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The thing about redrawing the first X pages is that it then becomes jarring when right after that, it jumps back to a less-refined style. To me, that's far more off-putting than starting with bad art but clearly getting better. Then again, I give comics a bit of leeway before I really start to judge the art, just because so many of them get better rather quickly. And good writing makes up for less-than-good art.
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Splicer posted:If Johnny ends up with an rear end in a top hat catdog spirit it will make my I almost feel like the comic is going to be an endless cascade of Johnny almost ending up being possessed by various spirits that would be hilarious, but actually staying mundane through the end.
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I just realized that Boss Leader's dialogue on this page covers the spectrum of colors.
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Looks like Zack found Cryophage's Tumblr. Someone should point him here.
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Seems to me like she seeks to shed a little sunshine on the goings-on of Mayview...
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Sep 6, 2016 04:08
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You know, outside of the humor value it's kind of refreshing for once to have a character who is totally chill and calling out another character's bullshit like this.
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Sep 16, 2016 05:00
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I really feel as though I'm missing some subtext to this conversation, and what neither of them are doing is making all that much sense to me.
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Oct 22, 2016 03:52
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Part of the problem, I think, is that everyone keeps using the word "dork", and I have no idea what that word means.
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Oct 22, 2016 15:53
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This is a funny comic. I have no clue what's going on. I think there are some serious pacing issues.
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I'd settle for regular, plot-advancing updates.
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Mar 7, 2017 19:25
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...the plot?
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Apr 26, 2017 03:30
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This is an action sequence that I have absolutely no emotional investment in.
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Jun 2, 2017 19:26
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Zack is experimenting with tying lots of things all together with multiple threads by making the panels all mirror each other—something that I don't think I've ever seen done in any other comic (web or otherwise) because
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Jun 4, 2017 01:35
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I agree. Experimentation is good. My worry is that he gets so much praise for it that he doesn't step back to see whether or not it really works. I also think that it could have been built up to in a better way, to have actual emotional tension here. I'm just feeling nothing for now.
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Jun 7, 2017 03:43
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It's easy to forget about Flip-Flop, seeing as he was introduced a year ago.
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Jul 5, 2017 18:03
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...am I missing something? The text never actually says what the relationship between Mr. Garcia and Spender actually is, right?
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Nov 8, 2017 19:52
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This constant ratcheting of tension just isn’t working for me, from a storytelling perspective. I feel like something needs to actually get resolved and give us a bit of a break. Right now, there are just so many things going on that it’s weirdly hard to care.
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Feb 27, 2018 21:53
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I continue to think Zach has a ton of ideas but no editor to winnow them down and no patience to put off introducing them and giving the audience a chance to breathe. I feel like ultimately, there’s just too much going on.
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Drunk Theory posted:Fartdog gives no shits. That's because he gives farts.
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