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Dec 22, 2010
Just a few typos I noticed:

Genocyber posted:

I underestimated how much work it is to transcribe all the diglogue so I got kind of swamped.
I think that's meant to say dialogue

Genocyber posted:

Put him down! Look around you! This is no common, destruction, Rajiv. Until we learn what happened here, we had best tread lightly.
Spare comma here

Genocyber posted:

And so we cut away to our new location, the Sky Goal.
... I assume this is meant to say 'Gaol'?

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