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[quote="SageNytell" post="424945491"] Alright, here goes... This is my first draft, please let me know what I should edit down to get within Fire Opal's requirements. Right now I'm way over word count, though that may be partially due to my proclivity toward purple prose. I used Fosborb's suggestion of The Wild Garden for the name of the dungeon, I'm not sure how well Awful Dungeon works on its own. I've tried to include details and concepts as much as I can, and I think I've come up with a workable premise. Sage, I gotta say I'm pretty happy to have logged in and found this Wild Garden write-up. So far as I am concerned you do not need to work to edit it down. I would happy to run with what y'all have done here. I mean, if you're loving the process of editing the work, go for it. Otherwise, don't fret, this is what we needed.
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