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AIIAZNSK8ER posted:here are two I did over the weekend. There is something about these photos that makes them look like a composite and I think that is what distracts me from looking at the subject. There is a lot going on in the background and it feels too busy. Is that a reflection in the window behind their right shoulder? The light feels a little harsh as well.
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First time doing any portrait photography in a studio while on a photography course I am doing. I wish I had got her to take off that coat but after taking the photos it was us who became the models for the next person so I was rather nervous about directing people.
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Penpal posted:
I am completely drawn to his eyes. The way the green stands out and the catch light reflected in them. Bam, that is right where I want to look. Well done.
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Feb 19, 2010 17:23
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thetzar posted:I like this, but I'm a grain worshiper. Marvellous shots. I think I prefer the second one. While the first has lots of tension because of his expression I also feel I am missing something that should be there on the right. I keep looking at the empty space on the right and wondering what I should be looking at. With the second shot I think the composition is better. While he is looking at something outside the frame, it feels to me like the additional angle of his head combined with the fog of his breath makes this shot more interesting. The little kick of ?light? behind his head rounds it off and draws me back in. My only other comment would be... are these too sharp?
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