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I've got a shadowrun Choose your own adventure story going, and I wanted to share some art from it to get help to improve I don't normally draw women, and I'm worried I'm not doing it right, or that there are things I could be improving a lot on.    
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Hey I've been scouring the forums, and the next at large for advice on my comic, and help in general. I'm a new artist, I started drawing about 18 months ago, but I didn't start taking it seriously until december, when I started spending an hour or two doing studies every day. I've fallen off that wagon a bit, because I learned that taking a break when doing intense practice is actually really helpful. My webcomic is in my avatar, but I have the latest page here, and was wondering if I could get some critique or feedback? I'm pretty thick skinned, and can handle it. Though in my experience people who say that generally can't I really can, and every piece of advice I got from a new artist has helped me grow so much. I'm crossposting this to the comic art thread as well, so yeah! Let me know what you think! Specific criticism I'm looking for (besides general things that you think I might be missing entirely!) Ways I can tighten up the style I'm going for, whether the textured canvas works well or not, thoughts on the textured multi-colored lines. Brushes that might do the same thing or better! The one on the left is the size I upload at, and the size on the right is my original working size.  
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DickButt Shitlord posted:? That was something I really struggled with for awhile, and I think I've been doing better grounding my characters, from the last two weeks here's some more recent stuff I've been trying. I've grounded them more, but definitely do a mix of featureless voided and grounded. I tell myself "Oh it's just a wall" but honestly, I need to do more to ground them. Here's some stuff from the past two weeks.     If you click the blue link in my avatar, you can see all of them if you want to see more, people I think tend to be really polite, so they don't want to point out a lot of the glaring flaws, but I'm always happy to here more on how I can improve.
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