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Pictured Allison in 6 months
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The clevin germ as seen under microscope.
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Aug 30, 2017 16:32
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The night before all her doctors were killed really was years ago, though.
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Aug 30, 2017 19:58
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Sep 1, 2017 09:27
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Everything happens for a reason is the most Clevin thing I can think of
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Sep 1, 2017 09:34
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Clevin wills it.
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Sep 1, 2017 10:26
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everything happens for a clevin
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Sep 1, 2017 11:35
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As Clevin gets softer and rounder, Patrick gets harder and sharper. Soon they will reveal their true forms - Patrick is actually Cleaver, Clevin is actually the Stay Puft Marshmallow Man
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Sep 1, 2017 11:54
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*Pats clevinly*
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Piell posted:As Clevin gets softer and rounder, Patrick gets harder and sharper. Soon they will reveal their true forms - Patrick is actually Cleaver, Clevin is actually the Stay Puft Marshmallow Man He's just devolving into a goblin with each progressive panel he's in.
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Sep 1, 2017 12:34
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Calling it now, Patrick will say that Alison and him bang or something stupid. Clevin will brush his cheek making him turn into Clevin and then he will cry, and go make pasta. Alison will come back and asking where patrick is, and clevin will say he left.
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Sep 1, 2017 13:51
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Hello... Clevin.
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BravestOfTheLamps posted:Hello... Clevin. the most sinister two words in the English language
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Sep 1, 2017 14:46
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Axe-man posted:Calling it now, Patrick will say that Alison and him bang or something stupid. Clevin will brush his cheek making him turn into Clevin and then he will cry, and go make pasta. Alison will come back and asking where patrick is, and clevin will say he left. I was waiting for the cucking subplot for ages.
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Sep 1, 2017 15:47
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KaosMachina posted:
I like to think he's patting him on the foot in that middle panel. Otherwise where did his thumb go
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Sep 1, 2017 17:24
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BravestOfTheLamps posted:Hello... Clevin. patrick sounds like Sebastian Gorka fyi https://twitter.com/aidnmclaughlin/status/894945988137320448
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Sep 1, 2017 18:07
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The one thing I'm remotely interested in from this comic, Patrick messing with Clevin, they cut away from. Grah.
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Sep 1, 2017 19:21
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Depending on how milquetoast this may go, I might check out after a few more updates. it was amusing to catch the ride of the comic going downhill fast and Goons slowly realizing it, but the clown show's gotta tell a few jokes to keep the thing rolling
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Sep 1, 2017 19:24
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So I guess on this page Alison explained to Clevin what happened while he was gone? That was...not conveyed well at all. All they had to do was have Clevin ask "What's going on?" when he comes back. Then we would naturally assume that Alison answered him in the cut away panel. At least it's confirmed that Clevin is a soft boy parody and not meant to be taken seriously, because what the gently caress is he doing patting a complete stranger on the hand like a child. pospysyl fucked around with this message at 20:22 on Sep 1, 2017 |
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Sep 1, 2017 20:20
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KaosMachina posted:
Panel 5, Menace's hair. Or rather, the flood fill in the back that didn't get erased in favor of the lazy gradient background. 
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sweeperbravo posted:I like to think he's patting him on the foot in that middle panel. Otherwise where did his thumb go Seriously what the gently caress is up with that panel. Clevin has like tiny mouse paws.
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PoptartsNinja posted:Panel 5, Menace's hair. Or rather, the flood fill in the back that didn't get erased in favor of the lazy gradient background. yikes
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Sep 1, 2017 22:06
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KaosMachina posted:
Remember how I said the last page had acceptable and human dialogue? Panel 4 kills that streak. Who opens up with the usual "I don't know what you're going thru" line with comforting hand pats to another guy? Who pats a complete strangers hand to console them after finding them passed out in their girlfriends apartment not moments after you left? Am I to believe that Clevin is so understanding and non confrontational and supportive that he'll just try and console some strange disheveled homeless looking guy who is lying on his girlfriend's bed.
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Sep 1, 2017 23:21
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Brought To You By posted:Remember how I said the last page had acceptable and human dialogue? Panel 4 kills that streak. Who opens up with the usual "I don't know what you're going thru" line with comforting hand pats to another guy? Who pats a complete strangers hand to console them after finding them passed out in their girlfriends apartment not moments after you left? Am I to believe that Clevin is so understanding and non confrontational and supportive that he'll just try and console some strange disheveled homeless looking guy who is lying on his girlfriend's bed. Yes, his first instinct when he saw a passed out stranger in his girlfriend's bed was to get a pack of ice and tend to him. Clevin is life.
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Sep 1, 2017 23:44
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Paladinus posted:Yes, his first instinct when he saw a passed out stranger in his girlfriend's bed was to get a pack of ice and tend to him. Clevin is life. Clevin will cure patricks brain bad poo poo and resolve all conflict. Then he will make tea and pasta and feral will eat with them.
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Sep 1, 2017 23:50
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i personally am an optimist and i believe any webcomic can be saved, which is why i'm looking forward to the insanely brutal and gory plot twist that awaits us
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the old ceremony posted:i personally am an optimist and i believe any webcomic can be saved, which is why i'm looking forward to the insanely brutal and gory plot twist that awaits us That's an apt way to refer to Allison's impending miscarriage.
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Who What Now posted:That's an apt way to refer to Clevin's impending miscarriage.
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Sep 2, 2017 01:43
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The word balloon placement is real bad in panel 2 intersecting with Clevin's white shirt. Also Patrick in this scene just seems like an entirely different character than in any scene beforehand.
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the old ceremony posted:i personally am an optimist and i believe any webcomic can be saved, which is why i'm looking forward to the insanely brutal and gory plot twist that awaits us Some times the best way to save a web comic is to take it out back and shoot it. Or spend several years making a bad sprite comic instead.
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Feral's hair is even more Clevin this page.
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Brought To You By posted:Remember how I said the last page had acceptable and human dialogue? Panel 4 kills that streak. Who opens up with the usual "I don't know what you're going thru" line with comforting hand pats to another guy? Who pats a complete strangers hand to console them after finding them passed out in their girlfriends apartment not moments after you left? Am I to believe that Clevin is so understanding and non confrontational and supportive that he'll just try and console some strange disheveled homeless looking guy who is lying on his girlfriend's bed. Clevins origin story is having the biodynamic power of being extremely impressionable. When he was young someone unwittingly gave him the honest advice that you should always be mindful of other peoples feelings and experiences, not knowing what kind of monster this well-meaning act would end up unleashing....Cut to twenty years later, and here's Clevin who now begins a request to pass the salt at the dinner table with a four minute speech on how he acknowledges the passers right to self determination and that they totally have no obligation to perform the labor of handing him the salt shaker, it's just that if they do feel ready to give it to him he would appreciate and enjoy but really, it's no big deal, no pressure, it's all good either way.
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https://twitter.com/MollyOstertag/status/903353359544885248 vOv
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"Actually, being skilled and dedicated to your craft is bad."
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OK, I laughed. I know the thread has been burnt before (and often, we're toast), but there's a chance that the milquetoast gets murdered in all this. Hope can be alive.
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Sep 2, 2017 12:59
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Too bad there is not middle ground at all between "overly detailed" and "using the same gradient every panel."
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loving lmao. It would still be controversial, but coming from someone capable of drawing distinctive and memorable characters, it would have been at least somewhat understandable. Paladinus fucked around with this message at 15:51 on Sep 2, 2017 |
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Hey backgrounds would take away from the main character: Clevin.
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