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What is YISUN?
Mother
A lie we tell ourselves to have a purpose
Bliss
A paradox with no solution
Father
A strong female protagonist
The weakest thing there is and the smallest crawling thing
Creator
Everything in this miserable and hellish existence
A solution with no paradoxes
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Thyrork
Apr 21, 2010

"COME PLAY MECHS M'LANCER."

Or at least use Retrograde Mini's to make cool mechs and fantasy stuff.

:awesomelon:
Slippery Tilde

Operant posted:

i wrote that tweet in 5 seconds lol

That your angel name?

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M_Gargantua
Oct 16, 2006

STOMP'N ON INTO THE POWERLINES

Exciting Lemon

Thyrork posted:

That your angel name?

5 Tweets In Seconds Without Due Consideration

Thyrork
Apr 21, 2010

"COME PLAY MECHS M'LANCER."

Or at least use Retrograde Mini's to make cool mechs and fantasy stuff.

:awesomelon:
Slippery Tilde

M_Gargantua posted:

5 Tweets In Seconds Without Due Consideration

:allears: Thread title worthy imo.

RocketMermaid
Mar 30, 2004

My pronouns are She/Heir.


A new page up, in which Al-Yisun declares that swords are honestly kind of cringe.

M. Propagandalf
Aug 9, 2008

THUNDERDOME LOSER
Last panel giving off some Wanderer above the Sea of Fog vibes.

Agean90
Jun 28, 2008


like the theme leaning towards esoteric warrior philosophy being stupid, actually

look at me im a sword saint durrrrrrr

There Bias Two
Jan 13, 2009
I'm not a good person

"Royalty is a continuous Cutting motion."

Everyone's always focused on getting the Cutting part right, but maybe the important part is more about the continuous motion.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

That was a good page. This comic is real good.

Youremother
Dec 26, 2011

MORT

The only correct answer was always "I dunno lol". Allison is a true sage and master of the Way.

YaketySass
Jan 15, 2019

Blind Idiot Dog
Not really feeling this page TBH.

skaianDestiny
Jan 13, 2017

beep boop
This was a good page. Trying to find the one true meaning or the absolute answer to life is pointless because there isn't any single right answer. All you can do is keep moving forward.

Brain Candy
May 18, 2006

YaketySass posted:

Not really feeling this page TBH.

Sorry, it rules

My alt text: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Jtpf8N5IDE

pseudorandom name
May 6, 2007

Imagine if Maya had studied at the feet of a dumbass much earlier in her life.

Thyrork
Apr 21, 2010

"COME PLAY MECHS M'LANCER."

Or at least use Retrograde Mini's to make cool mechs and fantasy stuff.

:awesomelon:
Slippery Tilde
The Maybe Dumbass. Far more powerful then a simple sword.

Lead out in cuffs
Sep 18, 2012

"That's right. We've evolved."

"I can see that. Cool mutations."




I'm gonna assume someone will want this as an avatar:

There Bias Two
Jan 13, 2009
I'm not a good person

YaketySass posted:

Not really feeling this page TBH.

Look at this nerd, they probably think swords are cool

Azubah
Jun 5, 2007

lol, she really is going to win though furious dumbassery

Youremother
Dec 26, 2011

MORT

YaketySass posted:

Not really feeling this page TBH.

You need to go and read the Tao Te Ching, now.

Potato Salad
Oct 23, 2014

nobody cares


YEEEEEESSSSSS

shirts and skins
Jun 25, 2007

Good morning!
this owns. thanks for the thesis statement abbadon

now let's see it all get blown to hell. bring it on home baby

Jon Irenicus
Apr 23, 2008


YO ASSHOLE

lol this was always going to be the eventual answer

Glagha
Oct 13, 2008

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YaketySass posted:

Not really feeling this page TBH.

This is not a snarky call-out, genuinely interested: what's wrong with it?

Rohan Kishibe
Oct 29, 2011

Frankly, I don't like you
and I never have.
Excellent shounen protagonist "lol I dunno" attitude from Allison here. Good page no notes.

Swords are still cool sometimes.

YaketySass
Jan 15, 2019

Blind Idiot Dog

Glagha posted:

This is not a snarky call-out, genuinely interested: what's wrong with it?

Well I expected some answer like this from Allison, but it feels like the page undercuts itself with how busy the dialogue is. Fundamentally this is a ponderous enigma being answered with something very simple (one can disagree on whether it works but it's unquestionably in line with the rest of the comic's ethos) - but I think the simplicity of Allison's answer is weakened by all the dialogue. You have Meti's question already being pretty long (from Maya's previous account we know she tried to defend herself at first, but as presented it's just Meti's reiterating her point with no back-and-forth), you've got Allison dismissing Meti, doing a "it's how you use them" conclusion, making a phallic joke, hugging Maya and thanking her, making an implicit promise with the restaurant comment, bringing back the Maybe Sword, ultimately acknowledging she can't answer yet, and finally doing a callback to Zaid.

All of these could work on their own but taken together it's all a bit much and doesn't really let you take it in. Especially with Maya's reactions being a bit strong compared to arguments that the reader has already been exposed to (again, this is just reiterating what's been explored before: swords are for losers, action matters more than wisdom, you're not beholden to the paradigms of the past, etc.).

Maybe it's just me though, if the rest of you are any indication.

YaketySass fucked around with this message at 23:05 on Jun 23, 2023

Donkringel
Apr 22, 2008
Swords are only useful for killing.

And cutting Gordian Knots.

Which I think Allison just did the metaphorical version of "I dunno they're kinda penis-y".

Brought To You By
Oct 31, 2012

YaketySass posted:


Maybe it's just me though, if the rest of you are any indication.
No, I wasn't feeling the dialogue either but nothing about the content is out of line or off theme. It just feels crammed in out of necessity so the story can move forward which is understandable but noticeable.

ThatBasqueGuy
Feb 14, 2013

someone introduce jojo to lazyb


Why are you, as a man, obsessed over swords? Kinda fruity tbh

Thundarr
Dec 24, 2002


Well that explains what prompted the tweets about end of time narratives.

It turns out the obvious answer to escaping an endless cycle of failure perpetuated by obsessive fuckups was to find somebody too dumb to be obsessed with doing things the Right Way and put them in charge.

A big flaming stink
Apr 26, 2010

YaketySass posted:

you've got Allison dismissing Meti, doing a "it's how you use them" conclusion, making a phallic joke, hugging Maya and thanking her, making an implicit promise with the restaurant comment, bringing back the Maybe Sword, ultimately acknowledging she can't answer yet, and finally doing a callback to Zaid.

All of these could work on their own but taken together it's all a bit much and doesn't really let you take it in. Especially with Maya's reactions being a bit strong compared to arguments that the reader has already been exposed to (again, this is just reiterating what's been explored before: swords are for losers, action matters more than wisdom, you're not beholden to the paradigms of the past, etc.).

Maybe it's just me though, if the rest of you are any indication.

allison babbling is very important to her answer because its her completely disrespecting meti and her memory because she was an old woman who lived in a barrel and couldnt stop talking about swords (which she hated).

the answer to meti should be "oh my god shut up already"

Malpais Legate
Oct 1, 2014

The question and Allison's answer are very good. It wasn't that the question immediately broke Maya, she says she tried to argue with Meti. It's just that as she argued she realized how meaningless and horrible her actions were! It's good that Allison gets to ramble and meander to her answer, something that Maya couldn't do back then.

ThatBasqueGuy
Feb 14, 2013

someone introduce jojo to lazyb


yeah, removing the narrative tension to the question is itself a form of answering it definitively

A Wizard of Goatse
Dec 14, 2014

Allison sort of rambling in response is fine imo but sort of tonally undermined when everyone is doing it, even the otherwise very terse Meti

is that good
Apr 14, 2012
yeah I like the shift in tone as defusing the drama of the question
that hope can be both radical and mundane, is an enjoyable theme,, to me

RBA Starblade
Apr 28, 2008

Going Home.

Games Idiot Court Jester

The ultimate question: "yes and?"

Kill six billion improvs

Shadowlyger
Nov 5, 2009

ElvUI super fan at your service!

Ask me any and all questions about UI customization via PM

There Bias Two posted:

"Royalty is a continuous Cutting motion."

Everyone's always focused on getting the Cutting part right, but maybe the important part is more about the continuous motion.

Do note that Intra said continuous cutting motion, not continuous cutting.

Bleck
Jan 7, 2014

No matter how one loves, there are always different aims. Love can take a great many forms, whatever the era.

RocketMermaid posted:

In all sincerity, this is one of my candidates for what the question was. The others being:

"And then what?"

:hmmyes:

Bilirubin
Feb 16, 2014

The sanctioned action is to CHUG


RocketMermaid posted:

In all sincerity, this is one of my candidates for what the question was. The others being:

"And then what?"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=URaqn39_E48

M_Gargantua
Oct 16, 2006

STOMP'N ON INTO THE POWERLINES

Exciting Lemon

Lead out in cuffs posted:

I'm gonna assume someone will want this as an avatar:



Would probably look great with the text bubbled removed.

M_Gargantua
Oct 16, 2006

STOMP'N ON INTO THE POWERLINES

Exciting Lemon
Maya deserved that hug, that was the Maybe Hug, and it hugged her deep because she couldn't choose not to be hugged with every fiber of her being.

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Skippy McPants
Mar 19, 2009

Royalty training arc,



Edit: also yes, the best thing Alison did on that page was hug Maya and validate her experiences. gently caress enormous reality-defining questions and just remember to be people, will ya?

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