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rotinaj posted:Sweet I can't wait for the comic to tackle some abusive girlfriend who calls in the Superfriends to gently caress up her boyfriend and they hospitalize some dude because he wouldn't buy his girlfriend a pizza with his rent money With any luck, they'll Jean Grey Furnace back into life (I mean come on fire people, new powers, losing control, he's basically the phoenix) and then we'll actually get the resolution to his character arc that should have happened during this chapter.
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Title page opens with a closeup of Alison and Lisa shrugging with the title "Well That Was a Dumb Plan." Chapter 6 starts with Alison coming to terms with the end of the Guardians, having a new roommate and the death of that guy that she didn't like. THE COMIC CAN STILL BE SAVED.
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Nov 22, 2015 07:52
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I'm okay with it being mediocre but well-intentioned. It's cute.
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T.G. Xarbala posted:I'm okay with it being mediocre but well-intentioned. It's cute. This.
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Nov 22, 2015 08:25
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Error 404 posted:This. It's just weird that this is the result of 300+ pages of buildup. I'll get over it.
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Nov 22, 2015 08:28
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Waiting for the comic to go full Josh Lesnick and turn into lesbian porn
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T.G. Xarbala posted:I'm okay with it being mediocre but well-intentioned. It's cute. Mediocre is being awfully generous
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Nov 22, 2015 17:38
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While the story in this chapter was really bad and clunky, the art improved a ton, give it some credit.
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Nov 22, 2015 20:38
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I can honestly say I still don't have that much regard for the art. It's functional but among other things facial expressions are still kind of off-putting. Allison's "happy" face a page or two ago comes to mind.
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rotinaj posted:Mediocre is being awfully generous Well I'm in a giving mood, it's almost turkey day. Flesh Forge posted:While the story in this chapter was really bad and clunky, the art improved a ton, give it some credit. Yeah, Molly's been getting better over time and can put together some nice-looking pages if she pushes herself.
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Oh hey, new cover page. Maybe we're foreshadowing the return and revenge of Furnace.
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Dec 6, 2015 02:47
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Alison's best intentions somehow burn down a building, Hector and Brad know her well enough not to be surprised.
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Dec 6, 2015 03:21
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Alison Green and the Mystery of the Burning Fire
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Dec 6, 2015 04:03
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Dear Furnace: Sorry We Murdered You
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Dec 6, 2015 05:14
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Furnace comes back as a sexist rapeflame, oh no!
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Furnace was aware that his powers had been getting stronger, and more difficult to control, but he had written it off as unimportant. Little did he know the true extent of the changes, up until the dam explosion that should have cost him his life. His body was destroyed, but the fire--and Furnace--remained. Now immortal, immaterial, and entirely inhuman, Furnace must face up to an uncaring eternity in which he is unable to touch that which he loves without consuming it utterly. Nah, it'll be something way more mundane. Moonshadow is now trapping rapists in houses and then burning them to the ground. This is justified, because,
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The Lord of Hats posted:Furnace was aware that his powers had been getting stronger, and more difficult to control, but he had written it off as unimportant. Little did he know the true extent of the changes, up until the dam explosion that should have cost him his life. His body was destroyed, but the fire--and Furnace--remained. Now immortal, immaterial, and entirely inhuman, Furnace must face up to an uncaring eternity in which he is unable to touch that which he loves without consuming it utterly. The chapter will end with Alison coming to the earth-shattering revelation that she needs to open a helpline for troubled teens.
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Gravitas Shortfall posted:The chapter will end with Alison coming to the earth-shattering revelation that she needs to open a helpline for troubled teens. She'll talk to the people moonshadow sets on fire, trying to convince them to accept their fate.
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Dec 8, 2015 00:04
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Well, that didn't take long.
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Hmm, I like what's going on with this new page but it doesn't really say anything flattering about the SJL standing outside. Sorry Old Male Person  e: The JokeBots should make jokes at this time
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Looks like they're finally following up on that volunteer firefighter thing. e: even with super strength she straight up ignored the dude. 
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Dec 8, 2015 17:18
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I don't think she's left the room yet. The piece that falls on them is above the old woman in the first panel. She's just getting the higher priority here and actually being intelligent for a change.
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Dec 8, 2015 17:40
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I hope you're right  ... shittypop is a smilie, neat
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Watching Jessica Jones makes it so clear how badly SFP is doing both Alison / Patrick's characters, and consent / rape storylines.
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Heyyyy I like where this is going now!
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Yeah, holy poo poo, I'm liking this again. Very strong opening.
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Dec 11, 2015 17:43
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I would like to enjoy this comic again. 
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I'm glad this comic isn't mishandling the topic of rape and domestic abuse right now.
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Dec 15, 2015 22:34
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So she has the same powers as the guy from irredeemable now?
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Jolyne Cujoh posted:Tactile Telekinesis loving called it. Three pages strong let's keep it going.
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I'm sure that guy with knife hands will be glad to learn that his power is telekinetic.
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It's a good thing main characters always get the good powers or this would be a really depressing comic!
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Nuebot posted:So she has the same powers as the guy from irredeemable now? No, just most of Superman's.
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wiegieman posted:It's a good thing main characters always get the good powers or this would be a really depressing comic! I'd actually like to read a comic about people with lovely powers
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Flesh Forge posted:I'd actually like to read a comic about people with lovely powers Quite literally
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So the result of all of that hunting down someone brutally murdering people( who were assured to be very bad bad bad bad people) is just over? That's it. "Welp, you killed Furnace" "Yep" "okay, peace out gonna start a help line"
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Ooo I see it has the traditional lesbian romance, sold
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Hollismason posted:So the result of all of that hunting down someone brutally murdering people( who were assured to be very bad bad bad bad people) is just over? That's it. We be firemen now! I wonder if she's going to date the handsome fireman. 
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Hollismason posted:So the result of all of that hunting down someone brutally murdering people( who were assured to be very bad bad bad bad people) is just over? That's it. She alerted the authorities before even going after Moonshadow. After the encounter I think she reasoned she can't do much to help and isn't even sure she wants to.
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