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Fat Jesus
Jul 13, 2011

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Megazver posted:

I think I would put more shadow under 'Simon' so it's more readable.

I think it great, reads fine to me. Maybe just remove the lines, idk.

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Fat Jesus
Jul 13, 2011

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SimonChris posted:

Do you mean the frame lines on the sides? If so, I already uploaded and old version without those lines, so I can just not fix it later :).

Yeah they seem superfluous or w/e if i had to pick something. I'm going to assume the penguin in the story has hands like Devon Larratt too.

Fat Jesus
Jul 13, 2011

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it's a puzzle that people buy books by their covers

Fat Jesus
Jul 13, 2011

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Dream Weaver posted:

I feel like I need to beat this horse a little more but people buy books because they like the authors previous work is the sense I get. That and the author has built a following.

What if their favorite author, Lovey Banh, hasn't put out anything new, so they're wandering about barnes and noble? I think the covers come in to play there, but what would i know.

Fat Jesus
Jul 13, 2011

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yes it does sound bullshittish. 'The service I use...' lol what?
But yea, I got no idea, I thought AI gives you some rough image and they photoshop out it's flaws and etc, then it would become 'original' or w/e ?

Fat Jesus
Jul 13, 2011

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LitRPG is like, um, the elder scrolls, where the MC levels up and gains loot like +10 boots of kickass, all which you can and should stack, and stuff? Oh I played Morrowind to Skyrim forever, a perfectly balanced games with no exploits, TY Todd. I had no idea such a thing existed in books form. That's crazy, or I'm old. Good for Selkie for making a dollar out of it.

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Fat Jesus
Jul 13, 2011

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Captain Log posted:


(Side Note that might be relevant - My book doesn't have chapters, just breaks. It distinctly moves from scene to scene, always from the perspective only two characters. I see a lot of places that assume chapters are a given.)

From what I've read, they say you should have chapters for the readers that set goals to read X chapters a day. Apparently that's a lot of people, or publishers think so, or something. Guess it would depend on what the breaks are?

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