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Down With People
Oct 31, 2012

The child delights in violence.
Best book written in first-person is Snow Crash, which adds in present-tense to make it feel like one long action movie. Check that poo poo out.

EDIT: Actually I'm stupid as hell, but Anathem is by the same author, actually is in first-person and also worth reading.

Down With People fucked around with this message at 04:31 on Jan 23, 2013

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Down With People
Oct 31, 2012

The child delights in violence.

Adeptus posted:

Isn't Snow Crash in third person? Or am I mis-remembering?

Wait, you're right, poo poo. Everyone just stop listening to me now.

Down With People
Oct 31, 2012

The child delights in violence.
I feel like I should get that tattooed somewhere.

Down With People
Oct 31, 2012

The child delights in violence.

Sitting Here posted:

Question: How painstaking are you when developing the climate and geography of a non-earth world (thinking more fantasy here than literally other planets in this universe)?

I would go so far as to say that I stake not a single pain.

There are folk who really get into worldbuilding, really like to fill in every nook and cranny of their worlds. I don't. That, for me, is where creativity goes to die. I have to stop writing and look up poo poo on Wikipedia or Google so I know what I'm talking about.

The most I do is make sure that I'm using the right terms to describe something. That's where it ends.

Down With People
Oct 31, 2012

The child delights in violence.
Comma splicing just feels so natural to me. It feels more stream-of-conscious and less clunkier than dropping in an and. Though I can imagine in would get annoying if you used a lot of them.

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Down With People
Oct 31, 2012

The child delights in violence.
I would say that 'mystery thriller' and 'lengthy detailed introduction to the plane between this world and the next' are not happy bedfellows. I would focus more on introducing the characters and sprinkling some details on the ethereal plane throughout the intro. It will probably work a lot better if the reader doesn't know what's going on until later.

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