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packsmack posted:Well, I just got done binging through this. I can't believe how long it was and at the same time I can't believe that I still want way more. I think it definitely dropped a little in quality after the whole Alexandria and Tagg (it would just be arc 27 and 28 that I need to spoil things for right?). It kind of felt like wildbow was trying to move the story along to his endgame and didn't want to go through the process of really fleshing out the PRT/wards as much as he did with the Undersiders. This is kind of how I feel too, though I wouldn't say it dropped in quality as much as I think the pacing took a real nosedive. I think it started when Taylor turned herself in willingly; I just couldn't buy that 4 cryptic words from Dinah was enough to make someone intelligent and methodical like Taylor give up everything she had just on the off chance she would be making the right decision, though I guess it does fit somewhat with her personality. Wildbow really needed to take as much time fleshing out Taylor's time in the Wards as she/he took fleshing out her time with the Undersiders. As it is it really does feel like she/he just wanted to advance the plot as quickly as possible at the cost of the already established pacing.
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