have an offsetting effect. On the other hand, they now know that we have at least some modern vessels, and the Apostate media has no Synod of Censors. We can assume, I think, that at least some accounts of the battle—and the odds they face—have found their way into the planetary news net."

"Does Maccabeus know what strength we have?" Huggins demanded.

"No," Sands said. "He and Jericho were completely compartmentalized for operational security. Given his position under the current regime, however, he must know that what we have outclasses anything in the Apostate navy."

"That's true," Elder Simonds mused, then inhaled deeply. "Very well, Brothers, I think we have reached our moment of decision. Maccabeus remains our best hope. If he can secure control of Grayson by domestic means, we'll be in a far better position to stave off further Manticoran intervention. No doubt they'll demand steep reparations, and I am prepared even to bend my neck to publicly apologize for our 'accidental' attack on a ship we didn't realize wasn't Apostate-built, but the destruction of any local regime to support their aims in the region should cause them to cut their losses. And, given their traditional foreign policy, it's unlikely they'll have the will and courage to conquer us to gain the base they desire. Most importantly, if Maccabeus succeeds, we can gain gradual control of Grayson without further overt military action, which means we will no longer need Haven, either, so I think we must delay Thunder's return to Yeltsin for at least one more day to give him time.

"Nonetheless, we must also face the possibility that he will fail—or, at any rate, require a further demonstration of the hopelessness of the Apostate military position to succeed."

He paused and looked at his brother.

"Bearing all of this in mind, Sword Simonds, I hereby direct you to begin military operations to reduce the Apostate navy, followed, if necessary, by demonstration nuclear strikes on their less important cities, to create the conditions for Maccabeus' success. You will begin those operations within twelve hours of your return to Yeltsin with the last of our LACs."

He looked around the table, his rheumy old eyes flat as a snake's.

"Is there any disagreement with my directions?"

I don't normally talk about Weber's actually choice of words, as his writing is technically fine most of the time. But 'flat as a snake's' doesn't really work as a simile about eyes, because snake eyes themselves are perfectly round, and while the schlera or whatever is flat, it's more slitted vertically, rather than horizonally in the way Weber is definitely thinking. Unless the dude's has special eyelids that close vertically instead of horizonally, I guess. It just really jumped out at me as a clumsy and poorly written simile, which feels rare for him to blunder, like with the basilisk one. He's bad at snake similes, I guess.

Also, we are finally given the whole plan on the Masadan's side. Considering their assessment that Manticore wouldn't try to conquer them, sudden military conquering should probably be the better route than long-term subversion. They're going to have to deal with the Manticoreans either way, and if they care enough to try and liberate Grayson after an open invasion, then they'll probably have more than enough care to liberate it if Masadan assassinates key people and suddenly declare they run Grayson. If you think that Realpolitik is what Manticore cares about, then as long as you don't kill any more of their people or are willing to give reparations of some sort, there really isn't that big of a difference in the end result of the two plans, just of the chance of success.

I think it would have been better to not just have a big scene where they laborously explain the plan and all of its details like this. Keep it a little bit of a mystery and allow for the turn-the-chess-board-around thinking to happen. Keep some mystery afoot. Like the fact that they don't name Maccabeus doesn't really matter, because there's only so many people it could be due to economy of characters on the Grayson side. Though if you think about it at all, it should be already obvious who the traitor is. There's only one person with the position and power to enact the plan and benefit from it in the way that would be required.

Larry Parrish
Jul 9, 2012

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS
He's loves to set up what could be suspense or foreshadowing, but overdoes it and it ends up instead being insane telegraphing.

90s Cringe Rock
Nov 29, 2006
:gay:
Pretty sure "make replacements" in that context means the act of replacing the damaged parts, not fabricating new ones.

quantumfoam
Dec 25, 2003

Call me sentimental, but I didn't expect the movie Invasion U.S.A. to end with a bazooka vs bazooka standoff. Plotting and storytelling wise, Invasion U.S.A. was equivalent to a mid-tier David Drake mil-fiction novel or one of the middle of the series STEN CHRONICLES books.

Thinking about it a bit, that Invasion U.S.A. ending probably lead to the mini-rocket equipped motorcycle in Delta Force (1986), and the quad-rocket launcher in Commando (1985) lead to the $15 dollar knockoff quad-rocket launcher in the so bad in every possible way it loops into being a stupid-good movie Hard Ticket to Hawaii (1987). Invasion U.S.A. and Delta Force, and Commando definitely qualify as live action mil-fiction. Hard Ticket I'd call a (unintentional) action-comedy where 90% of the cast gets out-acted by a rabid snake puppet.

Blowing up a skateboard assassin doing serious hang-time in the air with a mini-rocket was a choice, using a second mini-rocket to explode the blow-up doll the skateboard assassin was carrying is just one of the things that make Hard Ticket amazing.
https://youtu.be/tAaPeMMJLgs

mllaneza
Apr 28, 2007

Veteran, Bermuda Triangle Expeditionary Force, 1993-1952




Kchama posted:

So how are they making replacements? This implies that they were basically salvaging the damaged parts to make replacements, but there's no real indication how. What, do they have a machining shop or factory on board? You still need tools and equipment to make that sort of stuff, and is every ship suppose to have space for this sort of thing? We don't really get a good look how any of this works as far as I remember. Weber just says stuff like this and lets it go.

Even semi-modern warships have extensive machine shops on board. Here's a look at the kind of gear HMS Belfast, a WW2 light cruiser was carrying,

https://www.practicalmachinist.com/vb/machinery-photos/machine-shop-hms-belfast-173211/

The US Navy is investing in 3D printing afloat, there's great potential for manufacturing spare parts, tools, and potentially, unique tools designed for a specific need at sea.

https://www.marshall.edu/wamnewsletter/2021/04/rcbi-assists-u-s-navy-with-3d-printing-technology/


Weber knows a lot about the Age of Sail, so tropes from that show up everywhere. He knows gently caress all about 3D printing and its implications, so he never mentions it.

Khizan
Jul 30, 2013


Kchama posted:

Does this ever actually pan out? The Manticorean EW advantage is always complete and total and in fact just constantly grows bigger and bigger. I guess it is from the Haven's point of view at this time, but it'd be interesting if it was true.

In the end fight the Thunder of God beats the absolute snot out of Fearless in just the manner described, and that's with the Havenites out of the picture and the Thunder being commanded and crewed entirely by the ludicrously incompetent Masadans. The Manticorans only survive because the person she sent to get help goes ignores all safety protocols and regulations and goes utterly balls to the wall for help and barely makes it. Without White Haven arriving in the nick of time the best outcome they could have possibly hoped for was a double KO against a ship commanded by utter idiots who are just pushing buttons and letting the autopilot fight for them. Left to their own devices Yu and Theisman would have absolutely smoked Harrington.

After this I don't think there's another significant small scale action, so I don't think this ever happens again.

God, why do I remember so much about these lovely books?

Kchama posted:

I don't normally talk about Weber's actually choice of words, as his writing is technically fine most of the time. But 'flat as a snake's' doesn't really work as a simile about eyes, because snake eyes themselves are perfectly round, and while the schlera or whatever is flat, it's more slitted vertically, rather than horizonally in the way Weber is definitely thinking. Unless the dude's has special eyelids that close vertically instead of horizonally, I guess. It just really jumped out at me as a clumsy and poorly written simile, which feels rare for him to blunder, like with the basilisk one. He's bad at snake similes, I guess.

When used in this sense 'flat' usually refers to something being emotionless. A flat stare, a flat expression, flat eyes, etc. In this context it's more like "his eyes as emotionless as a snake's", which is workable imo.

Khizan fucked around with this message at 10:41 on Dec 14, 2021

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007

90s Cringe Rock posted:

Pretty sure "make replacements" in that context means the act of replacing the damaged parts, not fabricating new ones.

Eh, I'm unsure, but I won't say you're wrong. I may be reading too much into it.

mllaneza posted:

Even semi-modern warships have extensive machine shops on board. Here's a look at the kind of gear HMS Belfast, a WW2 light cruiser was carrying,

https://www.practicalmachinist.com/vb/machinery-photos/machine-shop-hms-belfast-173211/

The US Navy is investing in 3D printing afloat, there's great potential for manufacturing spare parts, tools, and potentially, unique tools designed for a specific need at sea.

https://www.marshall.edu/wamnewsletter/2021/04/rcbi-assists-u-s-navy-with-3d-printing-technology/


Weber knows a lot about the Age of Sail, so tropes from that show up everywhere. He knows gently caress all about 3D printing and its implications, so he never mentions it.

I actually knew that modern warships have that. But I was just thinking of what we're shown and told that these ships have in terms of space and storage, which is why I was questioning if they would have the space for this. Plus, it's never mentioned one bit about having the facilities needed for that, as far as I've seen. Remember that these ships have a ridiculous amount of space dedicated just to missiles and weapons, much less everything else required.

Though if they really ARE just making replacements and nothing else then that sort of thing isn't required, I don't think. Correct me if I'm wrong.

Khizan posted:

In the end fight the Thunder of God beats the absolute snot out of Fearless in just the manner described, and that's with the Havenites out of the picture and the Thunder being commanded and crewed entirely by the ludicrously incompetent Masadans. The Manticorans only survive because the person she sent to get help goes ignores all safety protocols and regulations and goes utterly balls to the wall for help and barely makes it. Without White Haven arriving in the nick of time the best outcome they could have possibly hoped for was a double KO against a ship commanded by utter idiots who are just pushing buttons and letting the autopilot fight for them. Left to their own devices Yu and Theisman would have absolutely smoked Harrington.

After this I don't think there's another significant small scale action, so I don't think this ever happens again.

God, why do I remember so much about these lovely books?

That isn't ENTIRELY true. The Fearless defeats the Thunder of God multiple times at the cost of the Troubador, and while it is in serious danger, it still was winning. It was only taking one hit for every six+ it landed on the Thunder of God, which forces it to flee again and again. The last encounter is nothing more than a formality as reinforcements have already arrived and they just aren't aware of it yet.

I was also talking about it from the Masadan point of view, where they just saw a Destroyer completely tank their entire fleet and even with the two modern ships, including a Battlecruiser. I can entirely believe seeing that scared the piss out of the Masadans in the moment, and make them worried if any real ships actually come back. And sure enough, the Fearless beats the hell out of the Thunder of God 1v1.

Also "they overly-relied on the computers, as opposed to Yu and Theisman" is one of those things that is goofy when one of the things Yu says is that the Madrigal would have been easily beaten if they had more time for the computers to do their job. There's a contradiction that Weber wants to have the realistic aspect of the officers actually relying almost entirely on their systems but the also the dramatic human pushing a "do it" button and causing things to happen.

quote:

When used in this sense 'flat' usually refers to something being emotionless. A flat stare, a flat expression, flat eyes, etc. In this context it's more like "his eyes as emotionless as a snake's", which is workable imo.

Except instead of 'flat' the intention is more that he's glaring at them with red, watery eyes, daring them them to argue. It just doesn't work for me.

Gnoman
Feb 12, 2014

Come, all you fair and tender maids
Who flourish in your pri-ime
Beware, take care, keep your garden fair
Let Gnoman steal your thy-y-me
Le-et Gnoman steal your thyme




Kchama posted:

So how are they making replacements? This implies that they were basically salvaging the damaged parts to make replacements, but there's no real indication how. What, do they have a machining shop or factory on board? You still need tools and equipment to make that sort of stuff, and is every ship suppose to have space for this sort of thing? We don't really get a good look how any of this works as far as I remember. Weber just says stuff like this and lets it go.

There are mentions later on about the extensive workshop facilities available on-ship, but Weber can just say it because it is automatic - every ship since the invention of ships has carried quite a bit of tooling. Specifying that a given ship has fabrication tools on board is akin to saying that a modern ship has toilets - the notion of not having that is ludicrous.

quote:

Does this ever actually pan out? The Manticorean EW advantage is always complete and total and in fact just constantly grows bigger and bigger. I guess it is from the Haven's point of view at this time, but it'd be interesting if it was true.

Later books begin stepping considerably away from the level of detail to show it, but there's lots of cases where a battle turns because they finally manage to see through the ECM to identify an important ship, or get enough missiles through to have superior weight of fire start showing through. A pretty key such moment happens in the climax of the very next book.

quote:

They also intellectually saw the Madrigal basically tank the Thunder of God and Principality's shots not only against itself but against an entire fleet single-handedly, and only be defeated due to having to spread its defenses out so thinly. If you're talking about an entire fleet, even if most are antiquated, having to focus-fire everything it has to defeat a single Destroyer, then you're not going to be too confident in any ships that took part in it.

This (and the section preceding it) are all good points. Both of the sides in this argument have good reason to feel the way they do.

quote:

This is actually the more interesting part of the setting's setup. It is also what kind of helps drain a lot of the suspense out for the heroes, though. The heroes are the one with advanced technology that far outstrips anything the villains do in a setting where this is basically the end-all be-all, and the bad guys are the ones who have to come up with plucky and clever plans to even come within spitting distance of the heroes. It's never even close to enough, which is what keeps it from working out nearly as well as it should.

One thing that can be missed here is that this is implied to be the very first time in the setting's history that sublight units have been brought between systems quite like this. In just a few books, putting LACs on carriers and transporting them that way becomes a major tactic.

quote:

Also, we are finally given the whole plan on the Masadan's side. Considering their assessment that Manticore wouldn't try to conquer them, sudden military conquering should probably be the better route than long-term subversion. They're going to have to deal with the Manticoreans either way, and if they care enough to try and liberate Grayson after an open invasion, then they'll probably have more than enough care to liberate it if Masadan assassinates key people and suddenly declare they run Grayson. If you think that Realpolitik is what Manticore cares about, then as long as you don't kill any more of their people or are willing to give reparations of some sort, there really isn't that big of a difference in the end result of the two plans, just of the chance of success.

I think it would have been better to not just have a big scene where they laborously explain the plan and all of its details like this. Keep it a little bit of a mystery and allow for the turn-the-chess-board-around thinking to happen. Keep some mystery afoot. Like the fact that they don't name Maccabeus doesn't really matter, because there's only so many people it could be due to economy of characters on the Grayson side. Though if you think about it at all, it should be already obvious who the traitor is. There's only one person with the position and power to enact the plan and benefit from it in the way that would be required.

As you say, it isn't too hard to ID the traitor, so there's no point not talking about this in detail now. They're not going to coup the government, put Masadans in charge, and then declare victory. The plan is for an assassination that almost wipes out the planetary government, but doesn't quite get everyone. Then the traitor legitimately ascends the throne, "resolves" the Masadan crisis, and tells Manticore to gently caress off before spending years or decades preparing to let the Masadans in.

There's a huge difference in both domestic politics and international between "the nation we were negotiation an alliance with got conquered, so we'd better honor the alliance we were setting up" and "the legitimate government of the nation we were trying to ally with got pissed off with us and told us to get the gently caress out of their territory".

The first one is straightforward defense of an ally. The second is the outright conquest of somebody who refused your offer of alliance. Bit of a difference there.

The Masadan plan here is pretty solid - assuming that it works out, they get everything they want at very little cost, and also with very little debt owed to Haven.

I mentioned this before, but it is Haven's plan that doesn't make sense. Giving away first-line warships (complete with crews) is a major show of support, and almost impossible to hide.

The historical parallel I can think of is Korea, where the Soviet Union not only supplied North Korea with fighter jets but provided pilots, several of which were killed in action with US forces or killed US pilots. The big difference is that a few dozen pilots and aircraft are nothing compared to major fleet assets, and both sides in the Korean War tried very hard to conceal the Soviet involvement - to the point where some very impressive aerial engagements were classified by the US for decades on account of the kills being Soviets. There was a real fear that if it were known that Soviet pilots were going down with US bullets in them (and vice-versa), public opinion in one country or the other would force open war.

Haven's entire thing here is that they're trying to cut off Manticoran preparations without sparking that war. Yet they're willing to risk having Manticoran crewmembers killed by Havenite missiles, which is a pretty solid casus belli by any standard - and paints Haven as the blatant aggressor. This means that they have an excellent chance of winding up starting a war with a minor action that can't give them a decisive advantage, and one that will make it very hard to get neutral opinion in their favor.

mllaneza posted:

Weber knows a lot about the Age of Sail, so tropes from that show up everywhere. He knows gently caress all about 3D printing and its implications, so he never mentions it.

3D printing was purely theoretical in the 1970s, and started to have some value in prototyping in the 80s. Universities started to make progress on actual usable prints in the mid-90s, and major use didn't start to happen until the 2010s. This book was published in 1993. Practical 3D printing didn't even exist yet.

EDIT because of a reply that wasn't there.

Kchama posted:

That isn't ENTIRELY true. The Fearless defeats the Thunder of God multiple times at the cost of the Troubador, and while it is in serious danger, it still was winning. It was only taking one hit for every six+ it landed on the Thunder of God, which forces it to flee again and again. The last encounter is nothing more than a formality as reinforcements have already arrived and they just aren't aware of it yet.

I don't want to get too deeply into it before the actual battle, but the only reason that Thunder Of God doesn't obliterate Harrington's forces with ease is that the guys in command keep getting spooked and backing off. The final mutual death ride is the only time that they actually go for the kill.

quote:

Also "they overly-relied on the computers, as opposed to Yu and Theisman" is one of those things that is goofy when one of the things Yu says is that the Madrigal would have been easily beaten if they had more time for the computers to do their job. There's a contradiction that Weber wants to have the realistic aspect of the officers actually relying almost entirely on their systems but the also the dramatic human pushing a "do it" button and causing things to happen.

There's a difference between using the computers and letting the computers run things. Yu is talking about letting the computers process their way through the interference and allowing the tactical officers an opportunity to adjust, while the later engagement has the computers in total control (because the operators don't know what the gently caress they're doing), allowing Fearless's computers the chance to figure out their algorithms.

Gnoman fucked around with this message at 12:24 on Dec 14, 2021

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007

Gnoman posted:

There are mentions later on about the extensive workshop facilities available on-ship, but Weber can just say it because it is automatic - every ship since the invention of ships has carried quite a bit of tooling. Specifying that a given ship has fabrication tools on board is akin to saying that a modern ship has toilets - the notion of not having that is ludicrous.

I mean you'd think so, but you have to have space for them and that's something an Honorverse ship doesn't have. We know for a fact that LACs absolutely don't have space for it, since they make a big point that they don't have the space for ANYTHING.

quote:

Later books begin stepping considerably away from the level of detail to show it, but there's lots of cases where a battle turns because they finally manage to see through the ECM to identify an important ship, or get enough missiles through to have superior weight of fire start showing through. A pretty key such moment happens in the climax of the very next book.

This (and the section preceding it) are all good points. Both of the sides in this argument have good reason to feel the way they do.

I actually do feel like the Havens are the best written faction, because their interactions with everyone but Manticore makes them feel a lot more human.

quote:

One thing that can be missed here is that this is implied to be the very first time in the setting's history that sublight units have been brought between systems quite like this. In just a few books, putting LACs on carriers and transporting them that way becomes a major tactic.

I don't mean to undersell this. Haven pulls off Clever Plucky Underdog stuff like this a lot and it is genuinely good. I just wish it really mattered.

quote:

As you say, it isn't too hard to ID the traitor, so there's no point not talking about this in detail now. They're not going to coup the government, put Masadans in charge, and then declare victory. The plan is for an assassination that almost wipes out the planetary government, but doesn't quite get everyone. Then the traitor legitimately ascends the throne, "resolves" the Masadan crisis, and tells Manticore to gently caress off before spending years or decades preparing to let the Masadans in.

There's a huge difference in both domestic politics and international between "the nation we were negotiation an alliance with got conquered, so we'd better honor the alliance we were setting up" and "the legitimate government of the nation we were trying to ally with got pissed off with us and told us to get the gently caress out of their territory".

The first one is straightforward defense of an ally. The second is the outright conquest of somebody who refused your offer of alliance. Bit of a difference there.

The Masadan plan here is pretty solid - assuming that it works out, they get everything they want at very little cost, and also with very little debt owed to Haven.

I mentioned this before, but it is Haven's plan that doesn't make sense. Giving away first-line warships (complete with crews) is a major show of support, and almost impossible to hide.

The historical parallel I can think of is Korea, where the Soviet Union not only supplied North Korea with fighter jets but provided pilots, several of which were killed in action with US forces or killed US pilots. The big difference is that a few dozen pilots and aircraft are nothing compared to major fleet assets, and both sides in the Korean War tried very hard to conceal the Soviet involvement - to the point where some very impressive aerial engagements were classified by the US for decades on account of the kills being Soviets. There was a real fear that if it were known that Soviet pilots were going down with US bullets in them (and vice-versa), public opinion in one country or the other would force open war.

Haven's entire thing here is that they're trying to cut off Manticoran preparations without sparking that war. Yet they're willing to risk having Manticoran crewmembers killed by Havenite missiles, which is a pretty solid casus belli by any standard - and paints Haven as the blatant aggressor. This means that they have an excellent chance of winding up starting a war with a minor action that can't give them a decisive advantage, and one that will make it very hard to get neutral opinion in their favor.

You're not wrong about a lot of this, but the problem is that when the chips are down they just go for "gently caress IT NUKE THEM" which is why I feel like the "just conquer them before they can fight back" plan would have worked better on the whole. But the main reason why I think it is an issue is that Masadan's own thinking is that Manticore only cares about the Manticoreans killed and the anti-Haven base, and will only expend so much blood and treasure to save Grayson. So the plot to kill both Manticoreans and Grayson officials in an assassination that Masada obviously perpetrated would just ensure that Manticore will be looking to gently caress them up. Whereas winning by taking orbit and overthrowing the government and then offering Manticore a base in exchange for recognition of Grayson as part of Masada would be less dangerous on the whole.

quote:

I don't want to get too deeply into it before the actual battle, but the only reason that Thunder Of God doesn't obliterate Harrington's forces with ease is that the guys in command keep getting spooked and backing off. The final mutual death ride is the only time that they actually go for the kill.

We'll see. I haven't read the battle in forever, but you can "I told you so" then.

quote:

There's a difference between using the computers and letting the computers run things. Yu is talking about letting the computers process their way through the interference and allowing the tactical officers an opportunity to adjust, while the later engagement has the computers in total control (because the operators don't know what the gently caress they're doing), allowing Fearless's computers the chance to figure out their algorithms.

There's the reason why I complain about Weber at one point talking about how the computers do all the work but the secret sauce is operators hitting a button. I'd think less of it if the issue was that they didn't know how to operate the EW computers at all.

Kchama fucked around with this message at 15:09 on Dec 14, 2021

Gnoman
Feb 12, 2014

Come, all you fair and tender maids
Who flourish in your pri-ime
Beware, take care, keep your garden fair
Let Gnoman steal your thy-y-me
Le-et Gnoman steal your thyme




Kchama posted:

.

You're not wrong about a lot of this, but the problem is that when the chips are down they just go for "gently caress IT NUKE THEM" which is why I feel like the "just conquer them before they can fight back" plan would have worked better on the whole. But the main reason why I think it is an issue is that Masadan's own thinking is that Manticore only cares about the Manticoreans killed and the anti-Haven base, and will only expend so much blood and treasure to save Grayson. So the plot to kill both Manticoreans and Grayson officials in an assassination that Masada obviously perpetrated would just ensure that Manticore will be looking to gently caress them up. Whereas winning by taking orbit and overthrowing the government and then offering Manticore a base in exchange for recognition of Grayson as part of Masada would be less dangerous on the whole.


Two things here. We don't know who they intended to blame the "failed" coup on (the actual attempt relies on factors that could not be planned for), but the result is supposed to be a purely Grayson government. The closest RW equivalent would be assassining Clinton to put Gore in charge, but Gore is actually a deep-cover Soviet agent. From the outside, it just looks like a normal succession.

They're also massive bigots who assume that anyone weak enough to be ruled by a woman is a coward who will back down, but the plan doesn't quite rely on that.

quote:

There's the reason why I complain about Weber at one point talking about how the computers do all the work but the secret sauce is operators hitting a button. I'd think less of it if the issue was that they didn't know how to operate the EW computers at all.

That is the exact issue. The Masadans didn't know how to operate the EW systems and left them in fully automatic mode. So it just went through everything in sequence from the same point, and Fearless's systems were able to identify and use that.

Drakyn
Dec 26, 2012

Khizan posted:

When used in this sense 'flat' usually refers to something being emotionless. A flat stare, a flat expression, flat eyes, etc. In this context it's more like "his eyes as emotionless as a snake's", which is workable imo.

fuckin' SLANDER.

Adbot
ADBOT LOVES YOU

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007

Gnoman posted:

Two things here. We don't know who they intended to blame the "failed" coup on (the actual attempt relies on factors that could not be planned for), but the result is supposed to be a purely Grayson government. The closest RW equivalent would be assassining Clinton to put Gore in charge, but Gore is actually a deep-cover Soviet agent. From the outside, it just looks like a normal succession.

They're also massive bigots who assume that anyone weak enough to be ruled by a woman is a coward who will back down, but the plan doesn't quite rely on that.

That seems to fly in the face of this chapter though.

quote:

"That's true," Elder Simonds mused, then inhaled deeply. "Very well, Brothers, I think we have reached our moment of decision. Maccabeus remains our best hope. If he can secure control of Grayson by domestic means, we'll be in a far better position to stave off further Manticoran intervention. No doubt they'll demand steep reparations, and I am prepared even to bend my neck to publicly apologize for our 'accidental' attack on a ship we didn't realize wasn't Apostate-built, but the destruction of any local regime to support their aims in the region should cause them to cut their losses. And, given their traditional foreign policy, it's unlikely they'll have the will and courage to conquer us to gain the base they desire. Most importantly, if Maccabeus succeeds, we can gain gradual control of Grayson without further overt military action, which means we will no longer need Haven, either, so I think we must delay Thunder's return to Yeltsin for at least one more day to give him time.

This is what he expects to happen in the case of Maccabeus SUCCEEDING. They're expecting Manticore to back off after the assassination despite everyone knowing that Masada did it and put a Masadan stooge on the throne, as long as Masada pays the reparations for 'accidentally' blowing up a Manticorean ship. The main benefit to Maccabeus's success in their eyes is the fact that they can tell Haven to shove off because Manticore won't attempt to conquer them for for blatantly taking over Grayson by hook and crook.

quote:

That is the exact issue. The Masadans didn't know how to operate the EW systems and left them in fully automatic mode. So it just went through everything in sequence from the same point, and Fearless's systems were able to identify and use that.

I just reread it actually. The chapter says...

quote:

Thunder of God's second salvo fared almost as badly as the first, and Simonds wrenched around to glare at his tactical section, then bit back his scathing rebuke. Ash and his assistants were crouched over their panels, but their systems were feeding them too much data to absorb, and their reactions were almost spastic, flurries of action as the computers pulled it together and suggested alternatives interspersed by bouts of white-faced impotence as they tried to anticipate those suggestions.


They didn't have enough people with enough experience to run both at once.

It goes on to talk about how the issue wasn't that the AI in charge would only do looping defenses, but that the Masadans programmed it to explicitly loop because the guy in charge only had time to set up one preprogrammed defensive ECM package (which I'm not sure really makes sense, how do you have prepackaged 'complex deceptions' for ECM?) that looped every 8 minutes, but because it was on this prepackaged defenses there was no one watching it at all to be able to tell if the sensors were being blinded.

Drakyn posted:


fuckin' SLANDER.

Yeah, agreed.

  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
  • Post
  • Reply