CRITIQUE REQUEST: An advice post gone off the wall. [944 Words]

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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Creative Convention > CRITIQUE REQUEST: An advice post gone off the wall. [944 Words]

Killer-of-Lawyers: Apr 22, 2008; THUNDERDOME LOSER 2020

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DC-ZGpLqGbKaD935VfAcga9mssx8O46fdpvAgtkyaBE/edit?usp=sharing

Here you go, it's late/early, but I decided to give it a read over and do a little line by line. Hope it helps!

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Killer-of-Lawyers: Apr 22, 2008; THUNDERDOME LOSER 2020

SkaAndScreenplays posted:

Thanks for the critique...unfortunately the comments aren't showing. Trying to figure out why.

Might be closing this due to posting it elsewhere. I realized I kind of spammed a few threads with it and feel like a stupid newbie about it.

It's a fresh document, and I just had someone else check to make sure they could see it. Sorry.

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