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Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007

thehomemaster posted:

Maybe not 50%, but this is pretty useless:

'I'm guessing the single quotation marks are a British thing, so I can't really pick on that, but you did miss an opening mark on at least one line of dialogue. I guess some Orientalism is unavoidable in the context of wizard week.'

The rest is fine, if not particularly helpful, but it does coincide with what everyone else has said so there's that!

At this point someone could just tell you to eat a dick five thousand times and there wouldn't be a single superfluous word in their assessment.

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Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007
Thanks to whoever posted the Joust contest months ago, since I actually got published in it. Runner-up, but it was still my first publication, which is nice. Normally I don't bother.

Professional editors are crazy thorough, it was great

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007

The Saddest Rhino posted:

congrats dude! post the link when it's up because i like your writing

This is it.

Guiness13 posted:

I just want to drop a general thanks to the posters in this thread. I just had my first story published in Under the Bed on fictionmagazines.com, and I'm stoked. I've absorbed a ton of advice here. I went back and read one of the first stories I wrote, and holy hell has there been progress.

Looks like this is a good week for several people, well done.

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007
I write what I want when I want to because I have a desk job to take up the rest of my time, but I generally do find that good ideas, or at least the ones that give me a functional plot, give me a sort of "buzz" before I start working on anything. With longer-form works I need to repeat that process in pieces, but the principle's the same. I also never outline anything and just think about what I want to do and how to do it 'til it gives me a migraine but that is not advisable procedure for anyone.

I like being a hobbyist. Prefer it to banging out millions of words of tepid porn with ever-shrinking profit margins, at least.

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007

Cpt. Mahatma Gandhi posted:

This advice is all really solid, but it does leave me with a question: do you not do second drafts? It sounds like you finish a first draft, give it the glaze/polish treatment, then move on to something new. Which is a rad way of churning out material, don't get me wrong, but I feel like it would take a lot more than just a first draft and a polish to actually get anything published unless you A) plotted really well, or B) are naturally talented at stringing a story along on the first go.

He self-pubs, which runs by somewhat different rules than trad pub and is a dying market anyway.

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Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007
Present tense is generally inoffensive and even preferable if you want to convey a sense of immediacy or uncertainty about the future.

On the other hand if you write a long-form story in second person I will destroy you.

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