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It's not good. You have been working on this in some form or another for six years and there's no excuse to still have these technical issues. Don't shoot coverage for a conversation as the sun is setting: it won't match what you shot an hour earlier. Give a listen to the audio before you release your show: many lines are completely inaudible for no reason (S2E3 9:30 onward). Write interesting scenes where there are stakes or humor or at least interesting visuals. This is just sitting around in basements/bars and mumbling. None of the characters or relationships are interesting enough to carry this kind of show. None of the actors are talented enough to pull off comedy (I'm sorry, but they're not). I think you and your buddies made a show for you and your buddies.
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