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Sweet_Joke_Nectar posted:Seems like an intellectual exercise, a lot of exposition which is really the author telling us how he feels about something, instead of a scene between two people. Agree. There's not really a struggle or a character arc. If you want to do something that explores the strain on a relationship between two idealists when one goes to far, that has the potential to be a pretty interesting character story, but I don't think you can do it in the 10 minute play format, and this seems a little on the cliche side. Try fleshing it out into a longer piece and let us see more of the divide between the two characters.
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