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East Lake
Sep 13, 2007

It does look better but a couple things that still stick out to me are the eyes and the mouth. Because the bottom lip isn't symmetrical it looks like she's shifting her lower jaw to her left. The eyes also don't look like they have volume or the little red section on the inside (Lacrimal caruncle). The eyes look a bit 2 dimensional because the upper and lower lids are too symmetric.

Quick sketch I made to show you have the curve of the lids at the corners give it volume.



Eyes will have different shapes but you can generally separate each lid into two or three stokes to give it its shape.

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