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I'd avoid "to whom it may concern"; it sounds impersonal and strange. Maybe try "Dear Sir or Madam" or Dear "Hiring Manager".
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# ¿ Aug 12, 2013 02:55 |
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# ¿ May 16, 2024 17:39 |
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Whoah yeah I should have read the rest of the cover letter before I posted any criticism about the salutation. Before you touch anything else, you need to work on that last paragraph pretty severely.
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# ¿ Aug 12, 2013 03:01 |
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Queen Elizatits posted:Hey Benny! First off I want to thank you for reading and replying. Most people would have given up on this thread and I think it's awesome you keep updating. I think though you may have missed another point I was making which is totally understandable I tend to type a lot of words. I am very excited to pursue this opportunity and would be eager to set up a time to discuss further how I would be an excellent candidate for this position. Please do not hesitate to contact me at (555)-123-4567 or at 420weedlord@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely,
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# ¿ Mar 8, 2014 19:21 |
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I'm good for $10.
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# ¿ Mar 19, 2014 16:46 |
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Somebody please make actual Benny comics.
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# ¿ Mar 28, 2014 15:05 |
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Keep that job. I'm rooting for you, bud.
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# ¿ May 28, 2014 04:15 |
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# ¿ May 16, 2024 17:39 |
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lol Benny definitely doesn't have a degree
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# ¿ Jun 11, 2014 01:03 |