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Pickman posted:Enough of my amateurish critique. I'm still trying to narrow down my selection of images for my course portfolio, and I need to decide between these two: I prefer the second one. However, in both the "line" my eye follows is pretty confused and doesn't ever really stop on anything like a focus. In the first one, my eye hops from the lower right flowers, to the left flower, then to the line of gravestones, then it gets lost in the trees. The line my eye follows is much stronger in second one, but, again, the line does lead me anywhere in particular. I think that the second could benefit from cropping.
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