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Intro I developed an online game that's essentially a free browser-based civilization. I would really like to boost conversion and retention. Right now my splash page scares over 80% of visitors away, and there's progressively less retention the deeper people get into the site. Design Criteria
Images Splash page Signup page Interface Changing settings Links http://www.afuriousengine.com
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# ¿ Apr 24, 2015 15:14 |
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# ¿ May 21, 2024 03:50 |
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The Dave posted:So right off the bat, looking at your page for 5 seconds, it's extremely uninviting. That's really helpful, thank you! Would welcome second round (third, fifth, etc) of feedback as well.
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# ¿ Apr 24, 2015 15:31 |
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Lumpy posted:Going to start with this one. Think about the humans who got here. How did they get here, and why did they come here? Likely there are two use cases: Great advice, thanks very much! Lumpy posted:Hire a designer! Man, if only. This is just a hobby project with a budget of approximately $0, so hiring a designer isn't in the realm of the possible (if I'm going to exceed my budget, it's going to be on in-game art).
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# ¿ Apr 24, 2015 18:05 |
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Lumpy posted:Some designers will work for free / cheap if they think your project is fun. Hell, I'll mock something up for you this weekend! (I like space games.) That would be super cool of you! I've been really wary of posting for help, because a) I haven't had a tonne of luck working with contributors in the past, and b) rev-share and royalty posts are pretty bullshit, especially because I'm not planning on making any money on this at all. I've been tinkering a bit, how is this? slap me and kiss me fucked around with this message at 18:38 on Apr 24, 2015 |
# ¿ Apr 24, 2015 18:26 |