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Morning Bell
Feb 23, 2006

Illegal Hen
Toxxing 5k. Have short story first drafts to re-write and a couple of ideas to play with.

I failed May's long walk because I made my word limit but went overseas on vacation and forgot to post on the internet about it. Locking myself in my room and refusing to go outside for a month to avoid this happening again.

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Morning Bell
Feb 23, 2006

Illegal Hen
Might as well do this now - 6544 words so far, goal met.

2nd draft (all written this month), magical realism (?) piece:


1st draft, fresh, fantasy:


Would anybody be interested in swapping crits? I'd love a crit of the second-draft piece, since I know the next draft needs a lot of change but I'm too close to the story to see where. Am happy to swap and crit a long-rear end story in return.

Morning Bell
Feb 23, 2006

Illegal Hen
Thank you, painted bird!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z7X7JYrfarFlWRmUTfS6-BBL5YxNKoQ2V7wU4PWhT6I/edit?usp=sharing

Hit 'request access' and I'll grant - don't want to make it public since I plan to send it off to a couple of mags once it's eventually done.

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