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super sweet best pal posted:So she got her absolution. Now what? Paladinus posted:They are going to make love while Clevin secretly watches through the window dressed as a window-clevin. 
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That stone story pissed me off to no end. What a loving stupid storyline. Just crush the stones and walk away (from this comic)
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Nuebot posted:There are people in the comment section saying it's totally awesome that it took them so long to get back around to this. That spending like two months+ on a single conversation is fantastic writing and artwork. That dropping any and all efforts in drawing backgrounds is a good artistic choice. Holy poo poo I hate every single one of these people with an intensity I never knew as possible through the internet. What do expect when even the tiniest dissatisfaction with the comic results in your comment
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I really wonder if they will get close to what they got last time on Kickstarter.
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Apr 1, 2017 06:21
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Feral goes through the "I can't remember what accent I gave this character" phase a lot.
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Apr 4, 2017 17:24
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Typical Pubbie posted:The artist is working on two other projects right now. SFP is pretty much a side gig for her at this point, so she draws the bits she likes and the rest gets the bare minimum of effort. What's the writer's excuse?
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Apr 12, 2017 09:40
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Damnit, they already funded. Here's hoping it doesn't make as much as the first book's funding at least.
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Apr 25, 2017 19:52
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Nuebot posted:Also it's pretending like the super hero thing is still relevant in the least. When has it ever?
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Apr 28, 2017 02:35
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Nuebot posted:Then the page after that is her dropping congressmen into the ocean one by one? More like "another 6 months of talking in a coffee shop".
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Jun 19, 2017 17:10
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People gave money to their Kickstarter. Twice.
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Aug 2, 2017 18:07
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BravestOfTheLamps posted:From the good webcomics thread: Replace the OP with this.
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Aug 18, 2017 16:28
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Who the gently caress cares because once they leave Patrick's mind we'll never see these characters again.
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Nov 25, 2017 07:45
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I still can't get over the fact that people pledge enough money to fund two books for this. Is this what they wanted their money to go towards? Getting worse at your craft?
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Typical Pubbie posted:This comic was featured by Entertainment Weekly lol Jesus Christ, more like Entertainment Weakly.
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Dec 29, 2017 19:02
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New comic, more boring drivel. At least some people in the comments section is starting to notice how dumb everything is. Until those comments "mysteriously disappear".
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Jan 16, 2018 18:10
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Typical Pubbie posted:Allison's cankles are bigger than her neck. The condition is rapidly becoming terminal. It's like they're drawn at an angle; feet in front, head in back. Almost like how Ed from Ed, Edd n Eddy used to run.
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Jan 16, 2018 19:46
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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Batman's Shameful Secret > Strong Female Protagonist: If you start getting sick because no one has touched you in years, you can hire sex workers to come and rub your back.
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Like this kind of build-up would possibly be fine in a regular comic where I'm reading the entire thing in one sitting, but this twist is loving terrible for a once page a week format. There are way too many filler panels. If they just wrote this like a comic book instead of a webcomic maybe they'd actually have a decent story to tell. But now it's just filler filler filler oh yeah here's a panel of story.
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Jan 30, 2018 18:34
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Nuns with Guns posted:They just farted around in Patrick's brain for 30 pages. We learned his tragic history that could be replaced with TV static and nothing worthwhile would be lost. Almost 30 pages of non-story with 1-4 panels of actual plot. This comic sucks.
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Feb 13, 2018 17:46
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Like normally a chapter should end with a question answered, not leave you with even more unanswered questions. We came into this chapter asking "What is the Conspiracy?" and now are leaving with "Why was her teacher jumping around Patrick's mind?" "Who is Patrick's dog-killing mother?" "Why'd we have to go through multiple pages of young Patrick only to sum up the interesting part of his life into one page?" "Why does everyone have mindscapes?" And to top it off, they didn't even answer the original question.
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Feb 13, 2018 19:10
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The chapter before this was the one with the professor and her talking for months for no reason whatsoever too. This story has no plot and the author has no idea how to write one.
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Feb 16, 2018 21:57
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So does her super healing not prevent comas?
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Feb 22, 2018 07:19
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More like The Finer Arts > Batman's Shameful Secret > Strong Female Protagonist: More Issues Than the Actual Comic!
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Mar 7, 2018 17:01
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What was the build-up with the shadows for? Did they just finish watching The Last Jedi or something? Like this comic has no pay-off at this point. It's bad; plain bad.
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Apr 4, 2018 09:13
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Needs her saying "Quiet, quiet you!"
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Apr 14, 2018 04:25
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Axe-man posted:Going to guess there is no point to this. Strong Female Protagonist: Going to guess there is no point to this.
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Apr 14, 2018 17:06
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Strong Female Protagonist: A loving awful webcomic that we can't look away from.
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Thanks to Fister Roboto for coming up with the original idea (panel 3), and Discendo Vox for suggesting the "hurr". You can blame me for the rest.
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I was going to photoshop a fleshlight or dildo into her hands and make some more stupid sex jokes but I'd be putting more effort into their webcomic than they do.  Also why does the mom have a permanent racoon mask over her eyes?
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Flesh Forge posted:Seriously I think he's reading this thread Patrick will look into her mind and only see Clevin.
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Apr 17, 2018 18:14
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If she ends up killing herself I'm going to scream.
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Apr 23, 2018 18:36
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Flesh Forge posted:Wonder what would happen if Max Power sprinkled his magical glitter dust on that particular character Clevin
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Apr 30, 2018 17:57
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pospysyl posted:Not only have the last two pages had some of the worst dialogue I've ever read, they're also boring. This and the table conversation with the professor that went nowhere make me wonder if a lobotomy would be better than reading this garbage.
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May 1, 2018 19:46
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This is loving stupid. This entire sequence of events is so poorly set up I'm almost certain these panels were drawn a hour before it was uploaded.
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May 8, 2018 23:42
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WHAT IN THE FLYING gently caress WAS THAT PAGE?! What in the bloody hell is this chapter even trying to convey at this point? She's just non-chantey staring at some horrible tragedy like it's a pile of gold, she looks like she isn't even looking at the same thing as him.
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loving hell this comic seems to outdo itself in terms of shittiness.
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May 22, 2018 17:21
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pospysyl posted:Clevin's just another incel whose murders could have been prevented if his crush agreed to his pasta. 
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May 26, 2018 10:08
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Dawgstar posted:So, wait, Allison turns Patrick down and then says she loves him? Jeebus. It's almost as if the speech bubbles are written 10 seconds before their self-imposed deadline.
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quote:"You've been killing me since the moment we first met" I was thinking that that line was meaning that Allison did broke his brain, but knowing this comic it literally means that Allison and Patrick were meant to be. I really wish I could forget this shithole comic existed, but the fact that people paid money for this poo poo depresses me to no end. 
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TheHan posted:I wonder how the print version of this reads, the pacing has gotta be shambles. Hopefully the people who buy this in stores will be only as nasty as we are in their critiques; I know I'd be a lot more pissed at this comic if I paid actual money for it.
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