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"The introduction of Bruno, a key change and deviation from the film’s source material, Luigi Bartolini’s novel by the same name, served not only to provide a more pleasurable, and navigable story, but to facilitate the transmission and further convey the film’s deeper meaning, speaking in great volumes of both the contemporary time and society in which the film was shot, and providing a contrasting element with which to view and compare Antonio." Is this sentence ok, or can I chop it down? Do I need a semi-colon somewhere in there, or what? How about a period?
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# ¿ Nov 19, 2010 05:55 |
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# ¿ May 11, 2024 08:44 |
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Arriviste posted:Something like this, perhaps? Thank you. I am notorious for run-on sentences, so when it comes to shortening, every little bit helps, especially in my thesis statement.
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# ¿ Nov 19, 2010 13:58 |
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Is this sentence too awkward? Death, crushed by thousands of pounds of pressure in an endless night, drawing near, Sean’s hand finds, at last, a useful lever- the battery’s priming pump.
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# ¿ Jan 22, 2013 19:38 |
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What thread or forum should I go to if I wanted help and information on making a youtube series?
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# ¿ Jan 21, 2016 15:35 |
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Combine with "Ad Nauseum", for bonus effect! E.g. rambled on Ad Nauseum
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# ¿ Feb 6, 2016 12:38 |
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Is there a thread for non-fiction writing? Say if I wanted to write a how-to or self-help book?
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# ¿ Jul 16, 2019 00:38 |
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I'm kind of lost as to where to even start. Hoping since this is a "creative" matter, I can post my question here. Does anyone have a good resource on how to animate for a youtube channel? I have an idea I've been kicking around for a few years now in my head for a channel, but I don't even know where I should look for good instruction.
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# ¿ Dec 28, 2023 17:21 |
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# ¿ May 11, 2024 08:44 |
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Both, honeslty. Very simple animation that's suited for commentary on existing videos. And Maybe I need a class on that sort of youtube (running it, creating for it, etc). Any info on that? Reputable sites that sell lessons or online courses?
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