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Matty D posted:A pencil test for an animation I'm working on. It's of the cowboy i posted earlier. Still have to tweak, cleanup, add features. Really awesome. I don't know if you are looking for critiques or anything but: I feel when he takes a swig at the beginning he should be leaning himself back instead of forward, looking at your character concepts he really comes off as a sloppy drunk and when he takes that drink it just doesn't have that exaggerated punch that I expect from a character like that. Should break his back with that swig.  Also, when he begins to walk, his drunken change in direction at about 0:06 is really weak, and at around 0:08 it's really strong and has a lot of character. I think you might be able to hold that keyframe at 0:08 where he's trying to stay balanced before falling over a little longer.
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That fat guy doesn't look enthused. Your drawings have a lot of character, I dig 'em.
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