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Hey guys, I've looked over another goon's resume forwards and backwards and followed the OP. It still seems too wordy to me but I can't decide how to cut it down some. Could you experts take a crack at it and let me know what you think? https://www.dropbox.com/s/g8dkrzyog4yu7qn/MrMidnight_Resume_April2013.docx Thanks! 
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DustingDuvet posted:I did a VERY basic critique of the first job entry on your resume. Right now, you have a great deal of words here, but you aren't really communicating that much. You need to focus on details and specifics and use less ambiguous language. Hopefully you can see my comments on the first job and use the principles expressed in them to improve the content throughout. Hope this helps! This is perfect, thanks!
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