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Agree with the common tropes (I recently watched ABC's The Quest, and it felt similar to the "intro" to that show wherein the exposition is a character leading another through a town and talking, which isn't bad, just common). I guess my biggest gripe would be (I am sorry) the name "The Shadow". It doesn't draw me in, and picking up a book with that title might make me hesitate to read it because the name has been used quite a bit. I am trying to figure out the time period a bit. Character says things like "Nope" which makes it feel more modern... if you want it to feel older, maybe look for those type of words and modify them. Overall, (this is good news) it makes me feel like I want to know what will happen next, and what the real story is. Kudos!
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