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Arivia
Mar 17, 2011

Pimpmust posted:

Speaking of writing boring scenes, how would you go about writing a ... well a "montage" scene?

Not necessarily the inspiring kind with :rock: Eye of the Tiger :rock: over it, but the more homely/drab kind you might see in some movies where the scene follows the protagonist through an ordinary evening or something else mundane.

Not something you might want to spend a lot of time on (See: boring), but might be necessary to set the mood or contrast to following scenes.

There's certainly some limitations compared to what a motion picture can do with such a scene (sound obviously, harder to do narration at the same time...).

I find that it can be a powerful thing done right but well... I don't have the writing experience to quite know how to approach it properly.

It's poetry, not prose, but "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" is what I think of when I consider the montage scene written down. I think Eliot makes it work by humanizing the narrator and making them an explicit commentator.

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