Ok I just read both these books. They were good? I guess? But what the gently caress happened? Clarity, people! If the reader doesn't receive your story, you haven't told it!
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# ¿ Nov 24, 2012 21:42 |
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# ¿ May 19, 2024 12:12 |
coffeetable posted:Not sure I agree with this. I'd claim that if your target reader can't deduce your story then you haven't told it. Actually I think I understand most of the bare bones, at least, except for the last five or ten pages of Fractal Prince. At the end there I lost track of who was/had been in whose/which body talking to exactly which/who exactly when again? How much of Jean's narrative was just the mimic? etc.. TouretteDog posted:
The funny thing seems to be that each "side" seems to act as if the other side's viewpoint is correct, at least to some extent. The Sobornost have "prime" identities and then progressions of less and less "authoritative" copies; Mieli gets incredibly freaked out by the idea of the Sobornost making a copy of herself. Do we get any clues as to who Mieli's "real" parents are? It's interesting that she was raised apart. I think it's going to be clear that she was engineered for every aspect of this, all along. Hieronymous Alloy fucked around with this message at 00:29 on Nov 26, 2012 |
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# ¿ Nov 26, 2012 00:23 |
The amnesiac protagonist is pretty much a classic trope; see Roger Zelazny's Chronicles of Amber or John C. Wright's Golden Age trilogy for examples. (I don't mean that as a knock -- Amnesiac protagonists are probably my single favorite SF trope period. I don't think I've ever read a book with an amnesiac protagonist that I didn't like).
Hieronymous Alloy fucked around with this message at 16:13 on Nov 26, 2012 |
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# ¿ Nov 26, 2012 16:02 |