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BravestOfTheLamps
Oct 12, 2012

by FactsAreUseless
Lipstick Apathy

Axe-man posted:

As for her book the story seems like extremely queerbating or would it be queerplotive?

It's a queertastrophe.

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Nuns with Guns
Jul 23, 2010

It's fine.
Don't worry about it.

ZenMasterBullshit posted:

As a trans woman can I make one request to all webcomic authors. If you wanna write a story about being queer or trans please just write that story. Please stop equating, however well meaning you are, who I am and how I struggle with literal monsters. Even if you're queer yourself just please stop. I'm looking at you Monsterkind. And Monster Pop! gently caress why are there so many of these and they're all the whitest most toothless stories.

Thanks.

I blame the X-Men for convincing several generations of nerds that this is okay

PoontifexMacksimus
Feb 14, 2012

The Lord of Hats posted:




Even ignoring detail for a second, just look at the difference in use of color. Even thumbnailed, K6BD pops right off the page, and communicates that it's showing you this vast, alien expanse. SFP dissolves into a sea of white with scribbles on it.

Downsized it actually gives a fair sense of scale, if the city was supposed to stand on a small planetoid.

ZenMasterBullshit
Nov 2, 2011

Restaurant de Nouvelles "À Table" Proudly Presents:
A Climactic Encounter Ending on 1 Negate and a Dream

Nuns with Guns posted:

I blame the X-Men for convincing several generations of nerds that this is okay

Like X-men at least has the excuse that it started in a day and age where if you talked about the struggle queer or racial minorities have you wouldn't have been allowed to publish anything ever again. It just moved forward in time without ever really refining or focusing on its message at all. These authors, especially since many of them are LGBT have no excuse to be so loving dumb about their own metaphors.

Burkion
May 10, 2012

by Fluffdaddy
And this cannot be forgotten- the X-Men did NOT start as a metaphor for anything.

The whole idea of Mutants started because Stan Lee was lazy, and then it shifted into racial tension stuff due to the 70s and then it became LGBT stuff.



Literally the reason why they're mutants is because Stan Lee didn't want to think of reasons for people to have super powers anymore.

A Wizard of Goatse
Dec 14, 2014

i kinda figured it had less to do with X-men lore and more to do with the same sexually repressed mormon teen phenomenon that gave us the entire genre of angsty vampire porn

Nuebot
Feb 18, 2013

The developer of Brigador is a secret chud, don't give him money

Burkion posted:

And this cannot be forgotten- the X-Men did NOT start as a metaphor for anything.

The whole idea of Mutants started because Stan Lee was lazy, and then it shifted into racial tension stuff due to the 70s and then it became LGBT stuff.



Literally the reason why they're mutants is because Stan Lee didn't want to think of reasons for people to have super powers anymore.

The X-Men do have some really lovely moments where the comics, and lazy writers, relate the mutant struggle to various civil rights struggles but it also has a bunch of moments where people who bring that poo poo up in-fiction are shut down because obviously gay and black people can't naturally shoot laser beams from their eyes. Or even moments where mutant characters try to bring up that "Hey, I'm oppressed too so I know just what it's like so I'm allowed to say slurs too!" and get told they're being an idiot. It all comes down to who was writing at the time, and unfortunately a lot of the writers tend to be kind of dumb and bad. There are also a few really interesting queer sub-textual things throughout the series well before the CCA was abolished such as the rather well known Kitty Pryde/Illyana Rasputin relationship.

Melusine
Sep 5, 2013

https://twitter.com/MollyOstertag/status/912427998334271488
Well there's your answer, if you were curious.

Nuebot
Feb 18, 2013

The developer of Brigador is a secret chud, don't give him money

:eyepop: aimed at eight year olds?

Also based on a quick glance at her twitter feed, she's best friends with her publisher or whatever and got a bunch of free poo poo because of her connections. I sure wish I could get my mediocre products passed around on the fast lane because I knew some people.

Galvanik
Feb 28, 2013

Which publisher? IIRC there was a scam going around, maybe connected to that Least I Could Do guy, where someone claimed to be a publisher but was really just using some self printing service, and trying to get comic authors to sign over their IP rights.

Melusine
Sep 5, 2013

Nuebot posted:

:eyepop: aimed at eight year olds?

Also based on a quick glance at her twitter feed, she's best friends with her publisher or whatever and got a bunch of free poo poo because of her connections. I sure wish I could get my mediocre products passed around on the fast lane because I knew some people.

Can you actually source the latter half of that claim or are you just going to spout poo poo and hope everyone here believes you? There's a difference between not liking her work and claiming she "got a bunch of free poo poo because of her connections".

I ask because I went through her Twitter to get that quote and didn't see any evidence of that. Being friends with your editor (especially if she became friends with them after the fact) isn't a crime?

Also, the fact it's for eight-year-olds is probably why the gender non-conformity is couched in metaphor. Less likely for angry parents to get your booked banned fron schools that way unfortunately.

Melusine fucked around with this message at 04:29 on Sep 28, 2017

Nuebot
Feb 18, 2013

The developer of Brigador is a secret chud, don't give him money

Daphnaie posted:

Can you actually source the latter half of that claim or are you just going to spout poo poo and hope everyone here believes you? There's a difference between not liking her work and claiming she "got a bunch of free poo poo because of her connections".

I ask because I went through her Twitter to get that quote and didn't see any evidence of that. Being friends with your editor (especially if she became friends with them after the fact) isn't a crime?

Also, the fact it's for eight-year-olds is probably why the gender non-conformity is couched in metaphor. Less likely for angry parents to get your booked banned fron schools that way unfortunately.

I literally just scanned the tweets where she said she was talking about how awesome it was to get free poo poo for being friends with someone(who you could hire!) in the industry. I won't poo poo talk her from now on unless I can factually cite her though hth.

Who What Now
Sep 10, 2006

by Azathoth
You should have posted the tweet in the first place regardless so that we could have laughed at it. But no, you had to be selfish and keep the lols to yourself.

Shameful.

Typical Pubbie
May 10, 2011
It was fun to mock the artist for making a reductive statement about how good art is a distraction but I think we're getting a little obsessive.

the old ceremony
Aug 1, 2017

by FactsAreUseless
yeah i think she's a legitimately talented artist and tbh i wish her all the best. my problems with sfp are 100% on the writing side - the decline in art quality is sad but understandable, the art was all the comic ever really had going for it in the first place so it was just the universe reaching inevitable equilibrium. also that tweet was pretty stupid but art students say stupid things, it comes with the territory, they generally don't get enough sleep and know they're going to be poor forever no matter how hard they work, so

super sweet best pal
Nov 18, 2009

I didn't even know it was even possible for someone's art skills to decline, short of old age taking its toll, until this and Penny Arcade started getting bad. I was used to just seeing bad webcomic artists just stagnate for years, their art never improving but mostly staying the same.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG

Nuns with Guns posted:

I blame the X-Men for convincing several generations of nerds that this is okay

The only iteration of the X-Men/gay experience thing that I thought was any good at all was in the very beginning of the Ultimate X-Men line where Colossus is literally gay, gets outed and shunned by his Soviet handlers. It only spanned a few pages but I loved it for its brutal candor, and I don't remember anything like it in Marvel before or since.

Calaveron
Aug 7, 2006
:negative:

the old ceremony posted:

yeah i think she's a legitimately talented artist and tbh i wish her all the best. my problems with sfp are 100% on the writing side - the decline in art quality is sad but understandable, the art was all the comic ever really had going for it in the first place so it was just the universe reaching inevitable equilibrium. also that tweet was pretty stupid but art students say stupid things, it comes with the territory, they generally don't get enough sleep and know they're going to be poor forever no matter how hard they work, so

It was that tweet and the fact that she didn't realize she was illustrating a metaphoric rape scene

pospysyl
Nov 10, 2012



the old ceremony posted:

yeah i think she's a legitimately talented artist and tbh i wish her all the best. my problems with sfp are 100% on the writing side - the decline in art quality is sad but understandable, the art was all the comic ever really had going for it in the first place so it was just the universe reaching inevitable equilibrium. also that tweet was pretty stupid but art students say stupid things, it comes with the territory, they generally don't get enough sleep and know they're going to be poor forever no matter how hard they work, so

Some of the problems with SFP are exacerbated by Ostertag's poor art. For instance, Clevin and Alison's relationship wouldn't be nearly as ridiculous if Ostertag could draw them with an ounce of sexual chemistry. Part of why Clevin doesn't work is that it's impossible to imagine him as a sexual being, and that's on the art as much as it is the writing.

I don't think Ostertag is as bad an artist as Mulligan is as a writer, though, and do hope that Ostertag finds success in a project worth her time.

ManlyGrunting
May 29, 2014
Honestly I'm kind of hoping that Mulligan has other projects too, I'm an amateur writer myself and I can just feel him losing steam on this project and stagnating as an artist. He's simply not pushing himself anymore and when he does you can feel him wonder if its a bad idea in real time(look at all the goddamn hand-wringing in the Mary arc, or the masturbatory "I'm a good person I care about minorities" idiocy of that support group)

Axe-man
Apr 16, 2005

The product of hundreds of hours of scientific investigation and research.

The perfect meatball.
Clapping Larry
Clevin doesn't seem like he can do his job, If I were to be honest. He doesn't seem to be anyone. I am kind of a boring sod myself, but I feel like I am more interesting and exciting than the person than the "party organizer"?

I don't know what he actually does now that I think about it. Lets check the about page:

Clevin O'Toole
"Enthusiastic film buff and musician with a sense of fashion you either love or hate. A cheerful guy despite having had his share of run-ins with biodynamic danger."

what

The Lord of Hats
Aug 22, 2010

Hello, yes! Is being very good day for posting, no?
I kind of feel bad for Original Clevin. He seemed like a pretty cool dude when he first showed up, but then he wound up being Patient Zero for The Softness.

Calaveron
Aug 7, 2006
:negative:
His name really is O'toole huh

Typical Pubbie
May 10, 2011

Calaveron posted:

His name really is O'toole huh

He really is baffling as a character. Poorly conceived and executed in every way.

Axe-man
Apr 16, 2005

The product of hundreds of hours of scientific investigation and research.

The perfect meatball.
Clapping Larry
I just can't get over the "fashion sense you either love or hate" Like, we know more about his shirt, or his shirt has more important information about it, than himself.

Burkion
May 10, 2012

by Fluffdaddy
We know that he has a big dad

Brought To You By
Oct 31, 2012

The Lord of Hats posted:




Even ignoring detail for a second, just look at the difference in use of color. Even thumbnailed, K6BD pops right off the page, and communicates that it's showing you this vast, alien expanse. SFP dissolves into a sea of white with scribbles on it.

What bothers me is that I didn't realize that there is a giant wall surrounding the dreams cape in SFP. I thought there was some wasteland or something. Even minimized I can't unseen the lack of distinction between a vertical and horizontal surface. K6BD has some jarring color combinations. But at least I can distinguish the vanishing point. A walled off structure will have a different look than an endless labyrinth, but this is bad.

the old ceremony
Aug 1, 2017

by FactsAreUseless

Calaveron posted:

His name really is O'toole huh
clevin o'toole is a great name for a joke character but unfortunately he's not treated as a joke, because this is a serious comic and there can be no levity in it whatsoever or it would undermine mulligan's very important ideas. i think the last comedic character that appeared was the fish girl like ten years ago

the old ceremony
Aug 1, 2017

by FactsAreUseless
anyway i have no problem with criticising the art, just i know what can happen when goons start obsessively hating on something and i don't really think ostertag deserves to be the brunt of that because the actual core of the comic's badness is all mulligan's fault. just try not to get personal about it i guess. she's not a dobson.

Paladinus
Jan 11, 2014

heyHEYYYY!!!
I just want to say that Goodbye to Halos is a terrible webcomic that is not even nice to look at. It's painful to look at, in fact. If you like it, you probably have some webcomic-induced brain malfunction, like some sort of a reverse troll-mirror.

super sweet best pal
Nov 18, 2009

Paladinus posted:

I just want to say that Goodbye to Halos is a terrible webcomic that is not even nice to look at. It's painful to look at, in fact. If you like it, you probably have some webcomic-induced brain malfunction, like some sort of a reverse troll-mirror.

It was written poorly too.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
Oh I guess Mulligan's been reading the thread and was reminded of Rat Guy.

Brought To You By
Oct 31, 2012

Flesh Forge posted:

Oh I guess Mulligan's been reading the thread and was reminded of Rat Guy.

Are you sure this isn't !Tron or something? Rat guy looked a bit more gangly.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
Not the character, the hole in the wall.

Brought To You By
Oct 31, 2012
Welp, I guess we'll get literal rat-man helping Allison save !Tron from the evil queen of Narnia mark my words.

Who What Now
Sep 10, 2006

by Azathoth

pospysyl posted:

Some of the problems with SFP are exacerbated by Ostertag's poor art. For instance, Clevin and Alison's relationship wouldn't be nearly as ridiculous if Ostertag could draw them with an ounce of sexual chemistry. Part of why Clevin doesn't work is that it's impossible to imagine him as a sexual being, and that's on the art as much as it is the writing.

I don't think Ostertag is as bad an artist as Mulligan is as a writer, though, and do hope that Ostertag finds success in a project worth her time.

I'm.actually extremely thankful Clevin is not a sexual being.

Falstaff
Apr 27, 2008

I have a kind of alacrity in sinking.

I was just about to post my speculation on who !Tron is, but then I realized I really don't care.

Flesh Forge
Jan 31, 2011

LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT MY DOG
I didn't think about why I didn't have anything to say about the character but yeah that's pretty much what happened with me too.

Paladinus
Jan 11, 2014

heyHEYYYY!!!
This is stupid.

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ManlyGrunting
May 29, 2014
I genuinely thought it was just female Patrick and this is like a thought of his he's purging. Then again its not like you can tell characters apart when they have close-ups either.

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