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So I've written a story that I would like to submit (somewhere, anywhere), but I worry there is still something wrong with it. Be it characters, pacing, or simply the general tone of the piece. Synopsis: A man stumbles home, critically injured and awakes in the hospital feeling mysteriously well. His doctor and fiancee reassure him, but he wonders if it might have been supernatural. Thank you to anyone reading. Link to gDoc
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Thank you so much for the honesty. I felt the premise was possible, but I'm glad to hear how poorly I was/am going about it. You're right, the piece is ridiculous. I think a line by line won't be necessary (unless there's bigger crime I should be yelled at for) because it sounds like I should deconstruct the entire thing back down to the simplest of sentences, rework the 'characters' making them actual characters, then make the drat story character-driven.
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Oct 13, 2014 19:29
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