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I took Sophia's edits as suggestions for my chapters. Did I agree with them all? Nope. The ones I liked, I implemented. It was very handy to have another perspective on how to structure my sentances, even if I preferred my perhaps not-so correct grammar because it was funnier to me to be awkward.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 15:08 |
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I also like the idea of inconsistent names. My Dothraki analog was "Datharki", and Dorne is Darne, and I didn't look up what others were using.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 15:13 |
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pksage posted:Because I can't view the thread at work (adult content) I'm on my phone and so can't fully respond to you, but I will say that in this project I did not attempt to make the prose better for anyone or do rewrites for anything beyond clarity. This should remain as purely voiced as possible in my opinion. I mean there are a lot of awkward sentences in everyone's stuff but that's kind of the point. I just went after grammar and spelling and understandability. Except for when he used gently like twice within 10 words, I did change one of those because I couldn't help myself. And by the end I was just trying to finish (HEYO) so I believe you on any mistakes I made there. I went back and forth on frame-work and desert sun. On the former I can't remember why I chose the hyphen, but on the latter I decided that desert sun wasn't a strong enough object to be considered a noun phrase. I'm sure it could be debated. For Lady, the world of Directionos capitalizes the title, and he was specifically talking about how women of her station behave, not just gentlefolk in general. For Master's Jelly, he capitalized it earlier in the work as if it were a brand name, so I kept it consistent.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 15:14 |
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Master's Jelly should be capitalized. It's high quality poo poo. Also, I don't know when it became "Directionos", but that's hilarious.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 15:20 |
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A GLISTENING HODOR posted:Master's Jelly should be capitalized. It's high quality poo poo. Master's Jelly: When you just gotta get at that itch in yer hitch.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 15:41 |
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Man, I completely missed "sucking comma gently". From the new A_H: pr0p posted:I'm like a 2/3 of the way through ADWD and man, it seems like Daenerys has completely forgotten about Westeros. I can't really bring myself to care about Mereen, and as dumb as some of her choices earlier in the series were, it only seems worse and worse. Also, I mentioned earlier in the thread anticipating the next Bran chapter after he found his way to the greenseer, it was pretty underwhelming. The Melisandre stuff give me a bad feeling about what he is up to. Not like R'hillor seems like a great 'god'. All of the Boltons/Freys need to die, though, so go R'hillor
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 17:01 |
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I'm amused by how much of the "non-spoiler" thread's current page is spoiler blocks. Are they that afraid to face the dangerous waters of The Bad Thread? (The fact that I am not terrifies me to my core.)
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 17:05 |
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There should be at least one part of the book with a hard block of sensual repetition. Something like: Deeper, and deeper, and deeper, and deeper, and deeper still, and even deeper yet, etc.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 17:44 |
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Have we considered including any images? fake edit: a glossary that includes a sex manual?
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 17:48 |
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IRQ posted:Have we considered including any images? Maybe another appendix with some recipes?
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 18:02 |
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Is there still time enough to setup a cafe press website with all the swag needed once this baby launches? Does cafe press offer sun dresses? Forgive my crude mockup. OldPueblo fucked around with this message at 18:17 on Aug 2, 2012 |
# ? Aug 2, 2012 18:08 |
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Not gonna lie, I'm actually working on a painting for the cover. Does Directionos have one moon or two?
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 18:31 |
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All of them, all the moons. That's why the tides are constantly hosed up which makes Sensa extra horny or something. I don't know.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 18:37 |
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2. And they overlap in the sky, with matching craters that makes them look like boobs.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 18:37 |
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Yeah, with two moons they could totally gently caress up women's menstrual cycles. They can be in weird orbits so sometimes women go a considerable time without their cycle and sometimes they come all at once and stay for a long time. Beware, the Red Moon is coming.
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 19:08 |
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Duke Nukem reads the ben wa balls section of 50 Shades of Grey: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5oUa-3W0BFI
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 23:34 |
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I'd buy it if he did the whole thing. Also MY INNER GODDESS IS DOING THE DANCE OF THE SEVEN VEILS
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# ? Aug 2, 2012 23:38 |
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Him and Gilbert Gottfried in a compilation audiobook Gottfried doing Anastasia and Jon St. John doing Christian Grey.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 06:10 |
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Umm... where is part two?? I didn't get my spam panther all ready for nothing. I can't wax my ham katana without some hard Darnish slashfic, you know what I mean? This is bullshit, a man needs his fix!!!!!
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 11:07 |
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bigmcgaffney posted:Umm... where is part two?? I didn't get my spam panther all ready for nothing. I can't wax my ham katana without some hard Darnish slashfic, you know what I mean? A man plays with explosives. Or a man writes horrible porn. But not both.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 13:28 |
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Shageletic fucked around with this message at 18:14 on Dec 3, 2022 |
# ? Aug 3, 2012 13:56 |
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Paundo-kun~~
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 17:54 |
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Jesus wept.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 17:58 |
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From the innocent thread:Halloween Jack posted:Are you sure you want to inflict that death march on yourself? WoT was what a bunch of my friends in high school tried to get me to start reading. They didn't seem to like it. They just wanted me to read it because they'd reached the point where they'd invested a lot of time in it, and talking about it was much more fun than actually trying to read it.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 20:02 |
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Blade_of_tyshalle posted:Paundo-kun~~ Is this the sketch of your cover painting? Holy poo poo.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 20:03 |
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Urdnot Fire posted:From the innocent thread: My reaction was Suddenly everything became clear.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 20:18 |
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The difference is that WoT gets better and will actually be finished.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 20:32 |
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WoT gets better in the way that a decomposing body starts to smell better as the tissue vanishes. Also nice avatar, to think you were anti-Wire!
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 20:52 |
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Even Wire haters must bow before Omar's Coming.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 20:55 |
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Blade_of_tyshalle posted:Paundo-kun~~ This is excellent.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 21:19 |
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Sophia posted:WoT gets better in the way that a decomposing body starts to smell better as the tissue vanishes. Have you read the more recent ones? After RJ found out he was dying he really got his poo poo together, and Sanderson is doing a great job of finishing it. And yeah, I know. I was wrong, I can admit that.
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# ? Aug 3, 2012 21:30 |
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IRQ posted:Have you read the more recent ones? After RJ found out he was dying he really got his poo poo together, and Sanderson is doing a great job of finishing it. Now that you can watch TV correctly, maybe you can learn to read better and enjoy AFFC/ADWD for the literary tour de force that they ate, I mean Proust is weak sauce compared to this poo poo.
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# ? Aug 4, 2012 00:14 |
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bigmcgaffney posted:Now that you can watch TV correctly, maybe you can learn to read better and enjoy AFFC/ADWD for the literary tour de force that they ate, I mean Proust is weak sauce compared to this poo poo. The literary tour de force that they ate? Well they are written by Gurm I guess.
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# ? Aug 4, 2012 00:25 |
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Guess what Gurm's working on, Wild Cards! No, no the answer isn't "nothing" or "pizza." You already know it isn't WoW... It's Wild Cards! quote:I've got all sorts of good news for the Wild Cards fans reading this. If you haven't tried the books yet, what are you waiting for?!!!!! Good news for our French and UK Wild Card! Do we actually even have any frogs?
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# ? Aug 5, 2012 23:05 |
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gently caress yes! Can't wait to get LOWBALLed in my dirty pirate bay next year!
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# ? Aug 6, 2012 03:54 |
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Wait, wait, wait. He has a co-editor now? Fucker can't even edit other people's work, now? Absolute Fucker.
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# ? Aug 6, 2012 13:53 |
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Does anyone actually read that atrocious poo poo?
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# ? Aug 6, 2012 14:26 |
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People must, because they keep publishing it.
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# ? Aug 6, 2012 15:05 |
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I like how he wrote this essay deriding fanfiction and calling fanfiction writers bad people and then he spends all of his time editing fanfiction.
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# ? Aug 6, 2012 15:08 |
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Yeah, I'm not sure how he justifies writing Jack Vance fanfic while simultaneously calling fanfic names and deriding those who choose to write about Naruto and Sasuke fighting ninja-monsters in space or something.
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