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freaking typos aldfjalsdfjalukj
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Mar 16, 2015 10:16
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frig frig frig i tried to ninja edit because somehow there was an extra space between one of the lines after i copy pasted it unreal should have hit post preview. i looked over that thing for typos so many times how does it work do i get disqualified or just judged extra harshly? take the moon fucked around with this message at 21:11 on Mar 22, 2015 |
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Mar 22, 2015 19:44
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mhm it was extreme autism i just couldnt deal with that extra line (between separate paragraphs too) messing me up. i looked over that story a bunch of times before submitting it and just wanted it to look nice i guess ill happily accept any fallout
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Mar 22, 2015 21:48
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oh overlords i prostrate myself before you any misery you might inflict on me would be an improvement to my wretched existence is there like some sort of flash test i can do to prove myself
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Mar 22, 2015 22:13
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if you flash me now i can get it done by midnight  tense trouble :/ im gonna learn from this. two dumb stories and i still wont be critted take the moon fucked around with this message at 04:57 on Mar 23, 2015 |
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Mar 22, 2015 23:54
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sorry for the drama guys. ill toxx this week
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Mar 23, 2015 18:26
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dont take my advice on anything but i think you should pay attention to the person who said to make sure its authentic. i think it would be really akward if you werent mexican-american, or havent lived in a ghetto, or both
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Mar 30, 2015 03:45
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i guess that was silly. point withdrawn. edit: altho i think writing about a socioeconomic reality experienced by minorities is a bit different from cyberpunk which is pretty much the domain of white ppl (here i am ignorant so educate me if you wish). im just trying to underscore the point that you should prolly be careful but again what do i know take the moon fucked around with this message at 17:05 on Mar 30, 2015 |
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Mar 30, 2015 14:16
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please look past the fact that i literally failed to bold my title tia and at least one typo what a disaster take the moon fucked around with this message at 18:50 on Apr 19, 2015 |
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Apr 19, 2015 18:45
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chill judging is best judging
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Apr 19, 2015 19:15
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frig dude crits are like oxygen. id beg on my hands and knees for them if i thought my stories, uh, even deserved them sometimes
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Apr 28, 2015 02:25
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also, my lovely attempt at a crit sucked and wasnt helpful at all sorry. it was basically this seems like a mistake i dont understand the ending lol. so posting to say that i owe a crit. ill try to do one later tonight, k? also that is good advice sebmojo
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Apr 28, 2015 02:58
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i fuckin love the phrase he thought. im gonna write a novel thats all third person thinking and the action will be eating a sandwich and im gonna make a million dollars!!!! srlsy i do like it.
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Apr 28, 2015 21:33
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should i keep trying thunderdome or should i kill myself
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May 13, 2015 06:28
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ahaha, good to know it took other ppl a while. ill keep at it.
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May 13, 2015 06:58
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patriarch im sorry for ending all your plot threads in the most generic way imaginable  im terrified of judgement tomorrow
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May 18, 2015 04:46
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i know youre not supposed to apologize for and explain thunderdome stuff, but id like to apologize for and explain my thunderdome story. i missed the part where your main character needed to be endearingly evil, and tried to make him as evil of a dick as possible, with the result being a story that was full of creepy as poo poo rapey stuff (which is a sign of bad writing in itself.) so yeah, gonna formally apologize for ppl who had to read that, if anyone feels creeped out they can brawl me or whatevs
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May 27, 2015 03:55
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"read good literature" thanks i wasnt doing that before but im on it now
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May 28, 2015 22:47
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hey seafood, if youre reading this, i dont remember what pizza week was but sometimes i feel my stories are such bullshit that i dont even feel like reading the crits on them. (this is something im trying to change). if you critted me on one of those weeks thats prolly what happened. sorry for the story and for making you feel like you wasted your time
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Jun 11, 2015 05:30
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thats a lot of posting and i appreciate the additional critting. if it doesnt feel like im paying attn to crits from now on just ban me from td i guess. i would like to keep trying ill do the homework at some point today
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Jun 11, 2015 18:12
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i know everyones patience is prolly wearing thin (or disappeared completely), ill at least take a break from thunderdome this week (aside from the loserbrawl). it does really mean a lot to me and id like to keep doing it, and all i can do is promise to read every crit carefully, with the understanding i may not get many crits after this whole thing. homework here cuz im not sure where it should be posted. Shallas 199 words Shallas, priest of Ta’av, entered the world in a naturally formed cave on the side of Ur Mountain. His parents told him, once he could understand, the importance of being close to Ta’av. Ta’av spoke to him in the form of smoke signals rising from the mountain’s apex. The other children would say “Ta’av sure is angry today,” but Shallas knew there was more meaning to it. He would sit in the village square to get a better look, and while the others played and danced he would record the length and frequency of each smoke burst on any scrap of paper that he could find. Finally the papers bundled together were the thickness of the village geneology. By this time Shallas was thin and hunched over from the weight of the years. But Ta’av had finally invited him to climb Ur Mountain, and he did so, though the jagged edges and harsh winds were enough to frighten away even the young and strong. There he saw a single scrap of paper covered in ash, an ember slowly burning it away. He fed his bundle to the fire and watched it rise again, and died as Ta’av was reborn.
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Jun 11, 2015 18:39
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it was all a dream~
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Sep 17, 2015 19:39
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yeah but have you maybe tried... thunderdome?
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Sep 19, 2015 19:01
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https://youtu.be/JjIXwkX1e48?t=7s
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Sep 21, 2015 02:36
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i dont really have a method, i like posting in threads tho
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Oct 1, 2015 02:30
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yeah nvm
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Oct 6, 2015 04:56
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"Read this story I'm in," he said, smoking a cigarette in a cool fashion. "I agree, it's really good and interesting," she replied. Then they boned. youre welcome
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Oct 12, 2015 18:43
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i just wanted to post something. a good way to write is to use less adverbs
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Feb 14, 2016 16:12
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whats some good advice for someone who wants to write fiction?
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Jun 7, 2016 18:35
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tbh its p obvs that writers need 2 b readers im not reading that
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Jul 21, 2016 05:28
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tbh if i analyzed the writing to consciously pick up techniques i wouldnt enjoy anything just read a lot, your unconscious will absorb words and style hacks and then u can b yrself when u write. god life is too short to endlessly pick apart books
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Jul 22, 2016 01:54
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magical time to b alive imo
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Aug 26, 2016 05:46
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f it imma start posting here losers~ just write w/e and worry l8r who tf cares. maybe take chems please scream in word form also k driveby peaaaaace ninja: looooooool rip
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Feb 3, 2017 20:30
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stop posting in an old thread mods??? e: lol
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Feb 19, 2017 20:42
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